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Of course everyone had their own interests. If she was avoiding her, there was no need for Mio to forcefully befriend her. So she had kept her distance too.
 
Of course everyone had their own interests. If she was avoiding her, there was no need for Mio to forcefully befriend her. So she had kept her distance too.
   
''…So that's the reason I felt her eyes on me despite that.''
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''…So that's the reason I felt her look on me despite that.''
   
 
That said, there was no need for Mio to act as long as she wasn't challenged.
 
That said, there was no need for Mio to act as long as she wasn't challenged.
   
At any rate, her enemies were the ones who killed her parents. Making an enemy out of the Hero Tribe could really foil her plans.
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At any rate, her enemies were the ones, who killed her parents. Making an enemy out of the Hero Tribe could really foil her plans.
   
 
"Mio-sama, what do we do? It seems she is trying to separate Basara-san from us…"
 
"Mio-sama, what do we do? It seems she is trying to separate Basara-san from us…"
   
"…Mhm, let's watch for a bit longer."
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"…Mhm, let's watch a bit longer."
   
 
If all went well, they might get to know about the intentions of the Hero Tribe.
 
If all went well, they might get to know about the intentions of the Hero Tribe.
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"---Mm."
 
"---Mm."
   
The eavesdropping behaviour probably made her feel a bit guilty. Due to that, Mio trembled her body with a shiver on the sweet sensation that arose from inside her body. The curse of the Master and Servant Contract.
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The eaves-dropping behaviour probably made her feel a bit guilty. Due to that, Mio trembled her body with a shiver on the sweet sensation that arose from inside her body. The curse of the Master and Servant Contract.
   
 
"…Mio-sama?"
 
"…Mio-sama?"
   
Maria, next to her, was puzzled, whereas Mio repeated "I'm not eavesdropping" in her heart while turning red. Convincing herself that she wasn't betraying her Master, but only worrying about him. Upon that, the sweet sensation faded soon enough and Mio made a sigh of relief.
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Maria, next to her, was puzzled, whereas Mio repeated "I'm not eavesdropping" in her heart while turning red. Convincing herself that she wasn't betraying her master, but only worrying about him. Upon that, the sweet sensation faded soon enough and Mio made a sigh of relief.
   
 
While observing Basara and Yuki again,
 
While observing Basara and Yuki again,
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"……Yeah."
 
"……Yeah."
   
He knew what Yuki wanted to say. Due to that incident five years ago, Basara had to leave the Village. Toujou Basara hadn't forgotten what he did back then, nor what he had lost. But,
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He knew what Yuki wanted to say. Due to the incident five years ago, Basara had to leave the village. Toujou Basara hadn't forgotten what he did back then, nor what he had lost. But,
   
"Still… I want to protect Mio. Mio didn't wish for the power she holds. She just wanted to live as a normal human, a normal girl. It led to the death of her parents due to the ulterior motives of the devils and right now--- she herself is in danger of being killed for her power."
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"Still… I want to protect Mio. Mio doesn't wish for the power she holds. She just wants to live as a normal human, a normal girl. It led to the death of her parents by the ulterior motives of devils and right now--- she herself is in danger of being killed for her power."
   
 
He couldn't overlook that. He had a reason not to.
 
He couldn't overlook that. He had a reason not to.
   
"She's innocent. If you guys, the <Village> is willing to protect her---"
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"She's innocent. If you guys, the village is willing to protect her---"
   
 
"…That alone is impossible. You should know that."
 
"…That alone is impossible. You should know that."
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Keeping their own existence secret, they only protected the world itself. For that sake sacrifices were necessary. Basara understood that as well--- That precisely was the reason for the happenings after the incident five years ago.
 
Keeping their own existence secret, they only protected the world itself. For that sake sacrifices were necessary. Basara understood that as well--- That precisely was the reason for the happenings after the incident five years ago.
   
Basara had lost his qualification as a Hero and since Jin couldn't keep protecting him as a Hero, he quit too--- both of them leaving the Village.
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Basara had lost his qualification as a Hero and since Jin couldn't keep protecting him as a Hero, he quit too--- both of them leaving the village.
   
 
And Mio's life being in danger was at best an internal quarrel between devils. The Heroes had no reason to help her.
 
And Mio's life being in danger was at best an internal quarrel between devils. The Heroes had no reason to help her.
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"I understand your worry, Yuki. Five years ago, I couldn't undertake the consequences of my actions to the last."
 
"I understand your worry, Yuki. Five years ago, I couldn't undertake the consequences of my actions to the last."
   
"No. That wasn't your fault… I mean-"
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"No. That wasn't your fault… I mean,"
   
Basara cut into the words Yuki wanted to say by shaking his head with "No".
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Basara cut into the words Yuki wanted to say now by shaking his head with "No".
   
 
"Still, it doesn't undo what I have done."
 
"Still, it doesn't undo what I have done."
   
Upon that, there was a change in Yuki, who had stayed silent so far. Looking down, her face still looked like she was close to tears.
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Upon that, there was a change in Yuki, who stayed silent so far. Looking down, her face still looked like she was close to tears.
   
 
"…'Dat ain't true."
 
"…'Dat ain't true."
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For him, who had committed a huge mistake and lost a great deal of people, to have protected someone despite all that.
 
For him, who had committed a huge mistake and lost a great deal of people, to have protected someone despite all that.
   
"But I couldn't bear the responsibility for my actions… and I still can't, even now. I have no idea how to face it yet."
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"But I couldn't bear the responsibility for my actions… and still can't even now. I have no idea how to face it yet."
   
 
But, said Basara and declared.
 
But, said Basara and declared.
   
Like addressing Toujou Basara's unwavering feelings to Yuki and to himself.
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Like addressing Toujou Basara's unwavering feelings to Yuki and himself.
   
 
"But Mio is… She's different from me. Facing her sad past, she still desperately tries to live on provident. She's trying to fight. And then we happened to meet. Of course there's the stuff with my dad's scheme and my initial anger about getting deceived. But--- The moment I came to know everything about it, I wanted to protect her. It's not just sympathy or a whim. I seriously want to protect her. Like you said, I certainly don't have the same power I had in the past anymore. And given my five years without training, I don't know how much of a help I can be. But you know, if the Heroes still can't protect her, can't fight for her, then I believe it's my role to do so. You see, therefore---"
 
"But Mio is… She's different from me. Facing her sad past, she still desperately tries to live on provident. She's trying to fight. And then we happened to meet. Of course there's the stuff with my dad's scheme and my initial anger about getting deceived. But--- The moment I came to know everything about it, I wanted to protect her. It's not just sympathy or a whim. I seriously want to protect her. Like you said, I certainly don't have the same power I had in the past anymore. And given my five years without training, I don't know how much of a help I can be. But you know, if the Heroes still can't protect her, can't fight for her, then I believe it's my role to do so. You see, therefore---"
   
At the time he got this far, a loud noise echoed through the café.
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At the time he got this far. A loud noise echoed through the café.
   
When Basara and Yuki looked towards the source of the noise, curious,
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When Basara and Yuki looked it's way curious,
   
 
"M- My apologies."
 
"M- My apologies."
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Near the entrance of the café, a flustered waitress crouched on the floor.
 
Near the entrance of the café, a flustered waitress crouched on the floor.
   
Most likely she had bumped into a customer and dropped her stainless tray with the cups.
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Most likely she bumped into a customer and dropped her stainless tray with the cups.
   
 
As the customer hastily left the café, the door was still open.
 
As the customer hastily left the café, the door was still open.
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Mio, who had rushed out of the café, desperately continued to run.
 
Mio, who had rushed out of the café, desperately continued to run.
   
Running, running and running until she was out of breath. Before long, she suddenly rushed into a back alley. Right afterwards, Maria came after her hastily.
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Running, running and running until she was out of breathe. Before long she suddenly rushed into a back alley. Right afterwards, Maria came after her hastily.
   
"M- Mio-samaa, do not run away so suddenly. It is dangerous to be separated outsi--- Mio-sama?"
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"M- Mio-samaa, do not run away so suddenly. It is dangerous to separate outsi--- Mio-sama?"
   
Maria rebuked her while still out of breath, but Mio didn't hear her voice.
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Maria rebuked while being out of breathe, but Mio didn't hear her voice.
   
Who could blame her? She had been at her limit.
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Who could blame her. She had been at her limit.
   
 
If she had heard any more of Basara's words--- Mio would have cried without doubt.
 
If she had heard any more of Basara's words--- Mio would have cried without doubt.
   
She could tell that her face was red. It wasn't due to the curse of the Master and Servant Contract, nor due to her full-power sprint.
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She could tell that her face was red. It wasn't due to the curse of the Master and Servant Contract, nor due her full-power sprint.
   
 
"What now, Maria… How should I act towards Basara from now on?"
 
"What now, Maria… How should I act towards Basara from now on?"
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Suddenly knitting her eyebrows as she remembered something, Maria brooded.
 
Suddenly knitting her eyebrows as she remembered something, Maria brooded.
   
"His childhood friend at least could be a bit troublesome… We do not know what happened after we left the café, but Basara-san is generally a good person. Earlier, they were holding hands and looking into each other's eyes. If she cries, or approaches him a bit more daringly, Basara-san might unexpectedly fall under her spell…"
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"His childhood friend at least could be a bit troublesome… We do not know what happened after we left the café, but Basara-san is generally a good person. Earlier they were holding hands and looking each other into the eyes. If she cries, or approaches him a bit more daring, Basara-san might unexpectedly fall under her spell…"
   
"M- More daring-- she couldn't be… They're in public."
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"M- More daring, she couldn't be… They're in public."
   
She tried to deny the possibility, but Mio remembered the incident from this morning in class.
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She tried to deny that possibility, but Mio remembered the incident from this morning in class.
   
Right. Thinking back on it, Yuki was the kind of girl that would openly hug him in public. Her greeting on their reunion... It wouldn't be strange for her to do even more to keep Basara.
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Right. Thinking back on it, Yuki was the kind of girl that would openly hug him in public. Her greeting on their reunion. It wouldn't be strange for her to do even more to keep Basara.
   
 
''…M- More than just hugging him… N- No way.''
 
''…M- More than just hugging him… N- No way.''
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Not good. That didn't leave room for many possibilities.
 
Not good. That didn't leave room for many possibilities.
   
"O- Oh no… What do we do, Maria?"
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"O, Oh no… What do we do, Maria?"
   
 
When Mio asked with her wanton imagination, Maria showed an over-confident expression again.
 
When Mio asked with her wanton imagination, Maria showed an over-confident expression again.
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"H- How?"
 
"H- How?"
   
Maria laughed with a 'Fufu' to Mio's question for a solution.
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Maria laughed a Fufu to Mio's question for a solution.
   
 
"Please leave it to me--- I know a very good method!"
 
"Please leave it to me--- I know a very good method!"

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