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"Yeah right, like I'd want to hear that from the girl doing the naked shirt look! You must be doing it on purpose!?"
 
"Yeah right, like I'd want to hear that from the girl doing the naked shirt look! You must be doing it on purpose!?"
   
"I wear this because it's comfortable! You're wearing that because you intend to do something to that guy......? Or to me as well..."
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"I wear this because it's comfortable! You're wearing that because you intend to do something to that guy......? Or to me..."
   
 
Halfway through, Rushella finally realized what was being done to her.
 
Halfway through, Rushella finally realized what was being done to her.
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Because her memories after being bitten became unclear, Reina herself had virtually forgotten all of what happened.
 
Because her memories after being bitten became unclear, Reina herself had virtually forgotten all of what happened.
   
Hence, Hisui and his companions took advantage of her amnesia to fabricate a story about how she was kidnapped but fortunately, Hisui discovered it by chance and prevented a tragedy -- That was the plausible story they told Reina without mentioning the word "vampire" at all.
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Hence, Hisui and his companions took advantage of it and fabricated a story about her being kidnapped with Hisui discovering it by chance and preventing a tragedy -- That was the plausible story they told Reina without mentioning the word "vampire" at all.
   
 
Kidnapped and then drugged unconscious, thus explaining the fuzzy memories -- this explanation seemed to have been accepted, so Reina was still none the wiser.
 
Kidnapped and then drugged unconscious, thus explaining the fuzzy memories -- this explanation seemed to have been accepted, so Reina was still none the wiser.
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"What is that?"
 
"What is that?"
   
"I-It's... I'm back from 'shopping'!"<!--JP has "shopping" transliterated in hiragana(しょっぴんぐ) instead of the usual katakana loanword(ショッピング), presumably to indicate Rushella's unfamiliarity-->
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"I-It's... I'm back from 'shopping'!"<ref>The Chinese has 血拼 which is a phonetic transliteration of "shopping" so the original JP probably has some kind of loanword or pun (unfortunately JP sources have not been located)</ref>
   
 
"So you even learned a new word like that......"
 
"So you even learned a new word like that......"

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