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Rather than just a single head... It was clearly a girl's body.
 
Rather than just a single head... It was clearly a girl's body.
   
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A slender body dressed in a sailor style school uniform that was slightly out of fashion. It looked so intangible because it really was half transparent... Her outline blended with the surrounding environment.
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A slender body dressed in a sailor style school uniform that was slightly out of fashion. It looked so intangible, because it really was half transparent... Her outline blended with the surrounding environment.
   
 
"...Could that really be?"
 
"...Could that really be?"
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Hisui could not help but stand up. The others stared with their eyes wide.
 
Hisui could not help but stand up. The others stared with their eyes wide.
   
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On her semi-transparent, intangible neck—there was a wound.
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On her semi-transparent, intangile neck—there was a wound.
   
 
Pierced by two holes.
 
Pierced by two holes.

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