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"I never imagined that... under the Sanctuary, there are actually such enormous caves!"
 
"I never imagined that... under the Sanctuary, there are actually such enormous caves!"
   
"Yes, I don't think even the princess maidens at the Divine Ritual Institute know that these caves exist."
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"Yes, I don't think even the princess maidens at the «Divine Ritual Institute» know that these caves exist."
   
Holding the spirit crystal to light their path in one hand, Kamito made his way through the gigantic underground caves.
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Holding in one hand the spirit crystal to light their path, Kamito made his way through the gigantic underground caves.
   
 
These caves, made by unknown men, were practically big enough to contain the entire Grand Shrine.
 
These caves, made by unknown men, were practically big enough to contain the entire Grand Shrine.
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"Here, even the highest ranked princess maidens are ordered to stop, so I too don't know why she would know of these caves—"
 
"Here, even the highest ranked princess maidens are ordered to stop, so I too don't know why she would know of these caves—"
 
 
Right at that moment...
 
Right at that moment...
   
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No mistake about it – the one talking to Muir was indeed Ren Ashbell.
 
No mistake about it – the one talking to Muir was indeed Ren Ashbell.
   
—The very person who carved the Brand of Darkness on Kamito, and the very person responsible for the disappearance of Est.
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—The very person who carved the «Brand of Darkness» on Kamito, and the very person responsible for the disappearance of Est.
   
 
"Damn it..."
 
"Damn it..."
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She cleared her throat and removed a small stone from her bag.
 
She cleared her throat and removed a small stone from her bag.
   
A low-level thunder spirit was sealed within that spirit crystal. Although this type of spirit crystal was expensive, it was also not especially rare; its original purpose was to scare away wild forest creatures.
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A low-level «Thunder Spirit» was sealed within that spirit crystal. Although this type of spirit crystal was expensive, it was also not especially rare; its original purpose was to scare away wild forest creatures.
   
 
Claire put it on her white underclothes, and through the cloth gently massaged her chest.
 
Claire put it on her white underclothes, and through the cloth gently massaged her chest.
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The sharp tip of the stone rubbed against her chest painfully, but Claire told herself to be brave and bear it.
 
The sharp tip of the stone rubbed against her chest painfully, but Claire told herself to be brave and bear it.
   
She focused on her fingers, concentrating her divine power in the spirit crystal.
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She focused on her fingers, concentrating her Divine Power in the spirit crystal.
   
The normal way of using it would be to summon a burst of divine power into it, releasing the spirit sealed within. The trick to this method seemed to be to input divine power in a slow, more controlled manner, which required much more skill – however, this was child's play for an elementalist as talented as Claire.
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The normal way of using it would be to summon a burst of Divine Power into it, releasing the spirit sealed within. The trick to this method seemed to be to input Divine Power in a slow, more controlled manner, which would need much more skill – however, this was child's play for an elementalist as talented as Claire.
   
 
"Th-This will really enlarge my chest..? Aieeee!"
 
"Th-This will really enlarge my chest..? Aieeee!"
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Suddenly, an even stronger jolt of energy surged through her, causing Claire to tremble uncontrollably and lean her body backwards.
 
Suddenly, an even stronger jolt of energy surged through her, causing Claire to tremble uncontrollably and lean her body backwards.
   
(W-What now, I c-can't stop..!)
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''W-What now, I c-can't stop..!''
   
 
As the sweet pain coursed through her, Claire felt herself begin to lose consciousness.
 
As the sweet pain coursed through her, Claire felt herself begin to lose consciousness.
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Kamito walked along with Fianna while telling her of his dream earlier that day.
 
Kamito walked along with Fianna while telling her of his dream earlier that day.
   
That dream – in which Sacred Queen Areishia used the Demon Slaying Sacred Sword to vanquish the Demon King.
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That dream – in which Sacred Queen Areishia used the «Demon Slaying Sacred Sword» to vanquish the Demon King.
   
 
Kamito somehow felt that the contents of the dream might have had something to do with Est.
 
Kamito somehow felt that the contents of the dream might have had something to do with Est.
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Kamito only knew a little about these academic matters, but Fianna was once an outstanding princess maiden, so she was very knowledgeable in these areas.
 
Kamito only knew a little about these academic matters, but Fianna was once an outstanding princess maiden, so she was very knowledgeable in these areas.
   
"It's not unusual for elementalists and their contracted spirits to have a mental connection in their dreams. Especially when the Gate between them cannot be opened, such phenomenon will become even more common."
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"It's not unusual for elementalists and their contract spirits to have a mental connection in their dreams. Especially when the «gate» between them cannot be opened, such a phenomenon will become even more common."
   
 
As Fianna talked, she gestured with her index finger.
 
As Fianna talked, she gestured with her index finger.
   
"When I lost my connection to my contracted spirit, I would frequently dream of a knight charging forth on the battlefield."
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"When I lost my connection to my contract spirit, I would frequently dream of a knight charging forth on the battlefield."
   
The rider in her dream was probably the spirit Georgios she commanded. By the looks of it, even if the elementalist lost their power, the connection between the two did not break completely.
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The rider in her dream was probably the spirit «Georgios» she commanded. By the looks of it, even if the elementalist lost their power, the connection between the two did not break completely.
   
"That dream – you're saying it's part of Est's memory?"
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"That dream – you don't say it's part of Est's memory?"
   
 
If that were true, Est was really the true Demon Slayer Sacred Sword?
 
If that were true, Est was really the true Demon Slayer Sacred Sword?
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"Hee hee... Does that mean I'm the only one to share in Kamito's little secret?"
 
"Hee hee... Does that mean I'm the only one to share in Kamito's little secret?"
   
Fianna suddenly let slip a gleeful smile and clutched Kamito's arm tightly.
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Fianna suddenly let slip a gleeful smile, and clutched tightly at Kamito's arm.
   
 
"Hey, watch your step."
 
"Hey, watch your step."
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Nodding, Kamito bent to allow Fianna to get up.
 
Nodding, Kamito bent to allow Fianna to get up.
   
The sensation of her tender thighs on the back of his neck made Kamito's heart involuntarily leap into his throat – how he hoped she would not get mad at him because of that.
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The feel of her tender thighs on the back of his neck made Kamito's heart involuntarily leap into his throat – how he hoped she would not get mad at him because of that.
   
 
"S-Speaking of which... I really don't have to hide my face?"
 
"S-Speaking of which... I really don't have to hide my face?"
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At that moment, a princess maiden appeared in front of them and began walking towards them.
 
At that moment, a princess maiden appeared in front of them and began walking towards them.
   
"Ooh!?"
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"Ooh!?l
   
 
Kamito's heart jolted, and his facial expression hardened.
 
Kamito's heart jolted, and his facial expression hardened.
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Just as they were about to pass each other, she suddenly stopped before them and said:
 
Just as they were about to pass each other, she suddenly stopped before them and said:
   
"Pardon me, where are you headed?"
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"Please, where are you headed to?"
   
 
"To Reicha-sama's chambers. Reicha-sama says she's feeling unwell, so..."
 
"To Reicha-sama's chambers. Reicha-sama says she's feeling unwell, so..."
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"Wow... The bravery of the princess maiden really is something else. I was so scared my heart almost stopped "
 
"Wow... The bravery of the princess maiden really is something else. I was so scared my heart almost stopped "
   
For a male to enter the Divine Ritual Institute was absolutely unheard of. A rule of such importance had never been broken before.
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For a male to enter the «Divine Ritual Institute» was absolutely unheard of. A rule of such importance had never been broken before.
   
 
If they were to be caught, in the best case they would be executed, while in the worst case... Never mind, it was best not to think about it.
 
If they were to be caught, in the best case they would be executed, while in the worst case... Never mind, it was best not to think about it.
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– The pair reached the end of the lengthy corridor, where there were a set of grand doors decorated with intricate carvings.
 
– The pair reached the end of the lengthy corridor, where there were a set of grand doors decorated with intricate carvings.
   
The decor of this door was noticeably different to the other doors: several very pure and valuable spirit crystals were inlaid on the frame of the door.
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The decor of this door was noticeably different to the other doors: inlaid on the frame of the door were several very pure and valuable spirit crystals.
   
 
"... Uh... Fianna, may I ask a question?"
 
"... Uh... Fianna, may I ask a question?"
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Fianna shrugged her shoulders at Kamito naughtily.
 
Fianna shrugged her shoulders at Kamito naughtily.
   
"I've no choice... Which other princess maidens are of a higher status than I am, other than these ladies?"
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"I've no choice... Which other princess maidens are of a higher status than I am out there, other than these ladies?"
   
 
"Are you serious?"
 
"Are you serious?"
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The sight that greeted them was—
 
The sight that greeted them was—
   
A red carpet that stretched out straight before them and brightly glittering spirit crystals.
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A red carpet that stretched out straight before them, and brightly glittering spirit crystals.
   
This was a sacred space, filled with the aura of somber tranquility.
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This was a holy space, filled with the aura of somber tranquility.
   
 
A thin curtain hung at the far end of the room; behind that was the silhouette of a small slight figure.
 
A thin curtain hung at the far end of the room; behind that was the silhouette of a small slight figure.
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Reicha Alminas.
 
Reicha Alminas.
   
She was one of the Queens to have gained the honor of serving the five Elemental Lords.
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She was one of the «Queens» to have gained the honor of serving the five Elemental Lords.
   
 
There were only five Queens in the entire continent, and they were the most eminent of all princess maidens.
 
There were only five Queens in the entire continent, and they were the most eminent of all princess maidens.
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"Because... If I had, you wouldn't have come, would you Kamito?"
 
"Because... If I had, you wouldn't have come, would you Kamito?"
   
Kamito could not hide his conflicting feelings. Likewise, the girl seated beside him was also nervously averting her gaze and looked rather uneasy.
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Kamito could not hide his conflicting feelings. Likewise, the girl seated beside him was also nervously averting her gaze, and looked rather uneasy.
   
The girl had glossy black hair neatly done up in braids and cute eyes like that of a small animal.
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The girl had glossy black hair neatly done up in braids, and cute eyes like that of a small animal.
   
 
Dressed in bright red ritual clothing, she looked like a butterfly about to take flight.
 
Dressed in bright red ritual clothing, she looked like a butterfly about to take flight.
   
At fifteen, she was a year younger than Kamito. Like Rubia Elstein, she was one of Fianna's few close friends and confidantes while she was at the Divine Ritual Institute.
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At fifteen, she was a year younger than Kamito. Like Rubia Elstein, she was one of Fianna's few close friends and confidantes while she was at the «Divine Ritual Institute».
   
She served the Fire Elemental Lord – in other words, she had succeeded the Calamity Queen elementalist's position.
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She served the Fire Elemental Lord – in other words, she succeeded the Calamity Queen elementalist's position.
   
 
Kamito had already introduced himself, removed his disguise, and revealed that he was in truth male.
 
Kamito had already introduced himself, removed his disguise, and revealed that he was in truth male.
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The Fire Queen asked, turning to look at Kamito.
 
The Fire Queen asked, turning to look at Kamito.
   
"My sword spirit might have been trapped by this curse. Please save her, I beg you."
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"My blade spirit might have been trapped by this curse. Please save her, I beg you."
 
Kamito placed both his hands on the ground and pleaded with Reicha with all his heart.
 
Kamito placed both his hands on the ground and pleaded with Reicha with all his heart.
   
 
"That is a curse so strong that even I cannot break it. However, you have received the blessing of the Fire Elemental Lord; with that power, you can surely destroy even the harshest of curses."
 
"That is a curse so strong that even I cannot break it. However, you have received the blessing of the Fire Elemental Lord; with that power, you can surely destroy even the harshest of curses."
   
"You are right. If I use the Sacred Flames of Judgment, any curse will turn into smoke, that's true. But..."
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"You are right. If I use the «Sacred Flames of Judgment», any curse will turn into smoke, that's true. But..."
   
 
Reicha lowered her head and mumbled.
 
Reicha lowered her head and mumbled.
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It was only natural that she would hesitate.
 
It was only natural that she would hesitate.
   
Even on the behest of one of her best friends, Fianna, she was nevertheless a Queen who had to follow rules and do things by the book.
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Even on the behest of one of her best friends, Fianna, she was nevertheless a «Queen» who had to follow rules and do things by the book.
   
 
Using the Fire Elemental Lord's power for personal gains was an act that would never be condoned.
 
Using the Fire Elemental Lord's power for personal gains was an act that would never be condoned.
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"Because it is sempai's request, so... But only this once; I will not make this exception again."
 
"Because it is sempai's request, so... But only this once; I will not make this exception again."
   
The Fire Queen let out a sigh and nodded her head as if making a decision.
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The Fire Queen let out a sigh, and nodded her head as if making a decision.
   
 
===Part 6===
 
===Part 6===
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Reicha said with a genuine smile.
 
Reicha said with a genuine smile.
   
Her smile was full of charm and could easily mesmerize someone looking at it.
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Her smile was full of charm, and could easily mesmerize someone looking at it.
   
 
"Now, then, Kamito-sama, please remove your shirt."
 
"Now, then, Kamito-sama, please remove your shirt."
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Kamito nodded, and took off the thin tunic he was wearing under the princess maiden dress.
 
Kamito nodded, and took off the thin tunic he was wearing under the princess maiden dress.
   
The Brand of Darkness on his chest, positioned just above his heart, had turned into a pitch-black wound.
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The «Brand of Darkness» on his chest, positioned just above his heart, had turned into a pitch-black wound.
   
 
"Ahhh... T-That's really something...!"
 
"Ahhh... T-That's really something...!"
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"O supreme master of all earthly flames, our harsh judge and great warrior—
 
"O supreme master of all earthly flames, our harsh judge and great warrior—
   
These were the words of the prayer for a ritual dedicated to the Fire Elemental Lord.
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These were the words of the prayer for a ritual dedicated to the «Fire Elemental Lord».
   
 
Reicha's hair started blowing wildly as if by a hot gust of wind, and a bright white light shone at her fingertips.
 
Reicha's hair started blowing wildly as if by a hot gust of wind, and a bright white light shone at her fingertips.
   
"Sacred Flames of Judgment – redeem our sins and cleanse our filth—"
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"Sacred Flames of Judgment – redeem our sins and cleanse our filth—
   
 
The words coming from her thin pale lips were the highest level of spirit language, the High Ancient.
 
The words coming from her thin pale lips were the highest level of spirit language, the High Ancient.
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"Into ash and dust! Your flames can purify all darkness, burn away all curses!"
 
"Into ash and dust! Your flames can purify all darkness, burn away all curses!"
   
The Brand of Darkness imprinted on Kamito's chest suddenly started burning intensely.
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The «Brand of Darkness» imprinted on Kamito's chest suddenly started burning intensely.
   
 
"... – !"
 
"... – !"
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In his quickly fading awareness – Kamito felt a dull pain coming from his right hand.
 
In his quickly fading awareness – Kamito felt a dull pain coming from his right hand.
   
(– Could it be... Est's spirit mark...!?)
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''– Could it be... Est's spirit mark...!?''
   
 
Just as he saw, from the corner of his eye, his spirit mark began radiating a bright light—
 
Just as he saw, from the corner of his eye, his spirit mark began radiating a bright light—

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