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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
   
Buried in the ground, the fire spirit crystal was glowing red.
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Buried in the ground, the fire spirit ore was glowing red.
   
Kamito and Milla were hiding behind a rock, warming themselves. Unlike a campfire, a piece of spirit crystal with a sealed fire spirit did not generate flames or smoke, conveniently avoiding detection by others.
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Kamito and Milla were hiding behind a rock, warming themselves. Unlike a campfire, a piece of spirit ore with a sealed fire spirit did not generate flames or smoke, conveniently avoiding detection by others.
   
Normally they would have met up with Claire and the rest by now, but due to the dangers of the night forest, they could not continue marching recklessly.
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Normally they could have met up with Claire and the rest by now but due to the dangers of the night forest, they could not continue marching recklessly.
   
Kamito would have been fine alone but he was currently accompanied by a thirteen-year-old girl.
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Kamito would have been fine alone but now he was accompanied by a thirteen-year-old girl.
   
 
"Kamito, aren't you cold?"
 
"Kamito, aren't you cold?"
   
Returned to the form of a girl, Est tightly gripped his arm.
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Returning to the form of a girl, Est tightly gripped his arm.
   
 
"Ah, I'm fine."
 
"Ah, I'm fine."
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"...Delicious."
 
"...Delicious."
   
"That's really wonderful."
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"That's really wondeful."
   
 
Kamito exclaimed wryly.
 
Kamito exclaimed wryly.
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Her figure dispersed into particles of light in the air, turning into a beautiful sword.
 
Her figure dispersed into particles of light in the air, turning into a beautiful sword.
   
Kamito rested the sleeping Demon Slayer lightly against the rock.
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Kamito rested the sleeping «Demon Slayer» lightly against the rock.
   
 
"You're not going to sleep, Milla?"
 
"You're not going to sleep, Milla?"
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"A long long time ago, there was a spirit sealed in a lamp at a certain place--"
 
"A long long time ago, there was a spirit sealed in a lamp at a certain place--"
   
Just like the time when Claire hassled him, Kamito began reciting the story he had heard from Restia. Instantly, Milla's eyes widened with interest.
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Just like the time when Claire hassled him, Kamito began reciting the story he heard from Restia. Instantly, Milla's eyes widened with interest.
   
 
"...Umm, you don't find this boring?"
 
"...Umm, you don't find this boring?"
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"What do you actually mean by that?"
 
"What do you actually mean by that?"
   
"Exactly as the word implies. Because that is the existence known as the elementalist."
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"Exactly as the word implies. Because that is existence known as the spirit contractor."
   
"Elementalists are not tools. At least, not at the Academy where I go to."
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"Spirit contractors are not tools. At least, not at the Academy where I go to."
   
"That is simply your own value system. I am simply a tool cultivated for winning this Blade Dance festival. That is the totality of my value."
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"That is simply your own value system. I am simply a tool cultivated for winning this «Blade Dance» festival. That is the totality of my value."
   
 
Milla Bassett -- this girl, merely thirteen years of age, displayed an expression as if she saw through everything.
 
Milla Bassett -- this girl, merely thirteen years of age, displayed an expression as if she saw through everything.
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What sort of treatment she received back in her home country, was easily imagined.
 
What sort of treatment she received back in her home country, was easily imagined.
   
(A girl who lived only for the purpose of winning the Blade Dance...)
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(A girl who lived only for the purpose of winning the «Blade Dance»...)
   
 
Too cruel -- Kamito whispered angrily to himself.
 
Too cruel -- Kamito whispered angrily to himself.
   
Her homeland was the small state which had gained its independence from the Holy Kingdom of Lugia not too long ago. Whether in military or economic strength, it was quite behind compared to the surrounding countries. Hence they were resolved to raise the prestige of their country through spectacular results at the Blade Dance festival.
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Her homeland was the small state which had gained its independence from the Holy Kingdom of Lugia not too long ago. Whether in military or economic strength, it was quite behind compared to the surrounding countries. Hence they were resolved to raise the prestige of their country through spectacular results at the «Blade Dance» festival.
   
 
Milla Bassett was the tool cultivated for this purpose.
 
Milla Bassett was the tool cultivated for this purpose.
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"...?"
 
"...?"
   
"Your value, does it only lie in winning the Blade Dance festival?"
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"Your value, does it only lie in winning the «Blade Dance» festival?"
   
 
"Other than that, I don't know any other way to live."
 
"Other than that, I don't know any other way to live."
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A girl's voice came from behind the rock.
 
A girl's voice came from behind the rock.
   
"Even though your team is third, you are still representatives from Areishia Spirit Academy after all."
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"Even though your team is third, you are representatives from Areisha Spirit Academy after all."
   
 
At the same time, other sounds came from the opposite side. Based on the footsteps there were two people.
 
At the same time, other sounds came from the opposite side. Based on the footsteps there were two people.
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"You're not summoning your contracted spirit?"
 
"You're not summoning your contracted spirit?"
   
"My contracted spirit requires a special summoning ritual. It cannot be performed here."
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"My contracted spiirt requires a special summoning ritual. It cannot be performed here."
   
 
"...A spirit of ritual summoning type eh."
 
"...A spirit of ritual summoning type eh."
   
Certain powerful spirits required summoning by ritual. For example, there was Team Cernunnos's beast swarm<!--獣群--> spirit. Milla's contracted spirit seemed to be the same. In exchange for great power, much time and energy had to be expended and it was therefore unsuited to blade dance duels between individuals.
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Certain powerful spirits required summoning by ritual. For example, there was «Team Cernunnos»'s beast pack<!--獣群--> spirit. Milla's contracted spirit seemed to be the same. In exchange for great power, much time and energy had to be expended and was therefore unsuited to blade dance duels between individuals.
   
 
Illuminated by the glow of swords, the enemies' appearances became clear.
 
Illuminated by the glow of swords, the enemies' appearances became clear.
   
Two of the girls were wearing uniforms similar to Milla. A red background decorated with white lines, they were opposite to the Rupture Division's uniform.
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Two of the girls were wearing uniforms similar to Milla. A red background decorated with white lines, they were opposite to the «Rupture Division»'s uniform.
   
"The Holy Kingdom of Lugia's Sacred Spirit Knights--"
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"The Holy Kingdom of Lugia's «Sacred Spirit Knights»--"
   
 
Milla's eyes widened.
 
Milla's eyes widened.
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So that was the case. After all, the Principality of Rossvale obtained its independence from the Holy Kingdom of Lugia. In that case, having similarities in their uniforms was only natural.
 
So that was the case. After all, the Principality of Rossvale obtained its independence from the Holy Kingdom of Lugia. In that case, having similarities in their uniforms was only natural.
   
(By the way, isn't the Sacred Spirit Knights the team of Paladin Luminaris?)
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(By the way, isn't the «Sacred Spirit Knights» the team of Paladin Luminaris?)
   
Luminaris was the ace-level elementalist who reached the finals in the Blade Dance festival three years ago.
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Luminaris was the ace-level spirit contractor who reached the finals in the «Blade Dance» festival three years ago.
   
 
Served by a holy spirit, she had presented Kamito with a formidable challenge during the finals.
 
Served by a holy spirit, she had presented Kamito with a formidable challenge during the finals.
   
Though she was apparently not at the current scene, the Sacred Spirit Knights were renowned as one of the strongest teams from the mainland, all things considered.
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Though she was apparently not at the current scene, the «Sacred Spirit Knights» were renowned as one of the strongest teams from the mainland, all things considered.
   
 
Fighting with his current wounds while protecting Milla would be rather disadvantageous.
 
Fighting with his current wounds while protecting Milla would be rather disadvantageous.
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The knights jeered.
 
The knights jeered.
   
Most likely, they had received news of the Rupture Division's demise.
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Most likely, they had received news of the «Rupture Division»'s demise.
   
Even the fact that Milla Bassett's companion was ''only a male elementalist belonging to a weak team'' was perfectly clear to them.
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Even the fact that Milla Bassett's companion was ''only a male spirit contractor belonging to a weak team'' was perfectly clear to them.
   
Furthermore, the Holy Kingdom of Lugia and the Principality of Rossvale were hostile enemies. It was common for political conflicts between countries to be carried over into the Blade Dance competition.
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Furthermore, the Holy Kingdom of Lugia and the Principality of Rossvale were hostile enemies. It was common for political conflicts between countries to be carried over onto the «Blade Dance» competition.
   
 
(...Our only choice is to fight, right?)
 
(...Our only choice is to fight, right?)
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Kamito raised his sword with annoyance.
 
Kamito raised his sword with annoyance.
   
"You too, if you give up Milla Bassett's ''eye'', we could let you two off."
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"You too, if you give up Milla Bassett's «Eye», we could let you two off."
   
 
"Milla's eye?"
 
"Milla's eye?"
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Glancing quickly at Milla, Kamito found her glaring silently at the knights before them.
 
Glancing quickly at Milla, Kamito found her glaring silently at the knights before them.
   
"Milla Bassett's ''eye'' was originally our country's property. We are simply retrieving it."
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"Milla Bassett's «Eye» was originally our country's property. We are simply retrieving it."
   
 
"What on earth is this about?"
 
"What on earth is this about?"
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"Milla, don't leave my side."
 
"Milla, don't leave my side."
   
"Don't look down on me. No matter what, I am still the leader of the Rupture Division."
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"Don't look down on me. No matter what, I am still the leader of the «Rupture Division»."
   
 
"...Got it. Then I'll entrust my back to you."
 
"...Got it. Then I'll entrust my back to you."
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"...T-This is a legion spirit!"
 
"...T-This is a legion spirit!"
   
"Legion" was the term for contracted spirits composed from an amalgamation of multiple spirits. Although they were unsuited to performing mundane commands, they were particularly effective against enemies who were not geared towards fighting multiple opponents.
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«Legion» was the term for contracted spirits composed from an amalgamation of multiple spirits. Although they were unsuited to performing mundane commands, they were particularly effective against enemies who were not geared towards fighting multiple opponents.
   
 
As it happened, Kamito's Terminus Est was precisely a sword type elemental waffe, unsuited towards fighting multiple opponents.
 
As it happened, Kamito's Terminus Est was precisely a sword type elemental waffe, unsuited towards fighting multiple opponents.
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Kamito swung his sword at the swarm of spirits that resembled a dark raincloud.
 
Kamito swung his sword at the swarm of spirits that resembled a dark raincloud.
   
A slash from the Demon Slayer instantly destroyed the incoming wave of spirits--
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A slash from the «Demon Slayer» instantly destroyed the incoming wave of spirits--
   
 
However, this merely destroyed a small fraction of the total. The bat swarm of spirits gave off piercing cries as they attacked Kamito.
 
However, this merely destroyed a small fraction of the total. The bat swarm of spirits gave off piercing cries as they attacked Kamito.
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"Guh..."
 
"Guh..."
   
The rules of the Blade Dance forbade killing any of the participating elementalists. But conversely, so long as their lives remained intact, any amount of physical injury and suffering was permitted.
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The rules of the «Blade Dance» forbade killing any of the participating spirit contractors. But conversely, so long as their lives remained intact, any amount of physical injury and suffering was permitted.
   
 
They must be trying to chip away at my stamina gradually.
 
They must be trying to chip away at my stamina gradually.
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(If only Claire's Flametongue was here, they could be incinerated in an instant...)
 
(If only Claire's Flametongue was here, they could be incinerated in an instant...)
   
Kamito was unable to use spirit magic for large area destruction. Even though the swarm of spirits blocked his view, he was certain Milla must be currently fighting the other elementalists.
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Kamito was unable to use spirit magic for large area destruction. Even though the swarm of spirits blocked his view, he was certain Milla must be currently fighting the other spirit contractors.
   
 
(Trying to kill these guys one by one will take forever...)
 
(Trying to kill these guys one by one will take forever...)
   
Raising the Demon Slayer, Kamito rushed into the center of the spirit swarm. With self-sacrificing determination, he penetrated by force, intending to defeat the enemy elementalist directly -- !
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Raising the «Demon Slayer», Kamito rushed into the center of the spirit swarm. With self-sacrificing determination, he penetrated by force, intending to defeat the enemy spirit contractor directly -- !
   
"--Of course I'm not going to let your plan succeed. Capture the unrighteous, Shackles of the Criminal<!--the furigana is kind of lackluster: Guilty Snatch (ギルティ スナッチ), so the kanji 咎人の足枷 (Shackles of the Criminal) will be used-->!"
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"--Of course I'm not going to let your plan succeed. Capture the unrighteous, «Shackles of the Criminal»<!--the furigana is kind of lackluster: Guilty Snatch (ギルティ スナッチ), so the kanji 咎人の足枷 (Shackles of the Criminal) will be used-->!"
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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In the middle of the chaotic and violent swarm of spirits, Kamito was immobilized.
 
In the middle of the chaotic and violent swarm of spirits, Kamito was immobilized.
   
"Those who attempt to escape the legion will be caught by the Shackles of the Criminal. The Sacred Spirit Knights' coordinated attacks are flawless."
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"Those who attempt escape the legion will be caught by the «Shackles of the Criminal». The Sacred Spirit Knights' coordinated attacks are flawless."
   
 
Another knight jeered victoriously.
 
Another knight jeered victoriously.
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(I see. As expected of a strong and renowned team--)
 
(I see. As expected of a strong and renowned team--)
   
Kamito silently cursed his dire situation. Using the legion to obscure his view while hiding the capturing type elemental waffe Shackles of the Criminal inside -- this was a coordinated attack that made use of the compatibility between their contracted spirits.
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Kamito silently cursed his dire situation. Using the legion to obscure his view while hiding the capturing type elemental waffe «Shackles of the Criminal» inside -- this was a coordinated attack make use of the compatibility between their contracted spirits.
   
 
The legion mercilessly attacked Kamito as he stood there unable to move--
 
The legion mercilessly attacked Kamito as he stood there unable to move--
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"...Your plan itself is not bad. But regrettably, you have underestimated my Est!"
 
"...Your plan itself is not bad. But regrettably, you have underestimated my Est!"
   
Yelling out, Kamito infused divine power in the Demon Slayer.
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Yelling out, Kamito infused divine power in the «Demon Slayer».
   
 
"--How could this be possible!?"
 
"--How could this be possible!?"
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"Gaaah--!"
 
"Gaaah--!"
   
With a great yell, the knight collapsed immediately. However, within Astral Zero all damage caused by elemental waffen beyond what the body could sustain were all converted into psychological pain, hence the girl simply lost consciousness.
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With a great yell, the knight collapsed immediately. However, within «Astral Zero» all damage caused by elemental waffen beyond what the body could sustain were all converted into psychological pain, hence the girl simply lost consciousness.
   
 
At the same time, the black cloud-like legion dissipated into particles of light.
 
At the same time, the black cloud-like legion dissipated into particles of light.
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Hence, using it in the manner just now would deplete divine power almost instantly.
 
Hence, using it in the manner just now would deplete divine power almost instantly.
   
Deciding that she could not win one on one, the Shackles using knight stepped back with a click of her tongue.
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Deciding that she could not win one on one, the «Shackles» using knight stepped back with a click of her tongue.
   
 
On the other side of the rock, Milla was currently engaging the knight with the slender sword in an even battle.
 
On the other side of the rock, Milla was currently engaging the knight with the slender sword in an even battle.
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Milla's sword skills were definitely not mediocre. Within the Academy, her skill level would definitely achieve top grades.
 
Milla's sword skills were definitely not mediocre. Within the Academy, her skill level would definitely achieve top grades.
   
However on this Blade Dance stage where top class elementalists gathered, her power seemed slightly inadequate in comparison.
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However on this «Blade Dance» stage where top class spirit contractors gathered, her power seemed slightly inadequate in comparison.
   
In terms of ability as an elementalist, the opponent was clearly superior to her.
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In terms of ability as a spirit contractor, the opponent was clearly superior to her.
   
 
Using his body which still could not stand steadily, Kamito raised the sword in his hand.
 
Using his body which still could not stand steadily, Kamito raised the sword in his hand.
   
However, the Demon Slayer could only give off faint light.
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However, the «Demon Slayer» could only give off faint light.
   
"Clearly your power is depleted, male elementalist."
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"Clearly your power is depleted, male spirit contractor."
   
 
"Hmph, as if...!"
 
"Hmph, as if...!"
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Forcing his unsteady body, Kamito began to run to aid Milla--
 
Forcing his unsteady body, Kamito began to run to aid Milla--
   
"--Your plan will not succeed, Shackles of the Criminal!"
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"--Your plan will not succeed, «Shackles of the Criminal»!"
   
 
The knight released a set of chained shackles from her hand. Kamito jumped to evade -- but the shackles were only a red herring.
 
The knight released a set of chained shackles from her hand. Kamito jumped to evade -- but the shackles were only a red herring.
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Another set of shackles released from the opposite direction snagged Kamito's right arm.
 
Another set of shackles released from the opposite direction snagged Kamito's right arm.
   
"You no longer have the strength to break free from the Shackles now!"
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"You no longer have the strength to break free from the «Shackles» now!"
   
 
In the instant Kamito's movements were halted--
 
In the instant Kamito's movements were halted--
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It was the left hand in the jet black leather glove. He could feel a stinging pain from Restia's spirit seal.
 
It was the left hand in the jet black leather glove. He could feel a stinging pain from Restia's spirit seal.
   
"--Very unfortunate for you, ''but I am ambidextrous''."
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"--Very unfortunate for you, ''I am ambidextrous''."
   
With one arm snagged by the Shackles, Kamito kicked the ground.
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With one arm snagged by the «Shackles», Kamito kicked the ground.
   
 
Using one leg as a pivot to spin his body, he struck with a counterattack in response to the enemy's thrust.
 
Using one leg as a pivot to spin his body, he struck with a counterattack in response to the enemy's thrust.
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Suffering massive psychological damage, the knight lost consciousness and fell to the ground.
 
Suffering massive psychological damage, the knight lost consciousness and fell to the ground.
   
Kamito held his shoulder due to the pain from slightly overstraining himself as he asked the Shackles user behind him.
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Kamito held his shoulder due to the pain from slightly overstraining himself as he asked the «Shackles» user behind him.
   
 
"--Well then, you're the only one left... What are you going to do?"
 
"--Well then, you're the only one left... What are you going to do?"
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Leaving behind this loser's speech, she disappeared into the depths of the forest.
 
Leaving behind this loser's speech, she disappeared into the depths of the forest.
   
At the same time, the Shackles restraining Kamito also vanished.
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At the same time, the «Shackles» restraining Kamito also vanished.
   
(Three elementalists of that level -- given myself three years ago, I could have handled them in seconds.)
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(Three spirit contractors of that level -- given myself three years ago, I could have handled them in seconds.)
   
 
As he muttered to himself in self-mockery, Kamito coughed up blood.
 
As he muttered to himself in self-mockery, Kamito coughed up blood.
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The massive shadow towering before them was trampling the trees in the forest.
 
The massive shadow towering before them was trampling the trees in the forest.
   
The minor country's team could only scream and flee into the forest as they watched the destruction of their stronghold.
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The minor country's team could only scream and flee into the forest as they watched the destruction of their «stronghold».
   
Spirits in beast form swarmed and attacked the giant, but the giant swung its heavy fist, smashing the ragtag bunch of spirits to oblivion in a single strike.
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Spirits in beast form swarmed and attacked the «giant» but the giant swung its heavy fist, smashing the ragtag bunch of spirits to oblivion in a single strike.
   
"Ahahaha, you call yourselves representatives participating in the Blade Dance, and yet all you can do is this?"
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"Ahahaha, you call yourselves representatives participating in the «Blade Dance», and yet all you can do is this?"
   
On the shoulder of the giant -- the tactical class militarized spirit<!--戰術級軍用精靈--> Colossus, sat a girl with ash gray hair.
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On the shoulder of the giant -- the tactical class military-use spirit<!--戰術級軍用精靈--> «Colossus», sat a girl with ash gray hair.
   
The Instructional School's second Monster -- Muir Alenstarl.
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The «Instructional School»'s second «Monster» -- Muir Alenstarl.
   
 
Amidst rising black smoke and intensely burning fires--
 
Amidst rising black smoke and intensely burning fires--
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The girl wearing the crimson mask gazed mercilessly at this scene of destruction.
 
The girl wearing the crimson mask gazed mercilessly at this scene of destruction.
   
The minor country's elementalists were struggling desperately, but given Muir's power, they would soon be vanquished together along with their stronghold.
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The minor country's spirit contractors were struggling desperately but given Muir's power, they would soon be vanquished together along with their «stronghold».
   
 
"Ren Ashbell-sama, if this continues, the spirit will be broken by the usage of Muir's power."
 
"Ren Ashbell-sama, if this continues, the spirit will be broken by the usage of Muir's power."
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Beside her, Lily Flame knelt on the ground, advising anxiously.
 
Beside her, Lily Flame knelt on the ground, advising anxiously.
   
"Not a problem. Using a due to be scrapped militarized spirit to conquer a stronghold is worth it."
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"Not a problem. Using a due to be scrapped military-use spirit to conquer a «stronghold» is worth it."
   
"But that Colossus was provided by the military of the Alphas Theocracy--"
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"But that «Colossus» was provided by the military of the Alphas Empire--"
   
"In any case, it is not a spirit those fellows can keep under control. Rather than expending effort to have it scrapped, we might as well break it through the use of the Jester's Vise."
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"In any case, it is not a spirit those fellows can keep under control. Rather than expending effort to have it scrapped, we might as well break it through the use of the «Jester's Vise»."
   
 
Ren Ashbell shrugged and turned to Lily.
 
Ren Ashbell shrugged and turned to Lily.
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Lily bit her lip regretfully.
 
Lily bit her lip regretfully.
   
The darkness spirit had taken away Nepenthes Lore without authorization, robbing divine power from elementalists indiscriminately -- such actions constituted clear betrayal of Ren Ashbell.
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The darkness spirit had taken away Nepenthes Lore without authorization, robbing divine power from spirit contractors indiscriminately -- such actions constituted clear betrayal of Ren Ashbell.
   
 
"I see. Then keep searching."
 
"I see. Then keep searching."
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"What is it?"
 
"What is it?"
   
"What kind of a person is Nepenthes Lore?"
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"What kind of person is Nepenthes Lore?"
   
 
She was well aware that the monster of a black knight was no ordinary human.
 
She was well aware that the monster of a black knight was no ordinary human.
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"Successor to the Demon King...?"
 
"Successor to the Demon King...?"
   
"In other words, the incarnation of the will of Ren Ashdoll who was buried in ancient times--"
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"In other words, the incarnation of the will of «Ren Ashdoll» who was buried in ancient times--"
   
 
A dark shadow flashed across her fiery eyes.
 
A dark shadow flashed across her fiery eyes.

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