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His elbow suddenly touched something soft and gentle.
 
His elbow suddenly touched something soft and gentle.
   
(Also, wasn't there some sort of lovely sound just now...)
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''Also, wasn't there some sort of lovely sound just now...''
   
 
Kamito blinked, puzzled by what it was, he turned his gaze toward the sound.
 
Kamito blinked, puzzled by what it was, he turned his gaze toward the sound.
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Kamito froze, speechless.
 
Kamito froze, speechless.
   
Hidden under the blanket was not the sword spirit who liked to dress in the nude with thigh<!-- shouldn't it be knee? -->-high socks.
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Hidden under the blanket was not the blade spirit who liked to dress in the nude with thigh<!-- shouldn't it be knee? -->-high socks.
   
What he saw was pure white fur, and a pair of long ears that hung downwards.
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What he saw was pure white fur, and a pair of long big ears that hung downwards.
   
 
And dazzling pale gold hair –
 
And dazzling pale gold hair –
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"N-No, that's not right! I-I am Miss Bunny right now!"
 
"N-No, that's not right! I-I am Miss Bunny right now!"
   
Rinslet flushed red, embarrassed. The rabbit ears on her head twitched up.
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Rinslet flushed red, embarrassed. The rabbit ear on her head twitched up.
   
 
"I said, Rinslet –"
 
"I said, Rinslet –"
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Seeing the usually stubborn and self-conscious Rinslet wearing such an expression gave Kamito an indescribable feeling of adoration.
 
Seeing the usually stubborn and self-conscious Rinslet wearing such an expression gave Kamito an indescribable feeling of adoration.
   
(... Speaking of which, this outfit is too provoking, isn't it? It's practically blinding!)
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''... Speaking of which, this outfit is too provoking, isn't it? It's practically blinding!''
   
 
A closer look would reveal that –
 
A closer look would reveal that –
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There was puffy fur on both her hands and feet, and a tail-like a ball of fur hanging from behind.
 
There was puffy fur on both her hands and feet, and a tail-like a ball of fur hanging from behind.
   
The greatest draw of the entire outfit however, had to be the leather collar tied around her neck.
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The greatest draw of the entire outfit however, had to be the the leather collar tied around her neck.
   
 
The elegant, aristocratic, wealthy princess wearing that collar... the combination was enough to give people wrong thoughts.
 
The elegant, aristocratic, wealthy princess wearing that collar... the combination was enough to give people wrong thoughts.
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Ellis, who stood before him, was dressed like Rinslet in clothing that skirted the edge of modesty.
 
Ellis, who stood before him, was dressed like Rinslet in clothing that skirted the edge of modesty.
   
The only difference was that she wore dog ears instead of rabbit ones, and the fur on her hands was not white, but brown.
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The only difference was that she wore dog ears instead of rabbit ones, and the fur on her hands were not white, but brown.
   
 
The ears atop her head swung constantly as she moved.
 
The ears atop her head swung constantly as she moved.
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Tears glowed from the corners of her brown eyes, probably because of how ashamed she felt.
 
Tears glowed from the corners of her brown eyes, probably because of how ashamed she felt.
   
(... Now... what is the situation?)
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''... Now... what is the situation?''
   
 
... What on earth had happened? Why would the pure-hearted and rule-abiding Captain be dressed in such a dissolute manner?
 
... What on earth had happened? Why would the pure-hearted and rule-abiding Captain be dressed in such a dissolute manner?
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Ellis ignored Kamito's confusing reply.
 
Ellis ignored Kamito's confusing reply.
   
She cleared her throat with a cough, and pushed a small silver dining cart in from the corridor.
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She cleared her throat with a cough, and pushed a small silver dining car in from the corridor.
   
 
"Ah?"
 
"Ah?"
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"... Well, come have breakfast, I made these for you."
 
"... Well, come have breakfast, I made these for you."
   
There was a freshly prepared breakfast in the dining cart; the steam above it had not yet dispersed.
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There was a meal of freshly prepared breakfast in the dining car; the steam above it had not yet dispersed.
   
The dishes included – toast grilled to the perfection, thick French-style pumpkin soup, deliciously tender omelets, Caesar salad with added tuna, and last but not least for dessert, there was yogurt topped with strawberry jam.
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The dishes included – toast grilled to the perfect degree, thick French-style pumpkin soup, deliciously tender omelets, Caesar salad with added tuna, and last but not least for dessert, there was yogurt topped with strawberry jam.
   
 
At first glance, although these were not exactly high-class, one could tell that every dish had been prepared with meticulous care.
 
At first glance, although these were not exactly high-class, one could tell that every dish had been prepared with meticulous care.
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"Y-Yes, I prepared these in the tower's kitchen. Only because I did not want to forget my culinary skills, it wasn't specially made for you!"
 
"Y-Yes, I prepared these in the tower's kitchen. Only because I did not want to forget my culinary skills, it wasn't specially made for you!"
   
Ellis looked away, a look of embarrassment suddenly crept across her face as she bent down beside Kamito.
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Ellis looked away, a look of embarrassment suddenly creeped across her face as she bent down beside Kamito.
   
 
"Captain, how can you do this!"
 
"Captain, how can you do this!"
   
Disregarding Rinslet's protests, she addressed Kamito.
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Disregarding Rinslet's protests, she addressed Kamito:
   
"I-I'll feed you... O-Open your mouth, come."
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"I-I'll feed you... O-open your mouth, come."
   
 
"T-There's no need! I can do it myself –"
 
"T-There's no need! I can do it myself –"
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"... S-Super delicious!"
 
"... S-Super delicious!"
   
The omelette was not only just sweet enough, but it was also so soft and fluffy that it melted in his mouth. This beyond-perfect masterpiece by Ellis confirmed the saying that the simpler the dish, the greater a test it was of the chef's skill.
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The omelette was not only just sweet enough, but it was also so soft and fluffy that it melted in his mouth. This beyond-perfect masterpiece by Ellis that confirmed the saying that the simpler the dish, the greater a test it was of the chef's skill.
   
 
"Is that really so! ... That's wonderful."
 
"Is that really so! ... That's wonderful."
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... That a maid could get her master to knead her shoulders for her was, in a certain sense, almost too much.
 
... That a maid could get her master to knead her shoulders for her was, in a certain sense, almost too much.
   
"Uh huh, you'd better thank me well. I am the heir to the Laurenfrost family. By right, I could never serve men in this way."
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"Uh huh, you'd better thank me well. I am the heir to the Laurenfrost clan. By right, I could never serve men in this way."
   
 
"W-Well..."
 
"W-Well..."
   
At this moment, Kamito suddenly felt two soft bumps against his back.
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At this moment , Kamito suddenly felt two soft bumps against his back.
   
 
"But... only for today... everyone..."
 
"But... only for today... everyone..."
   
Rinslet leant over and whispered into Kamito's ear.
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Rinslet leant over and whispered into Kamito's ear:
   
 
"Everyone can become... Kamito-san's house pet."
 
"Everyone can become... Kamito-san's house pet."
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... Why is it that he felt dizzy with confusion? Could it be another fever?
 
... Why is it that he felt dizzy with confusion? Could it be another fever?
   
(Hey, something's not right...)
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''Hey, something's not right...''
   
The temperature in the room started rising steadily.
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The temperature in the room had started rising steadily.
   
(Boom boom boom...)
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''Boom boom boom...''
   
 
"... Y-You guys... what mischief are you up to?"
 
"... Y-You guys... what mischief are you up to?"
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The door, which had not been closed, opened with a slam. Standing there was Claire with a burning-hot whip in her hand.
 
The door, which had not been closed, opened with a slam. Standing there was Claire with a burning-hot whip in her hand.
   
Her shoulders were trembling slightly in anger, and her bright red twintails pointed upright like flames.
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Her shoulders were trembling slightly in anger, and her two bright red ponytails pointed upright like flames.
   
 
However, what fixated Kamito's gaze was how she was dressed.
 
However, what fixated Kamito's gaze was how she was dressed.
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Claire blushed and crossed her knees shyly.
 
Claire blushed and crossed her knees shyly.
   
She then made a sound like a cat's low growl and glared at Kamito with tears in her eyes.
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She then made a sound like a cat's low growl, and glared at Kamito with tears in her eyes.
   
 
"Hmph, what... in any case you must feel that my chest is disappointingly small, isn't that right!?"
 
"Hmph, what... in any case you must feel that my chest is disappointingly small, isn't that right!?"
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Truthfully speaking, that set of clothing did indeed make Claire's chest seem even tinier.
 
Truthfully speaking, that set of clothing did indeed make Claire's chest seem even tinier.
   
Although that very same attire could bring out the valley between the breasts of Ellis and Rinslet, the undeniable fact of the matter was the sight of Claire wearing it only gave a person the impression of looking at a washboard.
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Although that very same attire could bring out the valley between the breasts of Ellis and Rinslet, the undeniable fact of the matter was, the sight of Claire wearing it only gave a person the impression of looking at a washboard.
   
 
Having said that, however, it did not reduce the charm she exuded. Her despondency over her chest size in fact made her look pitiful and delicate, which only increased her loveliness.
 
Having said that, however, it did not reduce the charm she exuded. Her despondency over her chest size in fact made her look pitiful and delicate, which only increased her loveliness.
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Kamito expressed his honest feelings.
 
Kamito expressed his honest feelings.
   
"A-A-Ah! W-What nonsense are you spouting!"
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"A-A-Ah! W-what nonsense are you spouting!"
   
 
Claire's cheeks grew redder and redder. She waved the whip in her hand, which made slapping noises.
 
Claire's cheeks grew redder and redder. She waved the whip in her hand, which made slapping noises.
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Blushing furiously, Claire awkwardly finished her explanation.
 
Blushing furiously, Claire awkwardly finished her explanation.
   
It was said that when an elementalist was in a poor mental state, they would have no way of summoning spirits. In more serious cases, they could sometimes even lose their princess maiden powers.
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It is said that when an elementalist is in a poor mental state, they will have no way of summoning spirits. In more serious cases, they may sometimes even lose their princess maiden powers.
   
For example, Fianna had been dealt a severe emotional blow four years ago and had been unable to use her power for a long period of time afterwards. When Scarlet was defeated by a demon spirit, Claire had becom grief-stricken, and suddenly found herself unable to summon Scarlet.
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For example, Fianna had been dealt a severe emotional blow four years ago, and had been unable to use her power for a long period of time afterwards. When Scarlet was defeated by demon spirits, Claire had also fallen into grief, and suddenly found herself unable to summon Scarlet.
   
If the blow from the loss of Est caused Kamito's heart to be dominated by negative feelings of hatred, the Gate between their hearts would truly close forever, never to open again. In truth, there were actually many princess maidens who had lost their status as elementalists because of such trauma to their souls.
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If the blow from the loss of Est caused Kamito's heart to be dominated by negative feelings of hatred, the «gate» between their hearts would truly close forever, never to open again. In truth, there were actually many princess maidens who had lost their status as elementalists because of such trauma to their souls.
   
(So simply put, they wanted to cheer me up – roughly this kind of intention?)
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''So simply put, they wanted to cheer me up – roughly this kind of intention?''
   
 
Evidently, he had made these ladies worry too much.
 
Evidently, he had made these ladies worry too much.
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Kamito asked.
 
Kamito asked.
   
"It was Fianna who told us this secret. Y-You rascal, you like this kind of thing, don't you?"
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"It's Fianna who told us this secret. Y-You rascal, you like this kind of thing, don't you?"
   
 
"That goddamn princess, huh..."
 
"That goddamn princess, huh..."
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Kamito gritted his teeth and muttered.
 
Kamito gritted his teeth and muttered.
   
... So that was it, these sexy animal costumes were all from Fianna's secret collection.
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... So that was it, these sexual animal costumes were all from Fianna's secret collection.
   
 
"That... can't be right, you don't like this look?"
 
"That... can't be right, you don't like this look?"
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All Kamito could do now was to believe in Est and await her return.
 
All Kamito could do now was to believe in Est and await her return.
   
If Kamito, her contractor, did not get out of his depression, the Gate would become impossible to open.
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If Kamito, her contractor, did not get out of his depression, the «gate» would become impossible to open.
   
 
Going outside to lift his spirits was perhaps a good idea.
 
Going outside to lift his spirits was perhaps a good idea.
   
"And on this floating island, there is even a Biblion managed by the Divine Ritual Institute."
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"And on this floating island, there is even a Biblion managed by the «Divine Ritual Institute»."
   
 
Rinslet added.
 
Rinslet added.
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"It has been said that a lot of antique-level information is archived within the sacred Biblion, information that cannot be found even in our library of seals. If Est is really the sealed spirit sealed within the ancient sacred sword, we might be able to find clues in those documents."
 
"It has been said that a lot of antique-level information is archived within the sacred Biblion, information that cannot be found even in our library of seals. If Est is really the sealed spirit sealed within the ancient sacred sword, we might be able to find clues in those documents."
   
"... If that's so, it sounds like it would be worth a look."
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"... If that is so, it sounds like it would be worth a look."
   
 
Anecdotes of the Demon King Killing Sacred Sword could be found across the continent, and although truth and fiction were mixed in them, considering that Est was such a powerful spirit, it would not be surprising to find a mention of her in one of the ancient records.
 
Anecdotes of the Demon King Killing Sacred Sword could be found across the continent, and although truth and fiction were mixed in them, considering that Est was such a powerful spirit, it would not be surprising to find a mention of her in one of the ancient records.
   
"It's decided, now hurry up and get ready to go!"
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"It is decided, now hurry up and get ready to go!"
   
 
"Mhmm, we can't be cheerful cooped up indoors all the time."
 
"Mhmm, we can't be cheerful cooped up indoors all the time."
   
"And being so close to the port, there are many shops set up here too."
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"And in a place so close to the port, there are many shops set up here too."
   
 
The three girls crowded together, all trying to take Kamito's arm.
 
The three girls crowded together, all trying to take Kamito's arm.
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Claire stretched like a cat as she walked, she and Kamito chatted while walking together.
 
Claire stretched like a cat as she walked, she and Kamito chatted while walking together.
   
Then, a cool refreshing breeze blew past, and Claire's tresses, tied into twintails, swayed in the wind.
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Then, a cool refreshing breeze blew past, and Claire's tresses, tied into two ponytails, swayed in the wind.
   
 
Hanging distantly in the sky, the floating island — Ragna Ys — should have stood no chance against fierce winds, but because this sacred land had the additional protection of the Wind Elemental Lord, it was in no danger of being blown away.
 
Hanging distantly in the sky, the floating island — Ragna Ys — should have stood no chance against fierce winds, but because this sacred land had the additional protection of the Wind Elemental Lord, it was in no danger of being blown away.
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While muttering, Kamito raised his head to the clear, vast blue sky.
 
While muttering, Kamito raised his head to the clear, vast blue sky.
   
At the moment, Fianna seemed to be searching for a way to destroy the Brand of Darkness imprinted on Kamito. She had been tirelessly visiting old acquaintances from her time at the Divine Ritual Institute.
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At the moment, Fianna seemed to be searching for a way to destroy the «Brand of Darkness» imprinted on Kamito. She had been tirelessly visiting old acquaintances from her time at the «Divine Ritual Institute».
   
 
"Later, let's buy some gifts to take back for Fianna, alright?"
 
"Later, let's buy some gifts to take back for Fianna, alright?"
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The slate street was lined with a wide variety of shops.
 
The slate street was lined with a wide variety of shops.
   
As they were only temporary stalls, the materials they were made of were not particularly impressive. However, the craftsmen or chefs working inside were top talents who had been recruited from many countries. The Blade Dance was an excellent opportunity to showcase the nation's prestige so countries tended to generously spend huge sums of money on it.
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As they were only temporary stalls, the materials they were made of were not particularly impressive. However, the craftsmen or chefs working inside were top talents who had been recruited from many countries. The Blade Dance was an excellent opportunity to showcase the nation's prestige so countries tend to generously spend huge sums of money on this.
   
The group walked to the heart of the shopping street and passed a group of tourists who had just alighted from a flying craft.
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The group walked to the heart of the shopping street, and passed a group of tourists who had just alighted from a flying craft.
   
"I didn't want to say this, but this place really is terribly crowded."
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"I didn't want to say this but this place really is terribly crowded."
   
 
"Men everywhere... I'm starting to feel dizzy."
 
"Men everywhere... I'm starting to feel dizzy."
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It seems that the ladies, having grown up in such a sheltered environment, were not used to such bustling places.
 
It seems that the ladies, having grown up in such a sheltered environment, were not used to such bustling places.
   
Furthermore, the city here was different from the academy town: men accounted for a greater proportion of the people here. Although they were among the best elementalists, here they immediately turned back into pure innocent girls. Whenever a man passing by quickly brushed shoulders with them, they would let out small squeals and press themselves tightly against Kamito.
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Furthermore, the city here was different from the college city: men accounted for a greater proportion of the people here. Although they were among the best elementalists, here they immediately turned back into pure innocent girls. Whenever a man, passing by quickly, brushed shoulders with them, they would let out small squeals and press themselves tightly against Kamito.
   
Claire was no exception. From the very start, she had repeatedly been sticking close to Kamito then immediately pulling away.
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Claire was no exception, from the very start, she had repeatedly been sticking close to Kamito then immediately pulling away.
   
 
Whenever she leaned against Kamito, she would move away blushing; when she next bumped into a strange passer-by, she would go back to Kamito.
 
Whenever she leaned against Kamito, she would move away blushing; when she next bumped into a strange passer-by, she would go back to Kamito.
   
(This foolish girl, what is she doing?)
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''This foolish girl, what is she doing?''
   
 
When Claire leaned into him again, Kamito quickly took her hand.
 
When Claire leaned into him again, Kamito quickly took her hand.
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The girls, all clinging to Kamito, began to quarrel.
 
The girls, all clinging to Kamito, began to quarrel.
   
They made such a scene that nearby passers-by started to whisper among themselves.
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They made such a scene that nearby passers-by started to whisper among themselves:
   
 
"Quick, look over there, three noble girls are serving that young man, wow." "That's because he's the rumored male elementalist, you know..."
 
"Quick, look over there, three noble girls are serving that young man, wow." "That's because he's the rumored male elementalist, you know..."
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"That's too wicked of him, to sink his fangs into those poor delicate girls." "But, take a look at those girls' expressions; they don't seem to hate him at all." "They must be under some kind of strange magic spell, of course."
 
"That's too wicked of him, to sink his fangs into those poor delicate girls." "But, take a look at those girls' expressions; they don't seem to hate him at all." "They must be under some kind of strange magic spell, of course."
   
(Well... this situation seems to have gotten a little worse...)
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''Well... this situation seems to have gotten a little worse...''
   
 
Kamito had long been used to hostility from strangers.
 
Kamito had long been used to hostility from strangers.
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They looked around in search of a shop they could have a cup of tea at. And then –
 
They looked around in search of a shop they could have a cup of tea at. And then –
   
"Kamito-san, look... there's a ''La Parfait'' shop over there!"
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"Kamito-san, look... there's a «La Parfait» shop over there!"
   
 
Rinslet pointed towards a chic-looking café across the road.
 
Rinslet pointed towards a chic-looking café across the road.
   
"Say, is that the famous ''La Parfait''!? I've always wanted to try their cakes."
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"Say, is that the famous «La Parfait»!? I've always wanted to try their cakes."
   
 
"If I remember correctly, this café is very popular throughout the empire... I-I'm kind of interested as well."
 
"If I remember correctly, this café is very popular throughout the empire... I-I'm kind of interested as well."
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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===
   
The ''La Parfait'' stall was almost fully packed, so much so that the group had to wait a little before being served.
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The «La Parfait» stall was almost fully packed, so much so that the group had to wait a little before being served.
   
 
While sitting at the entrance waiting to be served, Kamito examined the stall's decor. The horizontal beams of the ceiling were naturally bent like tree branches, Kamito was very appreciative of the warm atmosphere this unique wood imparted.
 
While sitting at the entrance waiting to be served, Kamito examined the stall's decor. The horizontal beams of the ceiling were naturally bent like tree branches, Kamito was very appreciative of the warm atmosphere this unique wood imparted.
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"I'm surprised this is such a relaxing place. When I heard you say it was one of the empire's most popular shops, I expected it to be much more posh and luxurious."
 
"I'm surprised this is such a relaxing place. When I heard you say it was one of the empire's most popular shops, I expected it to be much more posh and luxurious."
   
"This is only a temporary stall put up for the Blade Dance, so of course it won't be so well-decorated. Their regular shops are so good aristocratic ladies would be willing to hide their identities just to patronize the shop incognito."
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"This is only a temporary stall put up for the «Blade Dance», so of course it won't be so well-decorated. Their regular shops are so good aristocratic ladies would be willing to hide their identities just to patronize the shop incognito."
   
 
"Oh, so that's it... Hey, speaking of which, I'm not that loaded with cash..."
 
"Oh, so that's it... Hey, speaking of which, I'm not that loaded with cash..."
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The three of them had always bickered when in training, but in these situations, they were always in full understanding.
 
The three of them had always bickered when in training, but in these situations, they were always in full understanding.
   
Rinslet summoned a waitress, and one-by-one ordered those cakes and desserts with names that would make one accidentally bite their tongue.
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Rinslet summoned a waitress, and one-by-one ordered those cakes and desserts with names that would accidentally make one bite their tongue.
   
 
"– And lastly, I'd like four cups of black tea from the Laurenfrost area."
 
"– And lastly, I'd like four cups of black tea from the Laurenfrost area."
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"Please add a little whipped cream and honey to my tea, and if you could, add some floating marshmallows as well."
 
"Please add a little whipped cream and honey to my tea, and if you could, add some floating marshmallows as well."
   
"Uh... I'm sorry, esteemed guest, but our shop does not serve that kind of drink."
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"Uh... I'm sorry, esteemed guest, but our shop does not serve such a kind of drink."
   
 
"I-Is that so? Can you not make an excepti – oooh!"
 
"I-Is that so? Can you not make an excepti – oooh!"
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"Oh my god, have you no shame! I don't like saying such things, but the Fahrengart family must really have no class!"
 
"Oh my god, have you no shame! I don't like saying such things, but the Fahrengart family must really have no class!"
   
Rinslet was very particular about tea brewing and so forbade Ellis from randomly adding ingredients as she wished.
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Rinslet was very particular about tea brewing, and so forbade Ellis from randomly adding ingredients as she wished.
   
 
"So what if you're from the Laurenfrost family, it's just a countryside noble family with more land, that's all!"
 
"So what if you're from the Laurenfrost family, it's just a countryside noble family with more land, that's all!"
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Not long after, the dazzling array of desserts were delivered to their table.
 
Not long after, the dazzling array of desserts were delivered to their table.
   
Placed in silver containers, each of the cakes and pastries looked like an exquisite art piece.
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Placed in silver containers, each of the cakes and breads looked like an exquisite art piece.
   
 
At the sight of them, the anger of the two aristocratic girls vanished and was replaced by expressions of joy.
 
At the sight of them, the anger of the two aristocratic girls vanished and was replaced by expressions of joy.
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Kamito nodded – and then mused:
 
Kamito nodded – and then mused:
   
(... Partners will make one stronger – that probably refers to this feeling I'm having now.)
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''... Partners will make one stronger – that probably refers to this feeling I'm having now.''
   
 
Three years ago, the strongest blade dancers were indeed very swift and strong.
 
Three years ago, the strongest blade dancers were indeed very swift and strong.
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After losing Restia, he was left only with eternal despair.
 
After losing Restia, he was left only with eternal despair.
   
(Now, however, I have friends willing to support me.)
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''Now, however, I have friends willing to support me.''
   
 
So my heart will no longer shatter.
 
So my heart will no longer shatter.
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I will not sink into despair again.
 
I will not sink into despair again.
   
(... Thus far, Est has saved me many times.)
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''... Thus far, Est has saved me many times.''
   
 
Kamito clenched his fist on the table.
 
Kamito clenched his fist on the table.
   
(– So, it's my turn now. No doubt about it: I will save you.)
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''– So, it's my turn now. No doubt about it: I will save you.''
   
 
===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===
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This white building was made from a combination of the best-quality materials and cutting-edge technology. The huge construction covered the whole of the hill; one could appreciate its majesty even from outside of the floating island.
 
This white building was made from a combination of the best-quality materials and cutting-edge technology. The huge construction covered the whole of the hill; one could appreciate its majesty even from outside of the floating island.
   
It was not only the place where the wind spirits listened to the Elemental Lord's decrees to the sacred land, but also where princess maidens from the Divine Ritual Institute chosen by the various nations would practice their devotions. Therefore, even the nobility of the country would absolutely not be allowed to enter.
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It was not only the place where the wind spirits listened to the spirit king's decrees to the holy land, but also where princess maidens from the «Divine Ritual Institute» chosen by the various nations would practice their devotions. Therefore, even the nobility of the country would absolutely not be allowed to enter.
   
However, at that very moment time, there was a lady outside the gate shouting anxiously.
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However, at that very moment time, there was a lady outside the gate shouting anxiously:
   
 
"Please do me a favor! Grant me an audience with Reicha-sama–!"
 
"Please do me a favor! Grant me an audience with Reicha-sama–!"
   
She was individually separated from the team of five in order to work separately from Kamito – Fianna.
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She was individually seperated from the team of five in order to work separately from Kamito – Fianna.
   
 
Wearing a rare serious look, she pleaded with the guard standing at the gate.
 
Wearing a rare serious look, she pleaded with the guard standing at the gate.
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Her face clearly expressed her stubbornness.
 
Her face clearly expressed her stubbornness.
   
"Please withdraw. Our Divine Ritual Institute's gate will never open simply for any one, let alone getting an audience with Reicha-sama. Your requests will absolutely never be granted."
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"Please withdraw. Our «Divine Ritual Institute»'s gate will never open simply for any one, let alone getting an audience with Reicha-sama. Your requests will absolutely never be granted."
   
 
The guard uttered a statement she had probably repeated many times before.
 
The guard uttered a statement she had probably repeated many times before.
   
(... This is so infuriating! These people are as stubborn as ever!)
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''... This is so infuriating! These people are as stubborn as ever!''
   
 
Fianna cursed impatiently to herself.
 
Fianna cursed impatiently to herself.
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Having said that, she had in fact expected such a reaction from the start, because the person she wanted to see was not someone who would meet with just anybody.
 
Having said that, she had in fact expected such a reaction from the start, because the person she wanted to see was not someone who would meet with just anybody.
   
(If I could borrow her strength, it would certainly be enough to break the curse on Kamito. But...)
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''If I could borrow her strength, it would certainly be enough to break the curse on Kamito. But...''
   
 
The guard looked down at Fianna, not bothering to conceal her expression of contempt.
 
The guard looked down at Fianna, not bothering to conceal her expression of contempt.
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Evidently, she had not the slightest inclination to open the door.
 
Evidently, she had not the slightest inclination to open the door.
   
(... Well, I did know the reason ages ago.)
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''... Well, I did know the reason ages ago.''
   
 
Refusing to give up, Fianna bit down on her lip.
 
Refusing to give up, Fianna bit down on her lip.
   
The one she was thinking of was the Calamity Queen that had betrayed the Fire Elemental Lord – Rubia Elstein.
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The one she was thinking of was the Annihilation Spirit princess that had betrayed the Fire Elemental Lord – Rubia Elstein.
   
There had been high hopes placed on Fianna to be the successor, but the incident with Rubia had left indelible horrors in her heart, causing her to lose the power of summoning contracted spirits, and with that, her status as princess maiden.
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There had been high hopes placed on Fianna to be successor, but the incident with Rubia had left indelible horrors in her heart, causing her to lose the power of summoning contract spirits, and with that, her status as princess maiden.
   
And so Fianna Ray Ordesia became a lost princess maiden, thoroughly disappointing the people who had had great expectations of her and discrediting the Divine Ritual Institute.
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And so Fianna Ray Ordesia became a lost princess maiden, thoroughly disappointing the people who had had great expectations of her and discrediting the «Divine Ritual Institute».
   
(... You narrow-minded people who only know how to put in superficial effort really disgust me.)
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''... You narrow-minded people, who only know how to put in superficial effort, really disgust me.''
   
 
Even her own parents—The Areishia emperor and empress—and the various nobility were all no different.
 
Even her own parents—The Areishia emperor and empress—and the various nobility were all no different.
   
When Fianna was still the princess maiden successor, these people had flattered her in every possible way. Once she had lost her contracted spirit powers, however, they immediately scorned and disdained her, changing their attitudes faster than one could turn the page of a book.
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When Fianna was still the princess maiden successor, these people had flattered her in every possible way. Once she had lost her contract spirit powers however, they immediately scorned and disdained her, changing their attitudes faster than one could turn the page of a book.
   
Of course, not all of them were like that. It was just that the Divine Ritual Institute organization had decayed under the weight of its long history, and so indeed had a darker side.
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Of course, not all of them were like that. It was just that the «Divine Ritual Institute» organization had decayed under the weight of its long history, and so indeed had a darker side.
   
 
Seeing Fianna's stubborn refusal to leave, the guard shook her head and said:
 
Seeing Fianna's stubborn refusal to leave, the guard shook her head and said:
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She saw something stand at the doors – a magical wind spirit that looked like a winged lion.
 
She saw something stand at the doors – a magical wind spirit that looked like a winged lion.
   
It was a guardian spirit; it made contracts with not elementalists, but buildings. This very building, was in fact—the true sanctuary.
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It was a Guardian Spirit; it made contracts with not elementalists, but buildings. This very building, was in fact—the true sanctuary.
   
 
"It appears impossible to break through the front gate..."
 
"It appears impossible to break through the front gate..."
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This shining, beautiful sword, swallowed by a sludge-like nothingness, was gradually losing its light.
 
This shining, beautiful sword, swallowed by a sludge-like nothingness, was gradually losing its light.
   
(– How strange. What on earth is happening to me?)
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''– How strange. What on earth is happening to me?''
   
 
Nonetheless, this sword apparently still retained its self-awareness.
 
Nonetheless, this sword apparently still retained its self-awareness.
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Then – a harsh voice calling out her own name.
 
Then – a harsh voice calling out her own name.
   
(...K-Kamito!)
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''...K-Kamito!''
   
 
Her radiance all lost, the sword slowly sank in the bottomless darkness –
 
Her radiance all lost, the sword slowly sank in the bottomless darkness –

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