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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
 
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A few hours after the annihilation spirit's attack.
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A few hours after the destruction spirit's attack.
   
The Belphal-class flying ship, repaired by the engineering team, landed in the sacred land of the Wind Elemental Lord.
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The Bellfahle-class flying ship, repaired by the engineering team, landed in the sacred land of the Wind Elemental Lord.
   
 
"Ah, I can see the island!"
 
"Ah, I can see the island!"
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On the deck, Rinslet seemed to be in a good mood and pointed at the island.
 
On the deck, Rinslet seemed to be in a good mood and pointed at the island.
   
The pure and high-spirited figure of this young highborn lady was cute.
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The pure and high-spirited figure of this ojou-sama was cute.
   
 
"Do-Don't say it so loudly. It's embarrassing."
 
"Do-Don't say it so loudly. It's embarrassing."
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Between the thick clouds and surrounded by a steep mountain range was a floating island.
 
Between the thick clouds and surrounded by a steep mountain range was a floating island.
   
Ragna Ys – even within Astral Zero, it was one of the most important of the sacred lands.
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«Ragna Ys» – even within Astral Zero, it is one of the most important of the sacred lands.
   
 
"Restia is there......"
 
"Restia is there......"
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Upon seeing the battered condition of the flying ship, all the ship mechanics held their heads.
 
Upon seeing the battered condition of the flying ship, all the ship mechanics held their heads.
   
They transferred at the port into the Divine Ritual Institute's prepared horse-drawn carriages.
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They transferred at the port into the «Divine Ritual Institute»'s prepared horse-driven carriages.
   
Because horse-drawn carriages were meant for four people, it was a little tight with six. Est went as a sword but that only freed up one space.
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Because horse-driven carriages were meant for four people, it was a little tight with six. Est went as a sword but that only freed up one space.
   
During the horse-drawn carriage's bumpy ride, he had felt Rinslet's breasts. Kamito quickly separated himself from her but it was really tight.
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During the horse-driven carriage's bumpy ride, he had felt Rinslet's breasts. Kamito quickly separated himself from her but it was really tight.
   
 
"Ka-Kamito-san......you're perverted."
 
"Ka-Kamito-san......you're perverted."
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For some reason, she was muttering to herself with teary eyes.
 
For some reason, she was muttering to herself with teary eyes.
   
The horse-drawn carriage continued to the opening ceremony's castle.
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The horse-driven carriage continued to the {{Furigana|opening ritual|ceremony|margin=12}}'s castle.
   
 
While pointing at various things outside the window, Claire acted as a guide.
 
While pointing at various things outside the window, Claire acted as a guide.
   
"The floating island Ragna Ys is one of the five sacred lands, the sacred land of the Wind Elemental Lord. The <!-- im guessing she referes to the first blade dance her?-->Blade Dance was held here 74 years ago."
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"The floating island «Ragna Ys» is one of the five sacred lands, the sacred land of the Wind Elemental Lord. The <!-- im guessing she referes to the first blade dance her?-->Blade Dance was held here 74 years ago."
   
By the way, the Blade Dance three years ago had been held in the Fire Elemental Lord's territory at Fire Mountain city. There was no rule as to where the Blade Dance would be held as it was decided by oracles received by the Queens.
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By the way, the Blade Dance three years ago had been held in the fire Elemental Lord's territory at Fire Mountain city. There was no rule as to where the Blade Dance would be held as it was decided by oracles received by the Queens.
   
 
"And the castle in the center is a historic ruin from a mystical age."
 
"And the castle in the center is a historic ruin from a mystical age."
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"So that's where we're lodging, huh?"
 
"So that's where we're lodging, huh?"
   
"Yes, it is an unequaled opportunity. Normally the Divine Ritual Institute would never allow anyone except princess maidens to enter. Which reminds me, have you been there before, Fianna?"
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"Yes, it is an unequaled opportunity. Normally the «Divine Ritual Institute» would never allow anyone except princess maidens to enter. Which reminds me, have you been there before, Fianna?"
   
"Yes, but just once. I normally remained at the Fire Elemental Lord's shrine."
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"Yes, but just once. I normally remained at the fire Elemental Lord's shrine."
   
 
"......The Elemental Lord's true shrine. I'm a little nervous."
 
"......The Elemental Lord's true shrine. I'm a little nervous."
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There were no signs of people on the paved road.
 
There were no signs of people on the paved road.
   
The ones invited to the opening ceremony were the Five Great Elemental Lords and the Queens that serve them, the elementalist representatives and the uppercrust nobility only. The entrance of others was not permitted and could provoke the beginning of a real war.
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The ones invited to the opening ceremony were the Five Great Elemental Lords and the Queens that serve them, the elementalist representatives and the uppercrust nobility only. The entrance of others was not permitted and may have provoked the beginning of a real war.
   
 
"Are the king and queen of the Empire not coming?"
 
"Are the king and queen of the Empire not coming?"
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"......S-Sorry."
 
"......S-Sorry."
   
Fianna had been named the “Lost Queen” after she lost her spirit contracting powers despite being a Queen candidate and consequently was shunned by the king and queen.
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Fianna had been named the «Lost Queen» after she lost her spirit contracting powers despite being a Queen candidate and consequently was shunned by the king and queen.
   
 
Speaking about the king and queen to her may have been insensitive of him.
 
Speaking about the king and queen to her may have been insensitive of him.
   
"I don't mind. To begin with, our relationship wasn't that good and not returning to the Divine Ritual Institute almost got me disowned. I have no intention of clinging to my title as the second princess and even if I'm removed from the monarchy line–"
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"I don't mind. To begin with, our relationship wasn't that good and not returning to the «Divine Ritual Institute» almost got me disowned. I have no intention of clinging to my title as the second princess and even if I'm removed from the monarchy line–"
   
 
And then Fianna stopped talking.
 
And then Fianna stopped talking.
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Of course, that family of nobles didn't really exist. It was just a family created on paper.
 
Of course, that family of nobles didn't really exist. It was just a family created on paper.
   
Kamito had no known family name. Any vague memories he had of his parents when he was young had been overwritten with the experiences at the Instructional School.
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Kamito had no known family name. Any vague memories he had of his parents when he was young had been overwritten with the experiences at the «Instructional School».
   
 
The one who had been by the young Kamito's side was the darkness spirit – only Restia.
 
The one who had been by the young Kamito's side was the darkness spirit – only Restia.
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Possibly–
 
Possibly–
   
(I wonder if I could call them family......)
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''I wonder if I could call them family......''
   
 
Kamito recalled the other girls at the facility.
 
Kamito recalled the other girls at the facility.
   
The other two girls in his tactical team at the Instructional School.
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The other two girls in his tactical team at the «Instructional School».
   
 
They didn't know each others' real names and it wasn't a relationship between comrades.
 
They didn't know each others' real names and it wasn't a relationship between comrades.
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And that girl that was attached to him and called him nii-sama.
 
And that girl that was attached to him and called him nii-sama.
   
(......The militarized spirit elementalist, Muir Alenstarl.)
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''......The military-use elementalist, Muir Alenstarl.''
   
Four years ago. Ever since the facility had been destroyed in the flame spirit's attack, Kamito had lost track of where she was. He had heard the greater half of the orphans there were taken in for protection by the Empire, but there were sure to be others like Jio Inzagi who had used the chaos of the institution's destruction to escape.
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Four years ago. Ever since the facility had been destroyed in the flame spirit's attack, Kamito had lost track of where she was. He had heard the greater half of the orphans there were taken in for protection by the Empire but there were sure to be others like Jio Inzagi who had used the chaos of the institution's destruction to escape.
   
 
He wondered if his remembering them was because of that dream he had–
 
He wondered if his remembering them was because of that dream he had–
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(......It's a good thing we haven't run into that Dragon Princess.)
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''......It's a good thing we haven't run into that Dragon Princess.''
   
 
Relieved, he descended from the horse-drawn carriage and,
 
Relieved, he descended from the horse-drawn carriage and,
   
"We have been awaiting your arrival, princess maidens who have come to entertain the Elemental Lords."
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"We have been awaiting your arrival. Princess maidens who have come to entertain the Elemental Lords."
   
Inside the gate, a group of girls in priestess garb greeted them.
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Inside the gate, a group of miko garment-wearing girls greeted them.
   
"They are the apprentices of the Divine Ritual Institute. My juniors."
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"They are the apprentices of the «Divine Ritual Institute». My kouhais."
   
Fianna whispered into his ear.
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Fianna whispered that into his ear.
   
 
"While you are staying here, we will be in your care for instruction in femininity."
 
"While you are staying here, we will be in your care for instruction in femininity."
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......Kamito said his thoughts out loud without thinking.
 
......Kamito said his thoughts out loud without thinking.
   
(......Uwa, I messed up!)
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''......Uwa, I messed up!''
   
 
"Wh-wh-wh-what are you sa-sa-sa-saying, you perverted slave spirit!"
 
"Wh-wh-wh-what are you sa-sa-sa-saying, you perverted slave spirit!"
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"Ka-Kamito-san likes those kinds of things, it seems......"
 
"Ka-Kamito-san likes those kinds of things, it seems......"
   
"Wh-What do you think the sacred garments are!"
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"Wh-What do you think the holy garments are!"
   
"I wonder if I still have my sacred garments from when I was in the Divine Ritual Institute?"
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"I wonder if I still have my holy garments from when I was in the «Holy Ritual Institute»?"
   
The three young ladies whispered amongst themselves.
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The three ojou-samas whispered amongst themselves.
   
 
"So, Kamito-sama, whose figure did you imagine?"
 
"So, Kamito-sama, whose figure did you imagine?"
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Beautiful arches with a high ceiling. A carpet was spread on the ground through a pillared corridor up to a door that led further in.
 
Beautiful arches with a high ceiling. A carpet was spread on the ground through a pillared corridor up to a door that led further in.
   
The lighting was provided not by lamps or spirit stones, but by small floating light spirits.
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The lighting was provided not by lamps or spirit stones but by small floating light spirits.
   
 
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Even if it was called a relic of the mythical age, several thousand years of repeated reconstruction and remodeling had left few traces of things from that time long ago. The sole remaining traces were sculptures hidden by stone pillars.
 
Even if it was called a relic of the mythical age, several thousand years of repeated reconstruction and remodeling had left few traces of things from that time long ago. The sole remaining traces were sculptures hidden by stone pillars.
   
Along the pillared corridor's walls were colorful illustrations. These were at best the remnants of a few hundred years and the motifs were Queens that had left their name in history as well as Blade Dance winners.
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Along the pillared corridor's walls were colorful illustrations. These were at best the remnants of a few hundred years and the motifs were Queens that had left their name in history as well as «Blade Dance» winners.
   
 
"Hm?"
 
"Hm?"
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The strongest blade dancer – Ren Ashbell.
 
The strongest blade dancer – Ren Ashbell.
   
Wrapped in the strange garments of a foreign country, with an ominous demonic blade of darkness in her left hand.
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Wrapped in the strange garments of foreign country, with an ominous demonic blade of darkness in her left hand.
   
That blade in her left hand was the darkness spirit, Restia's elemental waffe, Vorpal Sword.
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That blade in her left hand was the darkness spirit, Restia's elemental waffe «{{Furigana|The Sword That Pierces Truth|Vorpal Sword|margin=12}}».
   
 
Bewitching black hair. Pearly white cheeks.
 
Bewitching black hair. Pearly white cheeks.
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Following the princess maidens through the large castle, they finally arrived at their rooms.
 
Following the princess maidens through the large castle, they finally arrived at their rooms.
   
"Empire representatives Team Scarlet, your room is over here. If you would like to eat, use something or anything else, please do not hesitate to do so."
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"Empire representatives «Team Scarlet», your room is over here. If you would like to eat, use something or anything else, please do not hesitate to do so."
   
 
"Wait a second, am I in the same room?"
 
"Wait a second, am I in the same room?"
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"Y-Yes, it is an obvious requirement!"
 
"Y-Yes, it is an obvious requirement!"
   
The young ladies said in high-pitched voices.
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The ojou-samas said in high-pitched voices.
   
 
"Fufu, that's a pity."
 
"Fufu, that's a pity."
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"Being able to do the purification ceremony together is a sign of trust!"
 
"Being able to do the purification ceremony together is a sign of trust!"
   
The three young ladies all agreed with each other.
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The three ojou-samas all agreed with each other.
   
 
"No, you guys are exaggerating......"
 
"No, you guys are exaggerating......"
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The maid Carol cleared her throat with furrowed brows.
 
The maid Carol cleared her throat with furrowed brows.
   
"To be clear, the ladies simply want to show Kamito their new swimsuits–"
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"To be clear, the ojou-samas simply want to show Kamito their new swimsuits–"
   
 
""""Carol!""""
 
""""Carol!""""
   
The collective voice of the young ladies.
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The collective voice of the ojou-samas.
   
 
"What is it, exactly......"
 
"What is it, exactly......"
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Being looked at by Est's mysterious pupils, Kamito gulped.
 
Being looked at by Est's mysterious pupils, Kamito gulped.
   
(I did something bad to Est this morning so......)
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''I did something bad to Est this morning so......''
   
 
It seemed like Est wasn't mad anymore but–
 
It seemed like Est wasn't mad anymore but–
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""""Why are you so soft on Est!""""
 
""""Why are you so soft on Est!""""
   
Four people's luggage flew to his face.
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Four peoples' luggage flew to his face.
   
 
......It seems like we have no problems with teamwork.
 
......It seems like we have no problems with teamwork.
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......In Claire and the others' room, there had even been a fireplace and chandelier.
 
......In Claire and the others' room, there had even been a fireplace and chandelier.
   
Rather than a room, this was closer to a storage room.
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Rather than a room, this was closer to a storage.
   
"The Divine Ritual Institute decided this."
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"The «Divine Ritual Institute» decided this."
   
 
The princess maiden cleared her throat.
 
The princess maiden cleared her throat.
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......It seemed like she was being openly cold towards Kamito.
 
......It seemed like she was being openly cold towards Kamito.
   
(......Well, it can't be helped, I guess.)
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''......Well, it can't be helped, I guess.''
   
The Divine Ritual Institute was, like the academy, far removed from the presence of men.
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The «Divine Ritual Institute» was, like the academy, far removed from the presence of men.
   
 
"Does this room not have a light?"
 
"Does this room not have a light?"
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He had left Est at the girls' room so he had to clean the room by himself.
 
He had left Est at the girls' room so he had to clean the room by himself.
   
(......Now that I think about it, it's about time to eat.)
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''......Now that I think about it, it's about time to eat.''
   
 
Other than the black tea he drank on the flying ship, he had not eaten anything since that morning.
 
Other than the black tea he drank on the flying ship, he had not eaten anything since that morning.
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In the girls' room, the young ladies were changing into swimsuits from their uniforms.
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In the girls' room, the ojou-samas were changing into swimsuits from their uniforms.
   
 
Smooth, young skin. Bewitching body lines.
 
Smooth, young skin. Bewitching body lines.
   
They were beautiful girls of equally outstanding proportions.
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They were bishoujos of equally outstanding proportions.
   
 
In the corner was Claire who felt that she had lost.
 
In the corner was Claire who felt that she had lost.
   
(......Wh-What, it's not just me!)
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''......Wh-What, it's not just me!''
   
 
......The slightly present chest.
 
......The slightly present chest.
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With a pink tip, it was like a budding flower.
 
With a pink tip, it was like a budding flower.
   
(Even though everybody else is growing properly......)
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''Even though everybody else is growing properly......''
   
 
She sighed as she watched the rest of the team getting changed.
 
She sighed as she watched the rest of the team getting changed.
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The only one it felt like she could win against was Est, but she was a spirit.
 
The only one it felt like she could win against was Est, but she was a spirit.
   
(Even Kamito wouldn't like this kind of small chest......)
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''Even Kamito wouldn't like this kind of small chest......''
   
 
While lightly rubbing the slight bumps–
 
While lightly rubbing the slight bumps–
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What appeared in Claire's mind was a scene from two months prior.
 
What appeared in Claire's mind was a scene from two months prior.
   
The time when she had first met Kamito at the lake in the Spirit Forest.
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The time when she had first met Kamito at the lake in the «Spirit Forest».
   
 
The words he had said when he had seen her bathing naked.
 
The words he had said when he had seen her bathing naked.
   
–I have no interest towards a kid's body, he had said.
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–I have no interest toward's a kid's body, he had said.
   
 
"......!"
 
"......!"
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Remembering it, her cheeks flushed red.
 
Remembering it, her cheeks flushed red.
   
Having a guy her age see her naked, that was of course her first time.
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Having a guy her age seeing her naked, that was of course her first time.
   
(......But thinking about it, it was only two months ago.)
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''......But thinking about it, it was only two months ago.''
   
 
Standing on one foot and slipping on her new swimsuit, Claire sighed.
 
Standing on one foot and slipping on her new swimsuit, Claire sighed.
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But ever since she had met Kamito, many things have happened.
 
But ever since she had met Kamito, many things have happened.
   
The showdown with Ellis at the academy. Fighting the rampaging militarized spirit.
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The showdown with Ellis at the academy. Fighting the rampant military spirit.
   
 
The cooking battle with the newly transferred Fianna. The mission at the mine.
 
The cooking battle with the newly transferred Fianna. The mission at the mine.
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–Until she met Kamito, she was always alone.
 
–Until she met Kamito, she was always alone.
   
(But I still don't really know anything about Kamito......)
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''But I still don't really know anything about Kamito......''
   
 
Dropping her panties onto the floor, she sank deep into thought.
 
Dropping her panties onto the floor, she sank deep into thought.
   
Even when she had asked about his family on the horse-drawn carriage, he had avoided the question.
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Even when she had asked about his family on the horse-driven carriage, he had avoided the question.
   
(It's not like I want to pry but–)
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''It's not like I want to pry but–''
   
 
The thing she still didn't know about Kamito was his connection with that darkness spirit girl.
 
The thing she still didn't know about Kamito was his connection with that darkness spirit girl.
   
She had given Claire the frenzied spirit and had been at the mine with Jio Inzagi for the purpose of unsealing the strategic-class militarized spirit Jormungandr.
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She had given Claire the frenzied spirit and had been at the mine with Jio Inzagi for the purpose of unsealing {{Furigana|the strategic-class military spirit|Jormungandr|margin=12}}.
   
 
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......She didn't like that.
 
......She didn't like that.
   
(At least tell your master, idiot......)
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''At least tell your master, idiot......''
   
 
While hiding her small chest with her hands, Claire pressed her lips together, displeased.
 
While hiding her small chest with her hands, Claire pressed her lips together, displeased.
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===Translation Notes===
 
===Translation Notes===
 
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