Editing Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter8

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Sighing in resignation, Kamito cast his sight downwards.
 
Sighing in resignation, Kamito cast his sight downwards.
   
“Est, do you want to get something?”
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“Est, do you want get something?”
   
 
He asked the sword-spirit girl holding a plate.
 
He asked the sword-spirit girl holding a plate.
   
 
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“I’d like fish next, Kamito.”
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“I’ll like fish next, Kamito.”
   
 
“Hn, you’re a good girl for not being picky. All the young ladies have unbalanced diets.”
 
“Hn, you’re a good girl for not being picky. All the young ladies have unbalanced diets.”
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What she was wearing was a brilliant pure-white dress. In contrast to Ellis’ gallant image, this was a very girlish dress arranged with plenty of frills.
 
What she was wearing was a brilliant pure-white dress. In contrast to Ellis’ gallant image, this was a very girlish dress arranged with plenty of frills.
   
“Ellis, yours suits you well too. It’s like you’re a princess and you look cute.”
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“Ellis, yours suit you well too. It’s like you’re a princess and you look cute.”
   
 
“Wh…”
 
“Wh…”
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She had such brilliantness that she overshadowed the surrounding girls that were dressed-up.
 
She had such brilliantness that she overshadowed the surrounding girls that were dressed-up.
   
She didn’t just fascinate Kamito. Everyone in the hall leaked out a breath of admiration.
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She didn’t just fascinated Kamito. Everyone in the hall leaked out a breath of admiration.
   
 
“As expected of Rubia-sama’s sister. She was born a beauty.”
 
“As expected of Rubia-sama’s sister. She was born a beauty.”
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It seemed like there were people who knew Claire’s lineage among the participants of the ball.
 
It seemed like there were people who knew Claire’s lineage among the participants of the ball.
   
Whispers of unrest were spreading like wild fire—
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Whispers of unrest was spreading like wild fire—
   
 
It was not that she couldn’t hear them, however, Claire stayed composed.
 
It was not that she couldn’t hear them, however, Claire stayed composed.

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