Editing Talk:Kino no Tabi:Volume4

Congratulations on the completion of volume 4 ^^.

Now that I go and see the whole volume, I notice something in the Illustration Page: that grape illustration called page 155, shouldn't it be an illustration that is put at the end of the chapter "Grapes" -On Duty-? Why is it the next illustration of "Land of Acknowledgement"?

And this volume has some in-between illustrations in the chapter "Solo" and chapter "The Country Tower". I think we should know where exactly they are put in the original novel, so that we can decide the order of the chapters' content and the illustrations.

[[User:BloodyKitty|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty|talk]]) 11:35, 26 August 2012 (CDT)

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User753, as usual, the full text page is much appreciated... :D

Thank you, BloodyKitty. Ah, that's right.... 0_0 The 'grapes' should obviously be after the chapter 'grapes'. I was careless again... hehe I'll make the necessary changes. Thanks for pointing that out! ^_^

Yeah, I think I'll insert some hidden comments in the chapters to point out where the pictures should go.
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Sorry for the late reply.<Br/>
Thank you for the help BloodyKitty-san.<Br/>
And thank you for the pointer Ella-san, it's really helpful.

Btw, about reference #9;regarding 'hovee', I just realized that it's a nickname for 'hovercraft'. Mind if I change the pdf version footnote regarding that?

... Pdf version... Oh, I almost forgot. The pdf will be uploaded as soon as the rechecking and bookmarking finished.-/-[[User:User753|User753]]-[[User talk:User753|Talk]]- 00:09, 28 August 2012 (CDT)

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Don't worry about it, no one's in a rush :)
Yes, it is short for hovercraft or hover vehicle. You can change it ^_^
Thank you! I'll be looking forward to it... XD

[[User:Ella.servantes|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes|talk]]) 00:43, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
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Thank you for the wait. Here's the [http://www.mediafire.com/?w42s90j0i8eyhct link], please check it.-/-[[User:User753|User753]]-[[User talk:User753|Talk]]- 01:34, 28 August 2012 (CDT)

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Fast... 0_0

Here's my comments:

- page numbers<br/>
- quote page should be after table of contents<br/>
- Chapter 7 does not have headers<br/>
- the text for Chapters 5,6,7,8,9,10,11 and epilogue used older versions of the text (they're not yet proofread)<br/>

Uhmm... I don't know if it's intentional, but why is it that your name in the credits page has a smaller font size? :O

[[User:Ella.servantes|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes|talk]]) 02:24, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
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Uhm, I don't think you should put my name in the credits page. I did not correct any mistakes in any chapters, I did not do any change to the pictures, I did not make the pdf, I only give you guys some small suggestions. Putting my name there makes me feel kinda ashamed. [[User:BloodyKitty|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty|talk]]) 04:56, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
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To BloddyKitty-san: Why is that? You did and still are helping us my friend. Suggestion is also a way of editing. Although I admit that putting my name on the credit list is still quite embarrassing. <!--Oh, and to Ella:Is it that obvious? Well, I did reduce the font a little for some reasons.-->

I almost forgot, [http://www.mediafire.com/?a34t7r12lt0wl4i here] is the revised version. Please check it. Hopefully I don't forget anything this time (luckily my body parts are not detachable, otherwise I'll literally left out my nose or ears somewhere).-/-[[User:User753|User753]]-[[User talk:User753|Talk]]- 07:45, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
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If you guys are fine with that, then so be it. I still feel embarrassed though, so in free time I'm going to edit grammars and vocabulary in some chapters.

To Ella-san: Just for my own curiosity, which chapters are you going to translate next? I guess you're going to complete volume 3, right?
[[User:BloodyKitty|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty|talk]]) 08:42, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
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 To Ella-san: Just for my own curiosity, which chapters are you going to translate next? I guess you're going to complete volume 3, right?
 [[User:BloodyKitty|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty|talk]]) 08:42, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
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-Ok, the pdf's good to go... ^_^<br/
-<!--User753, I only noticed now because it was right below BloodyKitty's name, and so the difference is easier to see-->
-@User753 If that were the case, you'll see human body parts scattered everywhere...LOL
-@BloodyKitty If it were not so unreasonable (and if it were possible), I would put all the names of the people who support this project in the credits page. <!--Though I do understand we didn't ask your permission...oops-->Thank you for the help!
-Uhm, actually, I'm going to alternately translate the remaining chapters in volumes 2,3, and 5 (which are ALL included in the anime and are all long chapters) with shorter chapters from volumes 7,8, and 9. So I'll take a breather next week and do a short chapter from volume 7 then probably get volume 3 over with the week after (Though my decisions are as random as the weather, so even that's not certain)