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"That's exactly the problem; you're not doing anything! Furthermore, you even ignored all my suggestions... Such as giving the club a more friendly name of '○○○ Club,' or giving everyone different armbands based on their individual responsibilities, or entering the 'Inter School Writing Competition,' or setting the 'National University' as the goal, or 'welcoming midsummer,' or agreeing to a decisive match with the 'rival' during the finals in the tournament but losing to an underhanded enemy in the semifinals, or having a 'teammate' dying in a traffic accident, or 'unbelievable, for such a handsome character to be killed off'...!?"<ref>The latter portion of Rushella's list is a reference to the baseball manga ''Touch.''[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Touch_(manga)]</ref>
 
"That's exactly the problem; you're not doing anything! Furthermore, you even ignored all my suggestions... Such as giving the club a more friendly name of '○○○ Club,' or giving everyone different armbands based on their individual responsibilities, or entering the 'Inter School Writing Competition,' or setting the 'National University' as the goal, or 'welcoming midsummer,' or agreeing to a decisive match with the 'rival' during the finals in the tournament but losing to an underhanded enemy in the semifinals, or having a 'teammate' dying in a traffic accident, or 'unbelievable, for such a handsome character to be killed off'...!?"<ref>The latter portion of Rushella's list is a reference to the baseball manga ''Touch.''[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Touch_(manga)]</ref>
   
"Your suggestions are so ridiculous that I give up on retorting! Come on, the items in the second half of your list hardly count as suggestions!?"
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"Your suggestions are so ridiculous that I give up on retorting! Come on, the items in the second half of your list hardly counts as suggestions!?"
   
 
"...By the way, isn't she learning about rather obscure things?"
 
"...By the way, isn't she learning about rather obscure things?"
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If blood was drawn as claimed, there should be a wound first of all.
 
If blood was drawn as claimed, there should be a wound first of all.
   
More importantly, being bitten by a vampire implied the loss of human identity to become an inhuman supernatural creature.
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More importantly, being bitten by a vampire implied -- losing ones human identity to become an inhuman supernatural creature.
   
 
Just as the ancient legends described, a person who had been bitten by a vampire would turn into a vampire too.
 
Just as the ancient legends described, a person who had been bitten by a vampire would turn into a vampire too.

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