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--What?
 
--What?
   
Hisui turned around, only to see the bathtub filled with hot water and a pale nude body soaking inside.
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Hisui turned around, only to see the bathtub filled with hot water and a pale nude body soaked inside.
   
 
Or rather, it was Miraluka enjoying a bath.
 
Or rather, it was Miraluka enjoying a bath.
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Pushing those protruding flower buds against Hisui's back, she urged him to answer.
 
Pushing those protruding flower buds against Hisui's back, she urged him to answer.
   
For only an instant, Hisui almost wanted to ask her to do it. But by sheer force of will, he just barely managed to keep his mouth shut.
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For only an instant, Hisui almost wanted to ask her to do it. But but sheer force of will, he just barely managed to keep his mouth shut.
   
 
Be calm.
 
Be calm.
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Miraluka whispered in Hisui's ear, pulling his unoccupied left hand towards her buttocks.
 
Miraluka whispered in Hisui's ear, pulling his unoccupied left hand towards her buttocks.
   
Hisui's five fingers sank into her beautiful flesh that resembled a plain of snow.
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Hisui's five fingers ank into her beautiful flesh that resembled a plain of snow.
   
 
Near his finger tips was the knot for her panties--The fabric there was as skimpy as the bra's.
 
Near his finger tips was the knot for her panties--The fabric there was as skimpy as the bra's.
   
Miraluka probably had made her mind up already when she called Hisui to her room.
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Miraluka probably had made her mind already when she called Hisui to her room.
   
 
"Miralu..."
 
"Miralu..."
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When attacked by weapons with holy properties, permanent wounds were left on vampires in spite of their eternal life and youth.
 
When attacked by weapons with holy properties, permanent wounds were left on vampires in spite of their eternal life and youth.
   
This phenemonon depended on the interaction of various conditions including a vampire's rank, the depth of the wound, the power of the weapon, the user's strength and there was no simple answer but it really did exist.
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This phenemonon depended on the interaction of various conditions including a vampire's rank, the depth of hte wound, the power of the weapon, the user's strength and there was no simple answer but it really did exist.
   
 
"...How exaggerated. First of all, no one can verify permanent wounds. Supposing that kind of wound remained unclosed, perhaps it might grow shallower after a hundred years and even disappear after a thousand. For we vampires, waiting that long isn't a problem. After all, this isn't any severe injury to me, it'll be gone without a trace after a week."
 
"...How exaggerated. First of all, no one can verify permanent wounds. Supposing that kind of wound remained unclosed, perhaps it might grow shallower after a hundred years and even disappear after a thousand. For we vampires, waiting that long isn't a problem. After all, this isn't any severe injury to me, it'll be gone without a trace after a week."
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"Are you a new bride weary of married life? Leaving home in search of thrills?"
 
"Are you a new bride weary of married life? Leaving home in search of thrills?"
   
"You're being noisy, shut up! E-Even if I stayed with you, I totally can't find my memories or any clues at all, so...!"
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"You're being noisy, shut up! E-Even if I stayed with I totally can't find my memories or any clues at all, so...!"
   
 
"Are you an office lady going on a trip on a search for self-discovery? Then come on, go take a flight overseas, like to Europe for example. Going to the neighboring town, what the heck! Somewhere so close by, what's the difference compared to the area where you searched for your memories previously!?"
 
"Are you an office lady going on a trip on a search for self-discovery? Then come on, go take a flight overseas, like to Europe for example. Going to the neighboring town, what the heck! Somewhere so close by, what's the difference compared to the area where you searched for your memories previously!?"
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"What are you two doing?"
 
"What are you two doing?"
   
Hisui looked back in surprise, only to see someone dressed in a black inverness'''(!<!-- As far as I know inverness is a place not sure about a dress type, did you mean a evening dress? TLC please -->)''' dress, walking elegantly towards them, her skirt hem fluttering in the wind.
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Hisui looked back in surprise, only to see someone dressed n a black inverness dress, walking elegantly towards them, her skirt hem fluttering in the wind.
   
 
Miraluka.
 
Miraluka.

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