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Perhaps this man made one unwary, Sayaka had, at some point of time, sat in front of him. Then, the man gently rested his hands, curled into a ball, on Sayaka’s knees.
 
Perhaps this man made one unwary, Sayaka had, at some point of time, sat in front of him. Then, the man gently rested his hands, curled into a ball, on Sayaka’s knees.
   
“Miss, if you don't mind, may you take me to your home?”
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“Miss, may you take me to your home?”
   
 
This was what the man said, his hands exactly like the hands of a puppy. Looking at the the hands on her knees, Sayaka thought it interesting.
 
This was what the man said, his hands exactly like the hands of a puppy. Looking at the the hands on her knees, Sayaka thought it interesting.
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The man hung his sleeping bag on the clothes rack, turned his head, his back facing the light, and smiled to Sayaka.
 
The man hung his sleeping bag on the clothes rack, turned his head, his back facing the light, and smiled to Sayaka.
   
“My name is written as the tree (樹), pronounced as Itsuki."
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“Itsuki, the word for tree, read as Itsuki.
   
 
“Is that your name or surname?”
 
“Is that your name or surname?”
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“My name.”
 
“My name.”
   
“What's your full name?”
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“Your full name?”
   
 
“I hate my surname, so I don’t want to talk about it, okay?”
 
“I hate my surname, so I don’t want to talk about it, okay?”

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