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Upon entering the school grounds, the flood of students got to its peak and the hallways were crowded with students.
 
Upon entering the school grounds, the flood of students got to its peak and the hallways were crowded with students.
   
Basara, a transfer student, parted from Mio and headed to the staff room first. When he told them at the door that he was the new transfer student , he was told to wait for a bit in the waiting room next door. And after the chime rang a few times, a young male teacher came to pick him up with a class register in his hands. He held out his hand with a brilliant smile.
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Basara, a transfer student, parted from Mio and headed to the staff room first. When he told them at the door that he was the new transfer student today, he was told to wait for a bit in the waiting room next door. And after the chime rang a few times, a young male teacher came to pick him up with a class register in his hands. He held out his hand with a brilliant smile.
   
 
"I'm Sakasaki Mamoru, your homeroom teacher. Nice to meet you, Toujou."
 
"I'm Sakasaki Mamoru, your homeroom teacher. Nice to meet you, Toujou."
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"Yes, hello…"
 
"Yes, hello…"
   
Even while being overwhelmed by the unnecessarily refreshing aura, Basara replied to the handshake.
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Even while being overwhelmed by the unnecessary refreshing aura, Basara replied to the handshake.
   
Since the morning homeroom followed right after the staff meeting, they moved to the class room right away.
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Since the morning home room followed right after the staff meeting, they moved to the class room right away.
   
 
"Well, we often get transfers due to family circumstances, but your case seems a bit more complicated, Toujou."
 
"Well, we often get transfers due to family circumstances, but your case seems a bit more complicated, Toujou."
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"Yes, kind of…"
 
"Yes, kind of…"
   
Nothing would come from hiding the fact that he was living with Mio. Therefore Basara just told the school that they were currently living together to see if they could be a family before the remarriage, when he was asked at the beginning. That said, he wouldn't announce that to their classmates though.
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Nothing would come from hiding the fact that he was living with Mio. Therefore Basara told just the school that they were currently living together to see if they could be a family before the remarriage, when he was asked at the beginning. That said, he wouldn't announce that to the classmates though.
   
 
"But making a trial period like that shows that your parents are good people, who properly consider the feelings of their children."
 
"But making a trial period like that shows that your parents are good people, who properly consider the feelings of their children."
   
Basara replied with the vague answer "Sure". He couldn't tell him that all of it was made up.
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Basara replied with the vague answer "Sure". He couldn't tell him that all of that was made up.
   
 
Although, it all happened from Jin's considerations, so Sakasaki's words weren't wrong.
 
Although, it all happened from Jin's considerations, so Sakasaki's words weren't wrong.
   
''…Ah, that reminds me.''
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''…Ah, reminds me.''
   
 
Basara asked Sakasaki what he suddenly remembered.
 
Basara asked Sakasaki what he suddenly remembered.
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Jin might have received a favor from that person when he took care of the transfer papers.
 
Jin might have received a favor from that person when he took care of the transfer papers.
   
Then it would be better to express gratitude to that person.
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Then it would be better to express gratitude to that person. However,
However,
 
   
 
"Is that so? Well, I haven't heard anything in particular about that. Should I look into it later?"
 
"Is that so? Well, I haven't heard anything in particular about that. Should I look into it later?"
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If the homeroom teacher Sakasaki didn't hear about it, it might be better not to pry into it.
 
If the homeroom teacher Sakasaki didn't hear about it, it might be better not to pry into it.
   
As he politely turned him down, they arrived in front of the classroom.
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When he politely turned him down, they arrived in front of the classroom.
   
"This is our class. A new family and a new school might bring various hardships, but you'll get used to it in no time. Besides, we have Naruse in our class."
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"This is our class. A new family and new school might bring various hardships, but you'll get used to it in no time. Besides, we have Naruse in our class."
   
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Ohh, Basara was a bit surprised. It was rare that siblings or relatives were put in the same class. He thought for sure he would end up in a different class than Mio. They must have been considerate.
''Ohh...''
 
 
Basara was a bit surprised. It was rare that siblings or relatives were put in the same class. He thought for sure he would end up in a different class than Mio. They must have been considerate.
 
   
 
"Moreover there is our serious class rep and me as your homeroom teacher. If there's anything you don't understand, just ask without reservation. Okay, let's go in."
 
"Moreover there is our serious class rep and me as your homeroom teacher. If there's anything you don't understand, just ask without reservation. Okay, let's go in."
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''…Ah.''
 
''…Ah.''
   
Amongst them was Mio sitting by the window in the back.
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Amongst them was Mio sitting at the window in the back.
   
 
''…She really stands out after all.''
 
''…She really stands out after all.''
   
Seeing her like that, he once more realized Mio's cuteness. In the classroom space, everyone wore the same uniform and sat at the systematic ordered desks. The conditions were the same. Due to that, one's characteristics stood out excessively. When he stared at her, she averted her eyes towards the window.
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Seeing her like that, he once more realized Mio's cuteness. In the classroom space, everyone wore the same uniform and sat at the systematic ordered desks. The conditions were the same. Due to that, one's characteristic stood out excessively. When he stared at her, she averted her eyes towards the window.
   
 
He lost another interested one. Who remained was,
 
He lost another interested one. Who remained was,
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He considered her a cute girl, but if she stared at him so directly it certainly was a bit awkward.
 
He considered her a cute girl, but if she stared at him so directly it certainly was a bit awkward.
   
At that time, Sakasaki, standing beside the teacher's desk, eloquently wrote his name on the blackboard,
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At that time, Sakasaki, standing besides the teacher's desk, eloquently wrote his name on the blackboard,
   
 
"Okay, as you can see, we have a transfer student. ---Toujou, introduce yourself."
 
"Okay, as you can see, we have a transfer student. ---Toujou, introduce yourself."
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"Ehm, I'm Toujou Basara. My name is a bit showy, but as you can see, I'm an average guy. Please take care of me."
 
"Ehm, I'm Toujou Basara. My name is a bit showy, but as you can see, I'm an average guy. Please take care of me."
   
Since they would inquire about it anyway, he made a self-deriding introduction, whereupon the expressions of the guys softened a bit. The atmosphere became somewhat welcoming and Basara made a sigh of relief.
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Since they would inquire about it anyway, he made a self-deriding introduction, whereupon the expressions of the guys softened a bit. The atmosphere became somewhat welcome and Basara made a sigh of relief.
   
 
Then it was time for questions and with the silly questions and answers repeating numerous times, the chime tolled the end of the homeroom soon enough. Sakasaki clapped his hands together.
 
Then it was time for questions and with the silly questions and answers repeating numerous times, the chime tolled the end of the homeroom soon enough. Sakasaki clapped his hands together.
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"He tells us to line up… but in what order?"
 
"He tells us to line up… but in what order?"
   
Amidst the students pouring out of the classroom, Basara just stood there with no idea what to do. Whereupon,
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Amidst the students pouring out of the classroom, Basara just stood there with no idea what to do, whereupon
   
 
"---Basara."
 
"---Basara."
   
Suddenly his name was called, and Basara faced the direction it was called from, startled.
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Suddenly his name was called, and Basara faced it startled.
   
 
"Ehm, what is it, class rep…?"
 
"Ehm, what is it, class rep…?"
   
Before he had noticed it, the girl was standing right beside him. He was surprised due to suddenly being called by name, but for Basara, the transfer student, she was the one to take care of him. Therefore,
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Before he had noticed it, the girl had stood right besides him. He was surprised by suddenly being called by name, but for Basara, the transfer student, she was the one to take care of him. Therefore,
   
 
"I hope we get along, class rep. I'll try not to cause any---"
 
"I hope we get along, class rep. I'll try not to cause any---"
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"W- Wh- What are you two doing!"
 
"W- Wh- What are you two doing!"
   
Mio, who had noticed the two of them before anyone else, pushed the dumbfounded classmates aside and came over with a bright red face. Her eyes were slightly bloodshot.
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Mio, who noticed the two of them before anyone else, pushed the dumbfounded classmates aside and came over with a bright red face. Her eyes were lightly bloodshot.
   
 
"Ohh!? Class rep, can you get away? Otherwise I think it'll be dangerous!"
 
"Ohh!? Class rep, can you get away? Otherwise I think it'll be dangerous!"
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Mostly for my own body though.
 
Mostly for my own body though.
   
"Moreover, you call me by my first name and hug me... could it be you lived overseas?"
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"Moreover, you call me by my first name and hug me, could it be you lived overseas?"
   
 
"…No."
 
"…No."
   
On that question, Nonaka raised her face while still hugging onto Basara.
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On the question, Nonaka raised her face while still hugging onto Basara.
   
 
"Basara… have you really forgotten?"
 
"Basara… have you really forgotten?"
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Then she showed him a little sulking expression.
 
Then she showed him a little sulking expression.
   
"Mh? That reminds me, the name Nonaka… Don't tell me---"
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"Mh? That reminds me, the name Nonaka… Don't tell me,"
   
 
Basara remembered the last name of the class rep, which the homeroom teacher had called, very well.
 
Basara remembered the last name of the class rep, which the homeroom teacher had called, very well.
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"Get off him already!"
 
"Get off him already!"
   
Mio forcefully got between them. As she pulled Basara and Yuki apart,
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Mio forcefully got between them. When she pulled Basara and Yuki apart,
   
 
"H- Hugging him out of nowhere… A- Are you nuts?"
 
"H- Hugging him out of nowhere… A- Are you nuts?"
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"Well, Yuki's my childhood friend… She was quite attached to me."
 
"Well, Yuki's my childhood friend… She was quite attached to me."
   
"Attached… You aren't a dog or a cat!"
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"Attached… You aren't a dog or cat!"
   
 
"Well yeah…"
 
"Well yeah…"
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But the fact remained that it was true. They were of the same age and lived nearby, so they grew up like siblings. Actually, it hurt. The gazes of his classmates, Mio's included, that is. Specially the ones from the boys.
 
But the fact remained that it was true. They were of the same age and lived nearby, so they grew up like siblings. Actually, it hurt. The gazes of his classmates, Mio's included, that is. Specially the ones from the boys.
   
Well, obviously. For a bystander, it looked like Mio and Yuki were fighting over Basara.
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Well, obviously. For a bystander it only looked like Mio and Yuki were fighting over Basara.
   
 
''…Not good. At this rate, the friendly atmosphere I created with my introduction will…''
 
''…Not good. At this rate, the friendly atmosphere I created with my introduction will…''
   
But how to explain it? While he was like that, the situation kept getting worse.
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But, how to explain it? While he was like that, the situation kept getting worse.
   
 
"…It doesn't concern you, Naruse-san."
 
"…It doesn't concern you, Naruse-san."
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At last, Yuki declared coldly--- But it provoked Mio's emotions.
 
At last, Yuki declared coldly--- But it provoked Mio's emotions.
   
"It- It does concern me!"
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"It, It does concern me!"
   
 
Before Basara could stop her, Mio shouted with a voice that reached down the hallway. The all decisive sentence.
 
Before Basara could stop her, Mio shouted with a voice that reached down the hallway. The all decisive sentence.
   
 
"I'm… living together with him after all!"
 
"I'm… living together with him after all!"
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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===

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