Editing Talk:AntiMagic Academy "The 35th Test Platoon":Volume 1 Prologue

==Translator Notes==
===Machine Translation===

- Editor: NO worries, I will edit the machine translation to the best of my ability too.

===Notes===
<--In original it says “suspect if they have problems with their eyes, but that sounds bad-->
==Sentences==

At the beginning there was fourty of us. '''It appeared it's''' going to become a long battle, I was consterned by the feeling of the cold muzzle made for killing, but i there was no other choice than doing it. 

-- There is awarded change in tense in this area. Is it possible that it's suppose to be "So, It appeared it was ..."

-- I added the implicit translation phrase in order to link the sentences together.  "So, it appeared it was..."

-- Alternative 1: It appeared it is going to become a long battle since there was fourty of us. I was consterned by feeling of cold muzzle made for killing, but there was no other choice but doing it.
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Immediately after the start, instead of using the rifle that was available, Takeru faced the deathmatch with a bayonet attached, causing his classmates '''to give him looks of curiousity.''' 

-- Though it's grammatical correct it doesn't seem like the natural language. How about to give him "curious looks" instead ?
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Gazing upwards, he could not believe what he has seen. '''A scene that makes people suspect hallucinations'''

- Alternative 1:" A suspicious scene ..."

- Alternative 2: "A scene makes people suspicious. 

To make some suspect is the same as making them suspicious or doubtful.
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'''Title of number one,''' shifted from swords to spells, and then it changed again to guns.

- The bold part of the sentence makes no sense to me. Maybe it could be "titled one after another...". I know that its somehow suppose to represent the shifting of era between guns and speells(magic). Also should spells be magic instead? What do you think?
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Make the changes then please~, if i feel something is off i'll just revert it, appreciate it a lot, thanks! Currently busy looking for missing raw pages and working on uploading the illustrations. --[[User:Krytyk|Krytyk]] ([[User talk:Krytyk|talk]]) 04:31, 4 December 2013 (CST)

Understood I will make the changes. Thanks again! [[User:Tasear|Tasear]]

==Grammar Notes==
=== Word "I"===
- It should always be capitalized when it's a single word. 

Example 1: I like dogs.

Example 2: I traveled to the moon. 

Example 3: James and I will go to store tomorrow.

===Forty vs. fourty===

Its a common grammar mistake. There is no such word as fourty. 

[http://grammarist.com/spelling/forty-fourty/ forty vs fourty]

==Comments==

Thanks for working on this translation! I look forward to seeing your progress. Also best luck from your first fan!

So I thought about it and I should share with you this e-book. I use the newer version of this book to check my papers or essays. Don't worry to much about the knowledge in the book since I am your first editor and fan. 

[http://www.bartleby.com/141/strunk.html The Elements of Style ]