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"If you have something to say, say it; something you want to do, do it. Don't beat around the bush. Whoever I stare at, the target will always do my bidding obediently!"
 
"If you have something to say, say it; something you want to do, do it. Don't beat around the bush. Whoever I stare at, the target will always do my bidding obediently!"
   
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That's clearly using your "Mystic Eyes," right? ...This was supposed to be Hisui's customary retort.
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That's clearly using your "Magic Eyes," right? ...This was supposed to be Hisui's customary retort.
   
 
But the past familiar dialogue did not appear, causing Rushella to look around her, thinking of Hisui.
 
But the past familiar dialogue did not appear, causing Rushella to look around her, thinking of Hisui.
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Rushella finally broke free from the potion's restraints and wielded her favorite short sword.
 
Rushella finally broke free from the potion's restraints and wielded her favorite short sword.
   
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Then she activated her "mystic eyes."
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Then she activated her "magic eyes."
   
 
Crimson light penetrated the "Witch," placing her under absolute command.
 
Crimson light penetrated the "Witch," placing her under absolute command.
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"......"
 
"......"
   
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"Also -- When using the 'mystic eyes,' you must disrupt the target's concentration first. No matter how much mental strength she had, so long as you take her by surprise, even your power can render her powerless."
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"Also -- When using the 'magic eyes,' you must disrupt the target's concentration first. No matter how much mental strength she had, so long as you take her by surprise, even your power can render her powerless."
   
 
"...I know."
 
"...I know."

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