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--in the battle with the spirit up to now, she had never gotten the upper hand
 
--in the battle with the spirit up to now, she had never gotten the upper hand
   
She had to fight against an opponent who Yuki and Kurumi, as well as Maria and Lucia had managed to defeat with difficulty with two persons by herself so of course it would be much harder by herself, the really knotty opponent is Basara’s current opponent – Gardo. The one controlling the spirit, Gardo, as well as this spirit before her whose orders had been revised from [Eliminate any enemies, attack Wildart City] to be different from the other two, had been pestering Zest, keeping her busy here. But no matter how difficult an opponent this spirit is -- her past struggles, are no longer there in her mind, and they are no longer important.
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She had to fight against an opponent who Yuki and Kurumi, as well as Maria and Lucia had managed to defeat with difficulty with two persons by herself so of course it would be much harder by herself, the really knotty opponent is Basara’s current opponent – Gardo. The one controlling the spirit, Gardo, as well as this spirit before her whose orders had been revised from [Eliminate any enemies, attack Wildart City] to be different from the other two, had been pestering Zest, keeping her busy here. But no matter how much difficult an opponent this spirit is -- her past struggles, are no longer there in her mind, and they are no longer important.
   
 
Because in her eyes now, Gardo had landed in the theatre after Basara/
 
Because in her eyes now, Gardo had landed in the theatre after Basara/
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The surprise attack which ruthlessly swallowed Zest whole, swept the whole street clean.
 
The surprise attack which ruthlessly swallowed Zest whole, swept the whole street clean.
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===Part 9===
 
===Part 9===

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