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− | That "let's" is not in the origin, but from the flow of the conversation, Ichika is inviting Houki, that's why I add the "let's". The "together" on the other hand is in the original sentence, but I guess using we should already cover the "together" so that can be removed. |
+ | That "let's" is not in the origin, but from the flow of the conversation, Ichika is inviting Houki, that's why I add the "let's". The "together" on the other hand is in the original sentence, but I guess using we should already cover the "together" so that can be removed. --[[User:Kuroi shinigami|[[User:Kuroi shinigami|Kuroi shinigami]]]] 06:28, 19 February 2011 (UTC) |
==Diction&word choice== |
==Diction&word choice== |