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(Uwahwah, seriously, what am I doing!?)
 
(Uwahwah, seriously, what am I doing!?)
   
Due to her unintentionally bold behavior, Claire's face went completely red.
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Due to her unintentional bold behavior, Claire's face went completely red.
   
 
===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
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Taking a short break along the way, Kamito and Claire continued making their way through the forest and finally reached the destination.
 
Taking a short break along the way, Kamito and Claire continued making their way through the forest and finally reached the destination.
   
The fire spirit guiding them began to circle in one spot before some decrepit ruins.
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The fire spirit guiding them began to circle in ones spot before some decrepit ruins.
   
 
These ruins probably dated back to the distant past, legendary times when the mainland and Astral Zero were still uniform -- the mythical age when this shrine was still in use. The walls had virtually all collapsed, and the only reason why it still managed to maintain some of its original shape was very likely thanks to those stone pillars embedded in the ground.
 
These ruins probably dated back to the distant past, legendary times when the mainland and Astral Zero were still uniform -- the mythical age when this shrine was still in use. The walls had virtually all collapsed, and the only reason why it still managed to maintain some of its original shape was very likely thanks to those stone pillars embedded in the ground.
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Her red hair looked exceptionally seductive when wet.
 
Her red hair looked exceptionally seductive when wet.
   
Illuminated by the glow of the campfire, her supple body displayed beautifully gentle contours.
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Illuminated by the glow of the campfire, her supple body displayed beautiful gentle contours.
   
 
As her drenched uniform clung tightly to her skin, the lace patterns of her underwear became vaguely visible.
 
As her drenched uniform clung tightly to her skin, the lace patterns of her underwear became vaguely visible.
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"...Wha!?"
 
"...Wha!?"
   
Appearing before his eyes was a scene far too excessively stimulating for a boy of his age.
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Appearing before his eyes was a scene far too excessively stimulating for boy of his age.
   
 
Stripped of her uniform, Claire was only wearing a single article of underwear.
 
Stripped of her uniform, Claire was only wearing a single article of underwear.
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"A-Ah right, I got it..."
 
"A-Ah right, I got it..."
   
Glared at sharply, Kamito had no choice but to nod and agree.
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Glared at sharply, Kamito had no choice but nod and agree.
   
 
Perhaps due to Claire's seductive appearance, his mind was probably in a total state of shock.
 
Perhaps due to Claire's seductive appearance, his mind was probably in a total state of shock.
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"Kamito, stop taking action all on your own!"
 
"Kamito, stop taking action all on your own!"
   
Using Flametongue to burn away the trees in the forest, Claire arrived at the battlefield. She shuddered at the sight of the black knight, but instantly she understood the situation and circled around to a position where she could launch a pincer attack in concert with Kamito.
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Using Flametongue to burn away the tree in the forest, Claire arrived at the battlefield. She shuddered at the sight of the black knight, but instantly she understood the situation and circled around to a position where she could launch a pincer attack in concert with Kamito.
   
 
"Cough... The male elementalist, as well as the sister of the Calamity Queen..."
 
"Cough... The male elementalist, as well as the sister of the Calamity Queen..."
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Intense pain attacked his entire body. Unable to endure for but an instant, he lost consciousness in less than a second.
 
Intense pain attacked his entire body. Unable to endure for but an instant, he lost consciousness in less than a second.
   
Blown away flying by the exploding thunder and lightning, Kamito fell down the waterfall.
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Blown flying by the exploding thunder and lightning, Kamito fell down the waterfall.
   
 
"--Kamito!"
 
"--Kamito!"

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