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"Hey—you said that you wanted a little sister, right?."
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"Hey—you said that you wanted a little sister, right
   
 
The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.
 
The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.
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It was during their dinner—just as Basara stood up to get a second serving of curry.
 
It was during their dinner—just as Basara stood up to get a second serving of curry.
   
"I didn't say that. Did the spice get into the wrong part of your brain?"
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"I didn't say that. Did the spice get into a bad place of your brain?"
   
 
Basara said so wearily over his back, then he opened the lid of the rice-cooker.
 
Basara said so wearily over his back, then he opened the lid of the rice-cooker.
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The bottle filled with the curry's relish had disappeared from atop the table.
 
The bottle filled with the curry's relish had disappeared from atop the table.
   
His father that sat across from him holding the bottle of pickled vegetables in one hand and said with a triumphant look on his face,
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In front of him, his father that sat across of him held the bottle with the pickled vegetables in one hand and said with a triumphant look on his face,
   
 
"Hey, let's talk a bit more enthusiastically about a little sister."
 
"Hey, let's talk a bit more enthusiastically about a little sister."
   
He showed a smirk. Basara made a sigh of resignation and looked at his father—Toujou Jin. That father at a good age tried to discuss the merits of a little sister with his son over dinner.
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He showed a smirk. Basara made a sigh of resignation and looked at his own father—Toujou Jin. That father at a good age, tried to discuss the merits of a little sister with his son over dinner.
   
 
Putting it into words was quite painful. He felt a slight killing urge.
 
Putting it into words was quite painful. He felt a slight killing urge.
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Jin said astonished.
 
Jin said astonished.
   
"You said 'I want a little sister', which sounds like a light novel title, with sparkles in your eyes—about ten years ago."
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"You said 'I want a little sister', which sounded like a light novel title, with sparkles in your eyes—about ten years ago."
   
 
"Like I would remember that!"
 
"Like I would remember that!"
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Jin passed the bottle with pickled vegetables by sliding it over the table.
 
Jin passed the bottle with pickled vegetables by sliding it over the table.
   
"Well, in short, what I want to say is: Would you like or hate a little sister?"
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"Well, in short, what I want to say is: Do you like or hate a little sister?"
   
 
"What kind of survey is this? Well...a little sister from a drama or manga aside, I heard that a real little sister isn't all that great. Like they're cheeky and crude."
 
"What kind of survey is this? Well...a little sister from a drama or manga aside, I heard that a real little sister isn't all that great. Like they're cheeky and crude."
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And then, he spoke the words that would change Toujou Basara's fate.
 
And then, he spoke the words that would change Toujou Basara's fate.
   
"Aren't you glad—that you're getting a cute little sister?"
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"Aren't you glad—to get a cute, little sister?"
   
 
===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
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Blue, wherever you looked. That was the colour of the sky on that day.
 
Blue, wherever you looked. That was the colour of the sky on that day.
   
The weather was nice. The cicadas were chirping like a scream of the heat, as the temperature reached a new historical record high. It was an early afternoon in midsummer. Basara had come to a family restaurant in front of the station with Jin.
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The weather was nice. The cicadas were chirping like a scream of the heat, as the temperature reached a new record high in history. It was an early afternoon in midsummer. Basara had come to a family restaurant in front of the station with Jin.
   
 
"I mean, seriously...?"
 
"I mean, seriously...?"
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—Last night, Jin brought up the topic of a little sister. That was a flag for his second marriage.
 
—Last night, Jin brought up the topic of a little sister. That was a flag for his second marriage.
   
Because he had picked, "If it's a cute little sister, I like her," from the choices, they came to meet her right away.
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Because he had picked, "If it's a cute little sister, I like her," from the choices, they came to meet her right away today.
   
"Stop sulking... When I called them, they said they wanted to meet and greet you as soon as possible. Besides, I asked you if today would work for you."
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"Stop sulking... When I called them, they said they wanted to meet and greet you as soon as possible. Besides, I asked you if today would be fine with you."
   
 
"Well, yeah..."
 
"Well, yeah..."
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...I'm the last one to get convinced, huh...
 
...I'm the last one to get convinced, huh...
   
With the final conclusion resting on his shoulders while all other obstacles had been cleared, it was a somewhat annoying topic. While Basara thought of what kind of predicament he was in, an electronic sound suddenly sounded from the entrance of the restaurant. It signalled the arrival of a customer. While inadvertently putting himself on guard, Basara looked towards the entrance and made a sigh of relief. It had obviously been a different family.
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With the final conclusion resting on his shoulders while all other obstacles had been cleared, it was a somewhat annoying topic. When Basara thought of what kind of predicament he was in, an electronic sound suddenly sounded from the entrance of the restaurant. It signalled the arrival of a customer. While inadvertently putting himself on guard, Basara looked towards the entrance and made a sigh of relief. It had obviously been a different family.
   
 
"What are you getting tense for every time a customer comes in?"
 
"What are you getting tense for every time a customer comes in?"
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"Wh-What does it matter to you…really."
 
"Wh-What does it matter to you…really."
   
While resting his head on his hands, Basara looked at the newly arrived family.
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While placing his cheek on top of his palm, Basara looked at the newly arrived family.
   
 
—A father, a mother and a child.
 
—A father, a mother and a child.
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"...Uwah."
 
"...Uwah."
   
He unconsciously leaked a voice out of surprise. He had seen a cute girl on the street before. He also had inadvertently stopped and turned around to her.
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He unconsciously leaked a voice out of surprise. So far, he had seen a cute girl on the street before. He also had inadvertently stopped and turned around to her.
   
But—the girls who had come in completely surpassed that basic level.
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But—the girls who had come in, completely surpassed that basic level.
   
After all, the other customers who had noticed the girls also had their gazes pinned down on the two of them. Soon enough, the girls were led away by an employee to a table on the opposite side of Basara and Jin.
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After all, the other customers who had noticed the girls, also had their gazes pinned down on the two of them. Soon enough, the girls were led away by an employee to a table on the opposite side of Basara and Jin.
   
While he looked at their backs—another new customer entered.
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When he looked at their backs—another new customer entered.
   
 
It was a woman in her twenties with a peaceful aura together with her daughter in elementary school.
 
It was a woman in her twenties with a peaceful aura together with her daughter in elementary school.
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"...Sorry. I'll do so."
 
"...Sorry. I'll do so."
   
He said wearily, whereupon Basara unsteadily headed for the toilet in the back.
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He said so wearily, whereupon Basara unsteadily headed for the toilet in the back.
   
 
...Just what am I doing?
 
...Just what am I doing?
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But it was a misunderstanding. Basara had by no means opened the door of the female toilet.
 
But it was a misunderstanding. Basara had by no means opened the door of the female toilet.
   
The toilet merely was for both genders. She likely had used that double gender toilet, as the female toilet was occupied. However, that double gender toilet had a defect that was known to the usual guests—the lock didn't close properly. Therefore, the girls who knew of that, avoided using that toilet if possible. The restaurant had even posted a small notice saying "Please lock the door properly" inside to avoid any troubles. But even if one thought it was properly locked, it could happen that it actually wasn't—yes, just like right now.
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The toilet merely was for both genders. She likely had used that double gender toilet, as the female toilet was occupied. However, that double gender toilet had a defect that was known to the usual guests—the lock didn't close properly. Therefore, the girls who knew of that, avoided using that toilet if possible. The restaurant had even posted a small paper saying "Please lock the door properly" inside to avoid any troubles. But even if one thought it was properly locked, it could happen that it actually wasn't—yes, just like right now.
 
Basara hastily tried to close the door and turn on his heels—but suddenly he heard a 'certain sound'. It was the sound of the girl taking a deep breath. An action taken before a scream.
 
Basara hastily tried to close the door and turn on his heels—but suddenly he heard a 'certain sound'. It was the sound of the girl taking a deep breath. An action taken before a scream.
   
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"Sorry for scaring you, but please—listen to me without making a ruckus. This wasn't on purpose. It's an unfortunate accident, a misunderstanding…"
 
"Sorry for scaring you, but please—listen to me without making a ruckus. This wasn't on purpose. It's an unfortunate accident, a misunderstanding…"
   
That the occupied toilet door opened from the outside meant that the person who didn't lock the door properly was at fault. In other words, the girl; but on an emotional level, she was a victim. Therefore, Basara explained about the defect of the lock and about the notice on the door. He desperately tried to convince her.
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That the occupied toilet door opened from the outside meant that the person, who didn't lock the door properly, was at fault. In other words, the girl. On an emotional level, she was a victim. Therefore, Basara explained about the defect of the lock and about the paper on the door. He desperately tried to convince her.
   
There was no assailant here, only two victims.
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That there was no assailant here. And that there were only—two victims here.
   
 
Upon that—as Basara's explanation worked, the girl relaxed her body soon enough.
 
Upon that—as Basara's explanation worked, the girl relaxed her body soon enough.
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"…Come again?"
 
"…Come again?"
   
While pressing on his cheek, Basara looked up dumbfounded. The edges of the girl's mouth twitched.
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While pressing on his cheek, Basara looked up dumbfounded. The girl had twitched the edges of her mouth.
   
 
"First you peek on a girl in the toilet, then you get inside, cover her mouth and try to make excuses… Put a hand on your heart and think well about what you have done—in the other world."
 
"First you peek on a girl in the toilet, then you get inside, cover her mouth and try to make excuses… Put a hand on your heart and think well about what you have done—in the other world."
   
As if to give Basara the finishing blow, the girl raised her leg and then,
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As if to give Basara the finishing blow, the girl raised her leg and it was then.
   
 
"—Hmm? What are you two doing there?"
 
"—Hmm? What are you two doing there?"
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"..."
 
"..."
   
In contrast to the smiling Maria, Mio was puckering her lips, wordless for a while now.
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In contrast to the smiling Maria, Mio was puckering her lips wordless for a while now.
   
...Well, it's understandable.
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...Well, understandable.
   
 
To tell her to brighten up when someone interrupted her on the toilet earlier, would be asking too much. It left the worst first impression at the important meeting for the two remarrying families.
 
To tell her to brighten up when someone interrupted her on the toilet earlier, would be asking too much. It left the worst first impression at the important meeting for the two remarrying families.
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…Still, they're cute.
 
…Still, they're cute.
   
Not the appearance alone, but their aura and casual behaviour made him excited. Especially Mio, who apparently was also a first year in high school just like Basara, albeit with a later birthday. In other words, right now, when their parents hadn't remarried yet, she simply was a girl of the same age as him. Of course that accelerated his heartbeat. Then,
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Not the appearance alone, but their aura and casual behaviour made him excited. Specially Mio, who apparently was also a first year in high school just like Basara, albeit with a later birthday. In other words, right now, when their parents hadn't remarried yet, she simply was a girl of the same age as him. Of course that accelerated his heartbeat. Then,
   
 
"—But, I'm glad that you're a nice person, Basara-san."
 
"—But, I'm glad that you're a nice person, Basara-san."
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Maria, sitting diagonally opposite to him, faced him and laughed with an 'Ehehe'. She looked very young for a girl only one year younger than Basara and Mio and in her third year of middle school. Her cuteness stimulated a boy's protective instincts gravely.
 
Maria, sitting diagonally opposite to him, faced him and laughed with an 'Ehehe'. She looked very young for a girl only one year younger than Basara and Mio and in her third year of middle school. Her cuteness stimulated a boy's protective instincts gravely.
   
"I was worried about what to do when meeting a boy of your age, as you could have been sharp as a knife."
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"As a boy of your age, I was worried about what to do when you were a guy sharp like a knife."
   
 
"Ha, Haha…"
 
"Ha, Haha…"
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"Seems so. I mean, he came into the toilet occupied by a girl."
 
"Seems so. I mean, he came into the toilet occupied by a girl."
   
In response to Jin's light joke, Mio sent off a cold glare.
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On Jin's light joke, Mio in front sent off a cold glare.
   
"I said that was a misunderstanding, an accident. How often do---"
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"I said, that was a misunderstanding, an accident. How often do---"
   
 
"Hmp, still making excuses?"
 
"Hmp, still making excuses?"
   
When Basara let out a sigh, Mio bent slightly forward.
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When Basara declared with a sigh, Mio bended slightly forward.
   
 
A distance that made his heart skip a beat unmeant. She looked at him with superb upturned eyes that emphasized their height difference.
 
A distance that made his heart skip a beat unmeant. She looked at him with superb upturned eyes that emphasized their height difference.
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The prospect of getting a little sister, and even these two cute ones, had surprised him.
 
The prospect of getting a little sister, and even these two cute ones, had surprised him.
   
But well, Jin had never said that it would be only one.
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But well. Jin never had said that it would only be one.
   
 
However, their mother, who Jin was going to marry, was absent, which made this meeting pointless.
 
However, their mother, who Jin was going to marry, was absent, which made this meeting pointless.
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"…. Aw… Dad, lend me your ear for a sec."
 
"…. Aw… Dad, lend me your ear for a sec."
   
Grabbing Jin's arm, Basara moved to a place where their voices wouldn't reach Mio and Maria--- to the corner of the walkway.
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Grabbing Jin's arm, Basara moved to a place where their voices wouldn't reach Mio and Maria--- to the corner of the passage.
   
"…Sorry, but could you say that again?"
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"…Sorry, but can you say that again?"
   
 
Basara crossed his arms and tapped with the index finger of his right hand on his left upper arm.
 
Basara crossed his arms and tapped with the index finger of his right hand on his left upper arm.
   
"Mh? 'Hey---You said that you wanted a little sister, right?' That one?"
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"Mh? 'Hey---You said, that you wanted a little sister, right?' That one?"
   
 
"How far are you going back! I meant about the stuff about your marriage partner being overseas!"
 
"How far are you going back! I meant about the stuff about your marriage partner being overseas!"
   
"So you heard it after all. What about it?"
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"So you heard it after all. So, what about it?"
   
"It's weird that on a meeting for a remarriage, she herself wouldn't show up!"
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"It's weird! That on a meeting for a remarriage, she herself wouldn't show up!"
   
Even more so when they were the ones that wanted to meet as soon as possible. He wasn't going to blame her for going on a business trip, but a meeting without her was pointless. Actually,
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Even more so, when they were the ones that wanted to meet as soon as possible. He wasn't going to blame her about going on a business trip, but a meeting without her was pointless. Actually,
   
 
"I hope I'm wrong, but… you're not getting tricked, are you?"
 
"I hope I'm wrong, but… you're not getting tricked, are you?"
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"Haha. No, don't worry. Besides, do you really think I could be tricked?"
 
"Haha. No, don't worry. Besides, do you really think I could be tricked?"
   
Certainly. If anything, he was the type to trick, this phony father.
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Certainly. If anything, he was the type to trick. This phony father.
   
"But then we could just have done the meeting once she came back…."
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"But--- then we could just have done the meeting once she came back…."
   
 
"I'm afraid there's a reason as to why we better hurry up."
 
"I'm afraid there's a reason as to why we better hurry up."
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At any rate, he thought they were some kind of idols when he saw them at first. So…
 
At any rate, he thought they were some kind of idols when he saw them at first. So…
   
…A reason to hurry up, huh…
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…A reason as to why to hurry up, huh…
   
 
Judging by the conversation, Basara finally came to understand that reason. The prospect of remarriage meant that they were a family of just mother and daughters. And that mother was currently overseas on a long time business trip.
 
Judging by the conversation, Basara finally came to understand that reason. The prospect of remarriage meant that they were a family of just mother and daughters. And that mother was currently overseas on a long time business trip.
   
"I'm sure a parent would worry if these two are all left by themselves… Is that why?"
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"I'm sure, a parent would worry, if these two are all left by themselves… Is that why?"
   
"Yeah. Actually, the two of them seem to be under the attack of some suspicious person. When I first met them at the city, a weird guy was picking on them. Besides, there also seems to be a persistent stalker."
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"Yeah. Actually, the two of them seem to be under the attack of some suspicious person. To begin with, when I first met them at the city, a weird guy was picking on them. Besides, there also seems to be a persistent stalker."
   
 
"For real…"
 
"For real…"
   
The world sure was dangerous, but to think there were actual casualties. It certainly was a pressing matter. The police didn't interfere with personal matters. They wouldn't move unless something happened, which would be too late.
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The world sure was dangerous, but to think there were actual casualties. It certainly was a pressing matter. The police didn't interfere with personal matters. They wouldn't move unless something happened, which would be too late then.
   
"I heard that Maria-chan stopped going to school because of that stalker. Those who want to go to school can just do so, but for someone who can't, it's painful. Even if she's smiling so brightly right now."
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"I heard that Maria-chan stopped going to school, because of that stalker. Those who want to go to school should just do so, but for someone who can't, it's painful. Even if she's smiling so brightly right now."
   
 
Jin said.
 
Jin said.
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"---For how long?"
 
"---For how long?"
   
"For starters, a year. It might turn out we're totally unsuited to live together or reach a conclusion about the remarriage, but--- They will only get back to living alone once a certain level of their safety is guaranteed. I wouldn't be able to sleep anymore if I were to hear that something happened to them."
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"For starters, a year. It might turn out we're totally unsuited to live together or reach a conclusion about the remarriage, but--- They will only get back to living alone, once a certain level of their safety is guaranteed. After hearing all this, I wouldn't be able to sleep anymore later when I know that something happened to them."
   
 
He had a point. When their mother comes back in a year and it was time to decide about the remarriage, it would all fall apart if something had happened to Mio or Maria.
 
He had a point. When their mother comes back in a year and it was time to decide about the remarriage, it would all fall apart if something had happened to Mio or Maria.
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"……Okay. It's something you decided, Dad. So I'm fine with it."
 
"……Okay. It's something you decided, Dad. So I'm fine with it."
   
He wasn't just being amiable, those were his true feelings.
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He wasn't really casual about it. It was his true feelings.
   
 
"I see. Sorry for not telling you anything and proceeding on my own."
 
"I see. Sorry for not telling you anything and proceeding on my own."
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"It's fine. You must have your reasons for doing so."
 
"It's fine. You must have your reasons for doing so."
   
He could just tell him everything once he was able to.
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He should just tell him everything once he was able to.
   
 
He and Jin were blood-related child and father, but their trust in each other was far beyond just that.
 
He and Jin were blood-related child and father, but their trust in each other was far beyond just that.
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"Let's get back, Dad… Or they will worry."
 
"Let's get back, Dad… Or they will worry."
   
Saying so, Basara returned to their table with Jin. When they sat back down,
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Saying so, Basara returned to their table with Jin. When they sat down on their seats,
   
 
"…Uh- Uhm,"
 
"…Uh- Uhm,"
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"Ah, sorry… Just some talk amongst men."
 
"Ah, sorry… Just some talk amongst men."
   
"He made such a serious face that I was worried about what he was going to say, but then he said 'These two are so cute that I can't suppress my arousal'. Geez, boys in their puberty sure are horny."
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"He made such a serious face that I wondered what it's going to be about, but then he said 'These two are so cute that I can't suppress my arousal'. Geez, boys in their puberty sure are horny."
   
 
"Hahaha. Dad, that will have an afterpiece."
 
"Hahaha. Dad, that will have an afterpiece."
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Raising her head, Mio gave him a smirking smiling face.
 
Raising her head, Mio gave him a smirking smiling face.
   
"But--- if you happen to come into the toilet again, I'll kill you a hundred times over."
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"But--- if you happened to come into the toilet again, I'll kill you a hundred times then."
   
 
"……Yes."
 
"……Yes."
   
Her eyes were serious. When Basara's expression stiffened up, Jin summed it up.
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Her eyes were serious. When Basara's expression stiffened up, Jin said summing up.
   
 
"Okay then…. let's get along as family from now on."
 
"Okay then…. let's get along as family from now on."
   
This declaration made with a smile was the beginning of a new life-style.
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This declaration made with a smile, was the beginning of a new life-style.
   
 
"Issues might arise, but--- let's become happy together."
 
"Issues might arise, but--- let's become happy together."
   
Therefore--- even though prospects for a grim future hung somewhat in the air, it still felt peaceful.
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Therefore--- even though prospects for a grim future hang somewhat in the air, it still felt peaceful.
   
 
Same for Toujou Basara's every day life----and for the world.
 
Same for Toujou Basara's every day life----and for the world.
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==Translator's Notes and References==
 
==Translator's Notes and References==
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