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“—Maria?”
 
“—Maria?”
   
Thinking something was wrong, Zest turned to look towards the sound, only to find the scene of Maria being kicked away by an spirit different from the previous three.
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Thinking something, Zest turned to look towards the sound, only to find the scene of Maria being kicked away by an spirit different from the previous three.
   
 
Her petite body impacted on the ground after being kicked like a rubber ball, and the shockwave blew away some of the rubble in the vicinity.
 
Her petite body impacted on the ground after being kicked like a rubber ball, and the shockwave blew away some of the rubble in the vicinity.
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「…………!」
 
「…………!」
   
Despite how worried she was about their conditions, there is something that Zest most do first.
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Despite how worried she was about their conditions, there is something tht Zest most do first.
   
 
And that was to search out her master Basara’s whereabouts. As long as Basara is still alive, the contract won’t disappear – thus while praying that Basara was safe, she closed her eyes and tried to sense his location. After that—
 
And that was to search out her master Basara’s whereabouts. As long as Basara is still alive, the contract won’t disappear – thus while praying that Basara was safe, she closed her eyes and tried to sense his location. After that—
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''…however.''
 
''…however.''
   
The moment she shows an opening, the opponent will definitely immediately attack. The problem now is the power and speed of the spirit that had exceeded expectations. Such strong attacks will definitely flatten the surrounding area, along with Basara and everyone else; but if she were to remain here any longer, Basara would still be in danger, so just what should she do – by wanting to protect her master, she was in a dilemma.
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The moment she shows an opening, the opponent will definitely immediately attack. The problem now is the power and speed of the spirit that had exceeded expectations. Such strong attacks will definitely flatten the surrounding area, along with Basara and everyone else; but if she were to remain here any longer, Basara would still be in danger, so just what should she do – with wanting to protect her master, she was in a dilemma.
   
 
''…! If this continues…!''
 
''…! If this continues…!''
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In the end, she chose the way which has got the highest possibility of protecting her master, and put it into action. It was at that moment—
 
In the end, she chose the way which has got the highest possibility of protecting her master, and put it into action. It was at that moment—
   
A dazzling light suddenly appeared.
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A dazzling suddenly appeared.
   
 
「————!?」
 
「————!?」
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The spirit’s head was wrapped up in an explosion – it was the spirit that received an attack.
 
The spirit’s head was wrapped up in an explosion – it was the spirit that received an attack.
   
However, it seems that there was no damage at all. When the deep red flames dissipated, the head appeared, completely intact and covered in soot. Nonetheless, it seems that someone had saved Zest – as well as Basara, it was an undeniable truth.
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However, it seems that there was no damage at all. When the deep red flames dissipated, the head appeared, completely intact and covered in soot. Nonetheless, it seems that someone had saved Zest – as well as Basar, it was an undeniable truth.
   
 
''…Just who…?''
 
''…Just who…?''
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''…She probably couldn’t bear it anymore.''
 
''…She probably couldn’t bear it anymore.''
   
Zest wasn’t particularly surprised, since the person in question was Mio.
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Zest wasn’t particularly surprised, as the person in question was Mio.
   
 
That just now, was probably not to save Zest – or maybe while she had that intention, the reason she had come down to this place was definitely to protect Basara.
 
That just now, was probably not to save Zest – or maybe while she had that intention, the reason she had come down to this place was definitely to protect Basara.
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“…— Kill”
 
“…— Kill”
   
At the same time, the spirit under Nebula’s feet began to move. It lunged forward and appeared almost immediately before them, and sent out a punch as if boxing.
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At the same time, the spirit under Nebula’s feet began to move. It lunged forward and appeared almost immediately before them, and sent out a punch as if boxing.
   
 
“Eh……?” “————!”
 
“Eh……?” “————!”
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「——————」
 
「——————」
   
And after that, Zest’s body began moving without even thinking. She swiftly spread her wings – and flew in a straight line towards where the reaction was from. With the obstruction of the flying dust everywhere, Zest could not see even Basara’s silhouette, thus she used earth magic to – gather all of the flying dust together, settling all of it on the ground far away.
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And after that, Zest’s body began moving with even thinking. She swiftly spread her wings – and flew in a straight line towards where the reaction was from. With the obstruction of the flying dust everywhere, Zest could not see even Basara’s silhouette, thus she used earth magic to – gather all of the flying dust together, settling all of it on the ground far away.
   
 
Finally able to see her own master now, Zest stretched out her hands, and plunged into his arms—
 
Finally able to see her own master now, Zest stretched out her hands, and plunged into his arms—
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“……Basara-sama…?”
 
“……Basara-sama…?”
   
And said his name with a shaking voice and widened eyes, but she didn’t receive a reply. That’s of course, since Basara’s injuries received from Gardo weren’t light, and he had also received a surprise attack from the spirit Nebula was controlling – he was already in a state urgently needing treatment for that.
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And said his name with a shaking voice and widened eyes, but she didn’t receive a reply. That’s of course, since Basara’s injuries received from Gardo weren’t light, and he had also received a surprise attack from the spirit Nebula was controlling – he was already in a state urgently needing treatment by that.
   
 
And adding on to that, Nebula has had the spirit send out another attack to exterminate.
 
And adding on to that, Nebula has had the spirit send out another attack to exterminate.
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Towards the giant spirit and Nebula before her eyes, she said so shortly.
 
Towards the giant spirit and Nebula before her eyes, she said so shortly.
   
Within her heart, the surging and welling emotions were almost going to make her go crazy. The reason that made her surprised that had allowed her to say such words coldly, was because within her mind, she was extremely calm.
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Within her heart, the surging and welling emotions were almost going to make her go crazy. The reason that made her surprised that had allowed to say such words coldly, was because within her mind, she was extremely calm.
   
Not only just that – Mio right now, has not lost control of the energy within her body. The torrent of autologous erupting energy with her, was completely under her control.
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No only just that – Mio right now, has not lost control of the energy within her body. The torrent of autologous erupting energy with her, was completely under her control.
   
 
--However, this was not something accomplished just by chance at this moment.
 
--However, this was not something accomplished just by chance at this moment.
   
Being able to control her father Wilbert’s power, as well as her own power – this was the first task she had set for herself after defeating Zolgear. Because from right at the beginning to now, Mio had never provided any effective help in the battles they had.
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Being able to control her father Wilbert’s power, as well as her own power – this was the fisrt task she had set for herself after defeating Zolgear. Because from right at the beginning to now, Mio had never provided any effective help in the battles they had.
   
Not long after knowing Basara, at the battle with Takigawa in the park<ref>都立公园 in real life, formally known as Tokyo Metropolitan Park</ref> at night – although it was to not become a burden to Basara, in the end the result of going alone was that she was not even an opponent for him. She had even lost control of the power she had inherited from her father due to seeing Basara receive a major injury, and was in the end saved by him.
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Not long after knowing Basara, at the battle with Takigawa in the park<ref>都立公园 in real life, formally known as Tokyo Metropolitan Park</ref> at night – although it was to not become a burden to Basara, in the end the result of going alone was that she was not even an opponent for him. She was even lost control of the power she had inherited from her father due to seeing Basara receive a major injury, and was in the end saved by him.
   
And in the battle with Yuki, Kurumi and the Heroes, she wasn’t able to handle Takashi who wielded [Byakko], and her battle concluded with a conclusion where it seemed that she was powerless.
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And in the battle with Yuki, Kurumi and the Heroes, she wasn’t able to handle Takashi who wielded [Byakko], and he battle concluded with a conclusion where it seems that she was powerless.
   
During the battle against Zolgear, she had fallen into the hands of Zolgear, becoming a burden to Basara. Though she had won the battle and had subdued Zest, that was only possible because Yuki had helped. Right to today, Mio had never really given any real contribution to her comardes.
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During the battle against Zolgear, she had fallen into the hands of Zolgear, becoming a burden to Basara. Though she had won the battle and had subdued Zest, that was only possible because Yuki had helped. Right to today, Mio had never really gave any real contribution to her comardes.
   
 
Hence – to not become a burden to the others any more than she already was, Mio had aimed to be able to completely control her powers, and had succeeded in attaining that goal. Not only did it include her father Wilber’s power, that strong power which had taken Zolgear’s right hand was also now in her control.
 
Hence – to not become a burden to the others any more than she already was, Mio had aimed to be able to completely control her powers, and had succeeded in attaining that goal. Not only did it include her father Wilber’s power, that strong power which had taken Zolgear’s right hand was also now in her control.
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''…But.''
 
''…But.''
   
Even if she succeeded, Mio never wanted to use that power. Other than the drawbacks of causing much physical strain on her body and sometimes even causing her to losing consciousness, more importantly, using that power was sort of like a taboo in her heart.
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Even if she succeeded, Mio never wanted to use that power. Other than the drawbacks of causing much physical strain on her body and sometimes even causing her to losing consciousness, more importantly, using that power was sort of like taboo in her heart.
   
 
--Naruse Mio had witnessed the murder of her adoptive parents without any warning, and had then learned that she was the daughter of the previous Demon Lord.
 
--Naruse Mio had witnessed the murder of her adoptive parents without any warning, and had then learned that she was the daughter of the previous Demon Lord.
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On that very day, Naruse Mio’s past fifteen years of life was completely overturned.
 
On that very day, Naruse Mio’s past fifteen years of life was completely overturned.
   
Despite vowing to take revenge for her adoptive parents and living while learning to fight – behind the emotion known as vengeance, there was a fact that tortured her heart.
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Despite vowing to take revenge for her adoptive parents and living while learning to fight – behind the emotions known as vengeance, there was a fact that tortured her heart.
   
 
And that – was the fact that she was not a human.
 
And that – was the fact that she was not a human.
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It was just like how someone can point at you and say: ‘You are not a Human!’, your own existence being nullified just so easily.
 
It was just like how someone can point at you and say: ‘You are not a Human!’, your own existence being nullified just so easily.
   
Though Basara, Yuki and Kurumi had abilities, they were Heroes, so they were undoubtedly Human; compared to them, Mio, basically, was completely different. But despite the differences, Mio who saw Maria as one of the Demon Race, did she ever see her as a monster and harbour hostility against her? The answer was never.
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Though Basara, Yuki and Kurumi had abilities, they were Heroes, so they were undoubtedly Human; compared to them, Mio, basically, was completely different. But despite the differences, Mio was saw Maria as one of the Demon Race, did she ever see her as a monster and harbour hostility against her? The answer was never.
   
Despite that, when she was with Basara and the others, thoughts like she did not belong together with them would occasionally enter her mind, often making her feel as if there was a gap between them that would never disappear, causing her much torment.
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Despite that, when she was with Basara and the others, thought like she did not belong together with them would occasionally enter her mind, often making feel as if there was a gap between them that would never disappear, causing her much torment.
   
 
Of course, Basara and the others saw her and got along with her as a normal human, and Basara was the one who had accepted her right from the beginning. Though she was thrown out once, that was because Mio and Maria were deceiving Basara and Jin – it was completely unrelated to her being the previous Demon Lord’s daughter.
 
Of course, Basara and the others saw her and got along with her as a normal human, and Basara was the one who had accepted her right from the beginning. Though she was thrown out once, that was because Mio and Maria were deceiving Basara and Jin – it was completely unrelated to her being the previous Demon Lord’s daughter.
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--Does Basara even understand, just how much his acceptance of Mio gave her heart salvation?
 
--Does Basara even understand, just how much his acceptance of Mio gave her heart salvation?
   
Therefore, no matter what, Mio does not wish to become a burden to Basara. It’s just – using her father Wilbert’s power that she inherited, would make her feel like she was not a human.
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Therefore, no matter what, Mio does not wish to become a burden to Basara. It’s just – using her father Wilbert’s power that she inherited, would make her like she was not a human.
   
 
Mio is very afraid of experiencing the feeling of being of a different race from Basara. Hence with being unwilling to use her power, she and Yuki had received a sneak attack from an enemy. Naruse Mio wished to stay as a Human, and thus was not willing to use that strong power within her body – at least, until now.
 
Mio is very afraid of experiencing the feeling of being of a different race from Basara. Hence with being unwilling to use her power, she and Yuki had received a sneak attack from an enemy. Naruse Mio wished to stay as a Human, and thus was not willing to use that strong power within her body – at least, until now.
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''Do you even understand?''
 
''Do you even understand?''
   
“You have hurt Basara, have hurt my most precious person, and I will now make you pay the price – I’ll kill you a hundred times.”
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“You had hurt Basara, had hurt my most precious person, and I will now make you pay the price – I’ll kill you a hundred times.”
   
 
''That’s right.''
 
''That’s right.''
   
“Daughter of the previous Demon Lord of power… it’s up to you on how you decide to see the situation, it’s something unrelated to me, and I don’t give a damn. I originally was happy, with deciding to give this power which had snatched all that I had to you guys, but how regrettable… don’t even think about it now. I have already decided, that I will never forgive you, who had hurt the one most precious to me, as well as those dogs behind your back.”
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“Daughter of the previous Demon Lord or power… it’s up to you on how you decide to see the situation, it’s something unrelated to me, and I don’t give a damn. I was originally was happy, with deciding to give this power which had snatched all that I had to you guys, but how regrettable… don’t even think about it now. I have already decided, that I will never forgive you, who had hurt the one most precious to me, as well as those dogs behind your back.”
   
 
''And thus I advise you.''
 
''And thus I advise you.''

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