Editing Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter4

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"......This is overdone. The work of a painter without a discerning eye."
 
"......This is overdone. The work of a painter without a discerning eye."
   
Kamito muttered that and Ellis who had walked around turned towards him.
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Kamito muttered that and Ellis who had walked around turned around.
   
 
"It's you who lacks appreciation. Her beauty wasn't like that."
 
"It's you who lacks appreciation. Her beauty wasn't like that."
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Kamito turned towards Est and the others.
 
Kamito turned towards Est and the others.
   
"With that, I'll also be doing the purification – hey, Owaa!"
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"With that, I'll also be doing the purification – hey, owaa!"
   
 
""""Why are you so soft on Est!""""
 
""""Why are you so soft on Est!""""

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