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This landmark frequently appeared in crime dramas, standing tall in the heart of police territory—The Metropolitan Police Department's headquarters.
 
This landmark frequently appeared in crime dramas, standing tall in the heart of police territory—The Metropolitan Police Department's headquarters.
   
"To me, this is simply my workplace. Because the Supernatural Investigations Section's headquarters is here as well."
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"To me, this is simply my workplace. Because the Supernatural Investigations Section is headquartered here as well."
   
 
Eruru was speaking in a business-like tone of voice.
 
Eruru was speaking in a business-like tone of voice.
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From gaps between the chains, one could catch a glimpse of the coffin and see that its design was quite intricate.
 
From gaps between the chains, one could catch a glimpse of the coffin and see that its design was quite intricate.
   
With a high-class appearance of deep purple, the coffin was ornamented with detailed carvings.
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With an high-class appearance of deep purple, the coffin was ornamented with detailed carvings.
   
 
As if highlighting the owner's stature, the outer appearance was exceedingly ornate. This was no simple burial vessel but a worthy work of art.
 
As if highlighting the owner's stature, the outer appearance was exceedingly ornate. This was no simple burial vessel but a worthy work of art.
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The vampire she raised personally—this was obviously a reference to the man who had concealed his identity and worked by Eruru's side, kidnapped Rushella and finally was exterminated by Hisui.
 
The vampire she raised personally—this was obviously a reference to the man who had concealed his identity and worked by Eruru's side, kidnapped Rushella and finally was exterminated by Hisui.
   
It was true that he was the subordinate she trained. But had she known he was a vampire? obviously she would not have kept him by her side.
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It was true that he was the subordinate she trained. But had she known he was a vampire, obviously she would not have kept him by her side.
   
 
"I can understand how you might be a little zealous in trying to make up for your past blunder, but you should pay a little more attention to others. Otherwise, you'll just end up causing trouble for others—"
 
"I can understand how you might be a little zealous in trying to make up for your past blunder, but you should pay a little more attention to others. Otherwise, you'll just end up causing trouble for others—"
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Rangetsu frowned and summed up with a face of displeasure.
 
Rangetsu frowned and summed up with a face of displeasure.
   
"...In any case, learn from your mistakes. Please think carefully before you act, special consultant Kariya. Although based on my predictions, the higher-ups will be less inclined to listen to your opinion from now on."
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"...In any case, learn from your mistakes. Please think carefully before you act, special consultant Kariya. Although based on my predictions, the higherups will be less inclined to listen to your opinion from now on."
   
 
Then she led her subordinates and left.
 
Then she led her subordinates and left.
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"Don't say that. So who is that Oogami woman supposed to be?"
 
"Don't say that. So who is that Oogami woman supposed to be?"
   
"Exactly as she introduced herself, an official member of the Supernatural Investigations Section. With several subordinates under her, she can be considered a squad leader. For some reason, she is always trying to compete against me... But she is quite capable in all respects, especially in handling the higher-ups."
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"Exactly as she introduced herself, an official member of the Supernatural Investigations Section. With several subordinates under her, she can be considered a squad leader. For some reason, she is always trying to compete against me... But she is quite capable in all respects, especially in handling the higherups."
 
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"Looks like you're full of sarcasm too. Oh well, I can understand. But I get the impression that back from when I first met you, your authority seems to be higher than that Oogami's. Could it be that... You were disciplined for that particular incident?"
 
"Looks like you're full of sarcasm too. Oh well, I can understand. But I get the impression that back from when I first met you, your authority seems to be higher than that Oogami's. Could it be that... You were disciplined for that particular incident?"
   
"For my own subordinate to be a vampire, especially one that had sucked human blood? It is only natural that I take responsibility as the leader. By the way, about Kishida's incident, it is very probable that the higher-ups knew he was a vampire and specifically arranged for him to work under me. Were they under the impression that kin could coexist harmoniously?"
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"For my own subordinate to be a vampire, especially one that had sucked human blood? It is only natural that I take responsibility as the leader. By the way, about Kishida's incident, it is very probable that the higherups knew he was a vampire and specifically arranged for him to work under me. Were they under the impression that kin could coexist harmoniously?"
   
 
Eruru laughed in self-deprecation.
 
Eruru laughed in self-deprecation.
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It looked like the incident had hurt her quite a lot.
 
It looked like the incident had hurt her quite a lot.
   
Despite being the one bearing responsibility, but for the higher-ups to deliberately place a vampire by her side—it would not be strange if she started to hate the world.
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Despite being the one bearing responsibility, but for the higherups to deliberately place a vampire by her side—it would not be strange if she started to hate the world.
   
 
"I heard from Sudou already. You put in a great deal of effort to allow Rushella and me to have a normal life. The matter of my constitution... You didn't report it to your superiors, right?"
 
"I heard from Sudou already. You put in a great deal of effort to allow Rushella and me to have a normal life. The matter of my constitution... You didn't report it to your superiors, right?"
   
"Why are you talking about this suddenly? I only do what is within my duty. The current state of affairs is that the higher-ups are taking a policy of leniency towards the amnesiac vampire who has not harmed humans. Besides, the only victim, you, do not actually count as a victim..."
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"Why are you talking about this suddenly? I only do what is within my duty. The current state of affairs is that the higherups are taking a policy of leniency towards the amnesiac vampire who has not harmed humans. Besides, the only victim, you, do not actually count as a victim..."
   
 
"Granted, but I still haven't expressed my gratitude to you properly. Thank you."
 
"Granted, but I still haven't expressed my gratitude to you properly. Thank you."
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"It is indeed a vampire's coffin, I agree. But why was it sunk to the bottom of the sea, heavily wrapped in chains, that I don't get. If it was for sealing a vampire... Wrapping it in chains and throwing it into the sea makes sense. But since it's empty inside, this..."
 
"It is indeed a vampire's coffin, I agree. But why was it sunk to the bottom of the sea, heavily wrapped in chains, that I don't get. If it was for sealing a vampire... Wrapping it in chains and throwing it into the sea makes sense. But since it's empty inside, this..."
   
"...Correct. Regarding the coffin and the sunken ship, investigations will continue. But based on the reactions of the higher-ups just now, progress will be delayed even more. But more importantly......"
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"...Correct. Regarding the coffin and the sunken ship, investigations will continue. But based on the reactions of the higherups just now, progress will be delayed even more. But more importantly......"
   
 
"You're trying to say... It's very similar to Rushella's coffin, right? I can't really assert anything right now so I'll wait for the analysis on your side first."
 
"You're trying to say... It's very similar to Rushella's coffin, right? I can't really assert anything right now so I'll wait for the analysis on your side first."
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"...She doesn't have a cellphone so she borrowed Sudou's. Should I get her a phone card?"
 
"...She doesn't have a cellphone so she borrowed Sudou's. Should I get her a phone card?"
   
"I think you ought to give those rare public phone booths a break, for I foresee a terrible fate of destruction for them. By the way, I have no idea if Sudou-san's cellphone survived..."
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"I think you ought to give those rare public phonebooths a break, for I foresee a terrible fate of destruction for them. By the way, I have no idea if Sudou-san's cellphone survived..."
   
 
"Can you write off the replacement costs for me?"
 
"Can you write off the replacement costs for me?"

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