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If she was going to return shamelessly now that things had gotten to this point, she would not have decided to disappear in the first place.
 
If she was going to return shamelessly now that things had gotten to this point, she would not have decided to disappear in the first place.
   
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"It'll just end up repeating the same old same old. It's better that I'm not there, especially with that woman there. We won't see each other again."
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"It'll just end up repeating the same old mistakes. It's better that I'm not there, especially with that woman there. We won't see each other again."
   
 
"My, how pessimistic you are. Last time I saw you, the brightness of day was exuding from all over your body, almost like you weren't a vampire."
 
"My, how pessimistic you are. Last time I saw you, the brightness of day was exuding from all over your body, almost like you weren't a vampire."
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"Nothing."
 
"Nothing."
   
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Hisui shut up and continued eating.
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Hisui shuts up and continued eating.
   
 
This really was a taste that brought back memories.
 
This really was a taste that brought back memories.
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"What's the matter? You're spacing out, staring at my face."
 
"What's the matter? You're spacing out, staring at my face."
   
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"...Nothing. I'm full. Let me clear up."
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"...Nothing. I'm full. Let me clean up."
   
 
Avoiding Miraluka's gaze, Hisui took the utensils to be washed.
 
Avoiding Miraluka's gaze, Hisui took the utensils to be washed.

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