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"Inside Kujou-kun's body..."
 
"Inside Kujou-kun's body..."
   
"Indeed. Her heart has been transplanted into Kujou-san. Kujou-san suffered a heavy injury overseas with severe damage to his heart. There was no other way to save him. The operation was probably performed without even using anesthetics but at the time, Kujou-san was in no condition to care what exactly she was doing to him. However, he seems to remember hazily. The scar left on his chest, the special constitution rendering vampirization ineffective, as well as his memories of her performing chest compressions desperately. Judging from the surgical scars and the ECG, he definitely went through an operation. Unlike dhampirs like me, he is a human with vampire powers residing in his body."
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"Indeed. Her heart has been transplanted into Kujou-san. Kujou-san suffered a heavy injury overseas with severe damage to his heart. There was no other way to save him. The operation was probably performed without even using anesthetics but at the time, Kujou-san was in no condition to care what exactly she was doing to him. However, he seems to remember hazily. The scar left on his chest, the special constitution rendering vampirization ineffective, as well as his memories of her performing chest compressions desperately. Judging from the surgical scars and the ECG, he definitely went through an oepration. Unlike dhampirs like me, he is a human with vampire powers residing in his body."
   
 
This explanation brought upon a long silence.
 
This explanation brought upon a long silence.
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He completely failed to understand.
 
He completely failed to understand.
   
"Uh, I never got the feeling you liked me... But I never expected to hear something so harsh from you directly."
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"Uh, I never got the feeling you liked me... But I ver expected to hear something so harsh from you directly."
   
 
"I have always wanted to tell you those words."
 
"I have always wanted to tell you those words."
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After sunset, the evening wind blew across her white chest.
 
After sunset, the evening wind blew across her white chest.
   
"May I? I am rather special, while you will immediately perish once your heart is gouged out?"
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"May I? I am rather special, while you will immediately persih once your heart is gouged out?"
   
 
"Sure. This is the only thing I can do... for that guy."
 
"Sure. This is the only thing I can do... for that guy."
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Miraluka's face went dark.
 
Miraluka's face went dark.
   
Her beautiful face had been as serene as a lake until now. Faint signs of laughter were surfacing.
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Her beauiful face had been as serene as a lake until now. Faint signs of laugher were surfacing.
   
 
But she still stepped forward.
 
But she still stepped forward.
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Rangetsu declared with an elder's dignity.
 
Rangetsu declared with an elder's dignity.
   
Everyone was in agreement.
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Everyone were in agreement.
   
 
"When did he learn to capture women's hearts so well? I don't know if I should be happy or sad about that."
 
"When did he learn to capture women's hearts so well? I don't know if I should be happy or sad about that."
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At this time, new intruders arrived, deepening Miraluka's smile.
 
At this time, new intruders arrived, deepening Miraluka's smile.
   
Hisui and Eruru arrived one after another.
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Hisui and Eruru arrived one after anohter.
   
 
Hisui was carrying the sacred cross sword from home, the Tzara Blade.
 
Hisui was carrying the sacred cross sword from home, the Tzara Blade.
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"...No."
 
"...No."
   
"Fighting using your constitution? Your body carries the potential for a human to oppose vampires. If humans could stand on equal ground with vampires, then there will no longer be conflict between them. Perhaps coexistence could be actualized. Are you thinking of using this power to fight me?"
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"Fighting using your constitution? Your body carries the potential for a human to oppose vampires. If humans could stand on equal ground with vampries, then there will no longer be conflict between them. Perhaps coexistence could be actualized. Are you thinking of using this power to fight me?"
   
 
"No."
 
"No."
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Kirika screamed while Mei and Rangetsu were stunned.
 
Kirika screamed while Mei and Rangetsu were stunned.
   
Eruru had apparently predicted this scene. Turning her face away, she endured the smell of blood, desperately trying to maintain her sanity.
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Eruru had apparently predicted this scnee. Turning her face away, she endured the smell of blood, desperately trying to maintain her sanity.
   
 
"What are you doing...!?"
 
"What are you doing...!?"
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"..."
 
"..."
   
"What about me? Aren't there artificial hearts? There are many solutions so I'll live, somehow... Otherwise, use your vampire powers to make me hibernate or seal me away, whatever you want. I'll wait for you, whether it takes a decade or a century, to make me live on. So stop, it's already enough..."
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"What about me? Aren't there artificial hearts? There are many solutions so I'll live, somehow... Otherwise, use your vampire powers to make me hibernate or seal me away, whatever you want. I'll wait for you, whether it akes a decade or a century, to make me live on. So stop, it's already enough..."
   
 
Hisui desperately used the sacred cross sword to support his collapsing body.
 
Hisui desperately used the sacred cross sword to support his collapsing body.
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The last three words were directed at Miraluka.
 
The last three words were directed at Miraluka.
   
He was not mature enough to send everyone he cherished to a perfect ending.
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He was not mature enough to send everone he cherished to a perfect ending.
   
 
He was not cool enough to abandon everything for one cherished person.
 
He was not cool enough to abandon everything for one cherished person.

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