Editing Shinmai Maou no Keiyakusha:Volume 1 Chapter 3

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He was worried that she wouldn't listen to him due to her bad mood, but surprisingly Mio, as well as Maria, listened obediently to him. And then ten-odd minutes passed with only Basara telling the story in order.
 
He was worried that she wouldn't listen to him due to her bad mood, but surprisingly Mio, as well as Maria, listened obediently to him. And then ten-odd minutes passed with only Basara telling the story in order.
   
"Ehm… so, this is a cake that I bought at the café."
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"Ehm… so, this is a cake that I bought a the café."
   
 
Basara, finishing his explanation faster than he had thought, timidly examined their expressions.
 
Basara, finishing his explanation faster than he had thought, timidly examined their expressions.
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"…….."
 
"…….."
   
In the bathtub--- next to Maria, she flushed her cheeks in shame. A natural reaction.
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In the bathtub--- next to Maria, she flushed her cheeks in shame. An natural reaction.
   
 
She was still clad in a bath towel, but her big breasts would surely float in the water. The knot of the towel had been on the verge to come untied right away, so she had held up the towel with her hands at first, but in time she had given up and rested her breasts on the edge of the bathtub. In a posture that emphasized the volume of her breasts to the limit.
 
She was still clad in a bath towel, but her big breasts would surely float in the water. The knot of the towel had been on the verge to come untied right away, so she had held up the towel with her hands at first, but in time she had given up and rested her breasts on the edge of the bathtub. In a posture that emphasized the volume of her breasts to the limit.
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"Eh? N- No, nothing."
 
"Eh? N- No, nothing."
   
Asked by Basara doubtfully, Mio hastily started to move her stopped hand.
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Asked by Basara doubtful, Mio hastily started to move her stopped hand.
   
 
---Upon that, there suddenly was something in the edge of Mio's vision. It was Maria's expression as she was looking over from the bathtub. That expression clearly was criticizing her.
 
---Upon that, there suddenly was something in the edge of Mio's vision. It was Maria's expression as she was looking over from the bathtub. That expression clearly was criticizing her.

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