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Nevertheless, in all this time since the club was established, neither the club's name nor its activities had yet to be finalized.
 
Nevertheless, in all this time since the club was established, neither the club's name nor its activities had yet to be finalized.
   
"...All this is because you guys are negligent! Especially you!"
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"...All this is because of you people's negligence! Especially you!"
   
 
"Eh, me!?"
 
"Eh, me!?"
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"Why are you blaming me... I didn't do anything!"
 
"Why are you blaming me... I didn't do anything!"
   
"That's exactly the problem; you're not doing anything! Furthermore, you even ignored all my suggestions... Such as giving the club a more friendly name of '○○○ Club,' or giving everyone different armbands based on their individual responsibilities, or entering the 'Inter School Writing Competition,' or setting the 'National University' as the goal, or 'welcoming midsummer,' or agreeing to a decisive match with the 'rival' during the finals in the tournament but losing to an underhanded enemy in the semifinals, or having a 'teammate' dying in a traffic accident, or 'unbelievable, for such a handsome character to be killed off'...!?"<ref>The latter portion of Rushella's list is a reference to the baseball manga ''Touch.''[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Touch_(manga)]</ref>
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"That's exactly the problem, you're not doing anything! Furthermore, you even ignored all my suggestions... Such as giving the club a more friendly name of '○○○ Club,' or giving everyone different armbands based on their individual responsibilities, or entering the 'Inter School Writing Competition,' or setting the 'National University' as the goal, or 'welcoming midsummer,' or agreeing to a decisive match with the 'rival' during the finals in the tournament but losing to an underhanded enemy in the semifinals, or having a 'teammate' dying in a traffic accident, or 'unbelievable, for such a handsome character to be killed off'...!?"<ref>The latter portion of Rushella's list is a reference to the manga ''Touch.''</ref>
   
"Your suggestions are so ridiculous that I give up on retorting! Come on, the items in the second half of your list hardly count as suggestions!?"
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"Your suggestions are so ridiculous I give up on retorting! Come on, the items in the second half of your list hardly count as suggestions!?"
   
 
"...By the way, isn't she learning about rather obscure things?"
 
"...By the way, isn't she learning about rather obscure things?"
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Like Hisui, she had ignored Rushella's various suggestions and spent her days in the club classroom lazily.
 
Like Hisui, she had ignored Rushella's various suggestions and spent her days in the club classroom lazily.
   
"...It's probably because of her strong curiosity. In order to fill the gaps in her memory, she's been investigating all sorts of things... Unfortunately, she's not good with kanji even though she seems quite fluent with foreign books. Plus the fact she doesn't seem to like serious books, this has resulted in her being brainwashed by anime, manga, variety shows and the like..."
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"...It's probably because of her strong curiosity. In order to fill the gaps in her memory, she's been investigating all sorts of things... Unfortunately she's not good with kanji even though she seems quite fluent with foreign books. Plus the fact she doesn't seem to like serious books, this has resulted in her being brainwashed by anime, manga, variety shows and the like..."
   
 
"...Based on the outcome, did she found the club under the influence of those things?"
 
"...Based on the outcome, did she found the club under the influence of those things?"
   
"Hey, you guys over there, whispering is not allowed! Also, you are not allowed to wrap yourself around my servant's arm without my permission!"
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"Hey, you guys over there, whispering is not allowed! Also, you are not allowed to wrap yourself around my servant without my permission!"
   
Rushella swiftly pointed over with her finger, but Mei nonchalantly hugged Hisui tighter, bringing her lips near Hisui's little earlobe that was as cute as a girl's.
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Rushella swiftly pointed over with her finger, but Mei nonchalantly hugged Hisui tighter, bringing her lips near Hisui's little earlobes which were as cute as a girl's.
   
 
"Oh my, why does everything need your approval? Besides, when did he become your servant?"
 
"Oh my, why does everything need your approval? Besides, when did he become your servant?"
   
"I bit him, so he's mine! And before coming to school today, we already shared a kiss!"
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"I bit him, so he's mine! And before coming to school today, we already kissed!"
   
 
"Don't forget to add the words "Vampire's" before the word kiss. Please don't say things that could cause misunderstandings, especially in front of classmates."
 
"Don't forget to add the words "Vampire's" before the word kiss. Please don't say things that could cause misunderstandings, especially in front of classmates."
   
Recalling the pain from this morning, Hisui instinctively reached out to the left side of his neck -- where traces of the "kiss" remained.
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Recalling the pain from this morning, Hisui instinctively reached towards the left side of his neck -- where traces of the "kiss" remained.
   
Normally, the only trace a kiss could leave behind... Would be a kiss mark<!--hickey/lovebite--> at most.
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Normally, the most a kiss would leave behind... Would be a kiss mark<!--hickey/lovebite--> at most.
   
 
...However, Rushella's kisses were not the harmless type.
 
...However, Rushella's kisses were not the harmless type.
   
Those were fang marks carved upon the skin by snow-white canines that one could glimpse behind those bright crimson lips of hers.
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Those were fang marks carved upon the skin by snow-white canines one could glimpse behind those bright crimson lips of hers.
   
Not only that... but she also sucked blood.
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Not only that... she also sucked blood.
   
 
Correct -- even though it was unbelievable, the girl before his eyes was a true authentic vampire.
 
Correct -- even though it was unbelievable, the girl before his eyes was a true authentic vampire.
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She had bitten Hisui while he was on his way home from the high school entrance ceremony, made his home her own, and even followed him to school. And currently -- she was his master and the club president here.
 
She had bitten Hisui while he was on his way home from the high school entrance ceremony, made his home her own, and even followed him to school. And currently -- she was his master and the club president here.
   
"Sucking recklessly to your heart's content every single day... If it wasn't me, who knows what might happen..."
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"Sucking recklessly to your heart's content every single day... If it wasn't me, who knows what would happen..."
   
"...By the way, Hi-kun, you are getting your blood sucked every day, and yet, you're still safe and sound?"
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"...By the way, Hi-kun, are you really getting your blood sucked every day, and yet you're still safe and sound?"
   
 
Mei wondered as she stole a glance at Hisui's neck.
 
Mei wondered as she stole a glance at Hisui's neck.
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If blood was drawn as claimed, there should be a wound first of all.
 
If blood was drawn as claimed, there should be a wound first of all.
   
More importantly, being bitten by a vampire implied the loss of human identity to become an inhuman supernatural creature.
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More importantly, being bitten by a vampire implied -- losing human identity to become an inhuman supernatural creature.
   
 
Just as the ancient legends described, a person who had been bitten by a vampire would turn into a vampire too.
 
Just as the ancient legends described, a person who had been bitten by a vampire would turn into a vampire too.
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But only Hisui was the exception.
 
But only Hisui was the exception.
   
"That's the kind of constitution I have. Let me remind you, even though I won't become a vampire and my wounds recover faster, losing blood still hurts a lot! If I suffer an instantly fatal wound, I'll still die. Because of this freeloader invading my home, I'm forced to eat a lot of liver recently for replenishing nutrients..."
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"That's the kind of constitution I have. Let me remind you, even though I won't become a vampire and my wounds recover faster, losing blood still hurts a lot! If I suffer an instantly fatal wound I'll still die. Because of this freeloader invading my home, I'm forced to eat a lot of liver recently for replenishing nutrients..."
   
"Shouldn't you take iron supplements as well? But suffering that every day is really terrible... Vampires are really troublesome!"
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"Shouldn't you eat iron supplements as well? But suffering that every day is really terrible... Vampires are really troublesome!"
   
 
"Who are you calling troublesome!? My race has existed for countless eons, carrying utmost prestige for over a thousand years. You dare say something so rude? You fake human with only mere centuries' worth of history!"
 
"Who are you calling troublesome!? My race has existed for countless eons, carrying utmost prestige for over a thousand years. You dare say something so rude? You fake human with only mere centuries' worth of history!"
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"What did you say......!?"
 
"What did you say......!?"
   
Her berserk button having been pushed, Mei stood up.
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Her berserk button pushed, Mei stood up.
   
 
At the same time, she slammed her hands on the table.
 
At the same time, she slammed her hands on the table.
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A perfect creature made in the image of mankind and meant to surpass humanity. But for some reason, be it God's joke or the devil's curse, it was born as an ugly monster. Mei happened to be the descendant of the infamous Frankenstein's monster.
 
A perfect creature made in the image of mankind and meant to surpass humanity. But for some reason, be it God's joke or the devil's curse, it was born as an ugly monster. Mei happened to be the descendant of the infamous Frankenstein's monster.
   
"Hmph, no matter how you disguise yourself, a fake is a fake. Ultimately, you cannot become human!"
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"Hmph, no matter how you disguise yourself, a fake is a fake. Ultimately you cannot become human!"
   
"...Shut up, I don't care what you think. My wish is precisely to become human! To become one with a human... Or I should say, have babies with Hi-kun❤"
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"...Shut up, I don't care what you think, my wish is precisely to become human! To become one with a human... Or I should say, have babies with Hi-kun❤"
   
 
"Sorry, no can do."
 
"Sorry, no can do."
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Things were always this chaotic around the three of them. Club activities probably failed to make progress thanks to that.
 
Things were always this chaotic around the three of them. Club activities probably failed to make progress thanks to that.
   
But like always, the situation was brought under control by the monotonous voice of the final member.
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But as always, the situation was brought under control by the monotonous voice of the final member.
   
"...I have no objections to quarreling, but if you really want to stop the club from being disbanded, you people should think of a plan more seriously, right?"
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"...I have no objections to quarreling, but if you really want to stop the club from being disbanded, you people should really think of a plan more seriously, right?"
   
 
The speaker was named Kariya Eruru.
 
The speaker was named Kariya Eruru.
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Distanced from the noisy ruckus, she had been sitting in a corner of the classroom, staring at a notebook computer without a word, tapping audibly on the keyboard nonstop.
 
Distanced from the noisy ruckus, she had been sitting in a corner of the classroom, staring at a notebook computer without a word, tapping audibly on the keyboard nonstop.
   
Her face was as cute and adorable as a French doll, but her cold manner of speaking was completely emotionless in tone.
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Even though her face was as cute and adorable as a French doll, she spoke coldly in a completely emotionless tone of voice.
   
"There's not much time remaining. If you want to continue using this classroom, the club must first be categorized and all sorts of content need to be edited. How about a more serious discussion?"
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"There's not much time remaining. If you want to continue using this classroom, the club must first be categorized and all sorts of content needs to be edited. How about a more serious discussion?"
   
 
" " "......Yes......" " "
 
" " "......Yes......" " "
   
Her irrefutable suggestion silenced the other three.
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Her flawless suggestion compelled the other three to shut up.
   
 
Returning to their own seats, they began to recall the cause of the incident.
 
Returning to their own seats, they began to recall the cause of the incident.
   
Speaking of the club disbandment crisis, one must begin with a particular question someone posed.
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Speaking of the club disbandment crisis, one must begin with that particular question.
   
 
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===Translator's Notes and References===
 
==Translator's Notes and References==
 
 
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