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“Why would such an adorable flower be named like this? What a pity.”
 
“Why would such an adorable flower be named like this? What a pity.”
   
Neglecting the chief’s sorrowful remark, Sayaka scolded herself in her heart: ''What am I doing? Even when he’s my familiar chief and a person I’m not mindful of, he’s still a guy! How would any girl say chicken dung with such a carefree mood? It’s chicken dung! Even the chief would be fazed! I knew there were other better names, but why...why didn’t I say Shahana (炙花) ? I’d say this name because it’s well-known. I can’t help it! Itsuki, it’s all your fault!''
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Neglecting the chief’s sorrowful remark, Sayaka scolded herself in her heart: ‘’What am I doing? Even when he’s my familiar chief and a person I’m not mindful of, he’s still a guy! How would any girl say chicken dung with such a carefree mood? It’s chicken dung! Even the chief would be fazed! I knew there were other better names, but why...why didn’t I say Shahana (炙花) ? I’d say this name because it’s well-known. I can’t help it! Itsuki, it’s all your fault!’’
   
 
Sayaka diverted the fault to the man who taught her, little by little, the names of plants.
 
Sayaka diverted the fault to the man who taught her, little by little, the names of plants.
   
''Before you break up, tell the man a name of a flower! Flowers bloom every year.
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‘’Before you break up, tell the man a name of a flower! Flowers bloom every year.
   
I heard this was written by the literary giant, Kawabata Yasunari. Is it romantic? Does it express sublte emotions? Of course not.'' Sayaka concluded in her heart.
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I heard this was written by the literary giant, Kawabata Yasunari. Is it romantic? Does it express sublte emotions? Of course not.’’ Sayaka concluded in her heart.
   
 
To put it simply, it was plainly weakness. Girls wouldn’t think up such ways, for girls wouldn’t want to carve themselves in the past memories of a boy they had broken up with. Girls’ love are a type of being rewritten; boys’ love are the everlasting type. No matter how a girl wants to stick to her old partner, crying and sobbing for it, once she finds new love, she will place all her effort into it, lowering the sweet memories she had with her old lover to the lowest section of importance.
 
To put it simply, it was plainly weakness. Girls wouldn’t think up such ways, for girls wouldn’t want to carve themselves in the past memories of a boy they had broken up with. Girls’ love are a type of being rewritten; boys’ love are the everlasting type. No matter how a girl wants to stick to her old partner, crying and sobbing for it, once she finds new love, she will place all her effort into it, lowering the sweet memories she had with her old lover to the lowest section of importance.
   
''It’s all your fault. It’s because of the soft word you left, that after more than thirty years of your death, there are still innocent girls suffering from this social torture! But...''
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‘’It’s all your fault. It’s because of the soft word you left, that after more than thirty years of your death, there are still innocent girls suffering from this social torture! But...’’
   
 
Sayaka let out a soft sigh. She couldn’t really say they broke up, as that man...suddenly disappeared, nowhere to be seen.
 
Sayaka let out a soft sigh. She couldn’t really say they broke up, as that man...suddenly disappeared, nowhere to be seen.
   
''Besides, is there really a past existing between that man and me?''
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‘’Besides, is there really a past existing between that man and me?
   
 
“Kouno, it’s time to go.”
 
“Kouno, it’s time to go.”
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On her way home, though a bit affected by alchohol, Sayaka hummed a popular song of that time; she hummed it with her nose, as she were unfamiliar with the lyrics. When she was about to arrive at the rental place, she saw it—a large black trash bag dumped on the small bush beside the front door.
 
On her way home, though a bit affected by alchohol, Sayaka hummed a popular song of that time; she hummed it with her nose, as she were unfamiliar with the lyrics. When she was about to arrive at the rental place, she saw it—a large black trash bag dumped on the small bush beside the front door.
   
''Man! This isn’t a trash site! I wonder if that large trash bag is for commercial uses? Could it be illegal littering?'' As Sayaka whispered in her heart, she, her brows furrowed, approached the trash bag.
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‘’Man! This isn’t a trash site! I wonder if that large trash bag is for commercial uses? Could it be illegal littering?’’ As Sayaka whispered in her heart, she, her brows furrowed, approached the trash bag.
   
 
“Wuaghh! Ahh...” she shrieked a sound inceremonious to the quiet night in the residential area. She backed off, letting a dismal cry without any resemblance to a young female.
 
“Wuaghh! Ahh...” she shrieked a sound inceremonious to the quiet night in the residential area. She backed off, letting a dismal cry without any resemblance to a young female.
   
''It looks like a trash bag when looking afar, but...it’s a human being!''
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‘’It looks like a trash bag when looking afar, but...it’s a human being!’’
   
 
A man of her age wearing a backpack, his body curled up, was lying in the bushes.
 
A man of her age wearing a backpack, his body curled up, was lying in the bushes.
   
''Is he...dead?''
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‘’Is he...dead?’’
   
 
For she lived here, she would have to call the police, should there be a lying corpse in front of her house. Though drunk, Sayaka could still make a right decision. Silently, she stretched her hand and poked the man’s face with her index finger.
 
For she lived here, she would have to call the police, should there be a lying corpse in front of her house. Though drunk, Sayaka could still make a right decision. Silently, she stretched her hand and poked the man’s face with her index finger.
   
''Wa! It’s warm.''
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‘’Wa! It’s warm.’’
   
Poked, the man slightly opened his eyes...''Nyahh!''
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Poked, the man slightly opened his eyes...’’Nyahh!’’
   
 
He was quite a handsome guy.
 
He was quite a handsome guy.
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If her parents knew what she had done, she would be stared to death, as she let a complete male stranger into her room.
 
If her parents knew what she had done, she would be stared to death, as she let a complete male stranger into her room.
   
''But he was lying on the road!'' Even walking to Sayaka’s room situated on the first floor took him a long time.
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‘’But she was lying on the road!’’ Even walking to Sayaka’s room situated on the first loor took him a long time.
   
 
“Are you all right? Please don’t fall down!”
 
“Are you all right? Please don’t fall down!”
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“It tastes like my mother’s breakfast.”
 
“It tastes like my mother’s breakfast.”
   
“Kyaa. It isn’t ''that'' good!”
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“Kyaa. It isn’t that good!”
   
 
“No, I mean food made by others are really delicious.”
 
“No, I mean food made by others are really delicious.”

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