Editing Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 10 Chapter 8
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So, who's Ashe? and it was expected? those are some expectations, unless I'm misinterpreting things. [[User:SonodaYuki|SonodaYuki]] ([[User talk:SonodaYuki|talk]]) 19:42, 18 October 2013 (CDT) |
So, who's Ashe? and it was expected? those are some expectations, unless I'm misinterpreting things. [[User:SonodaYuki|SonodaYuki]] ([[User talk:SonodaYuki|talk]]) 19:42, 18 October 2013 (CDT) |
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| − | :Fairly sure from looking at the passage that the word should be 'she' (referring to Shizuku), with 'A' inserted as a typo. I can't tell whether 'she' or 'her' or either is most grammatically corrected, so I've opted for the smallest change and removed the 'A'. -[[User:Multipartite|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite|talk]]) 13:36, 19 October 2013 (CDT) |
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'Ara, Erika. You’re not with Yoshida-kun?'--even if there's a 'ja nai ka' in there (to indicate surprise), a different wording may express the meaning more clearly, given that Yoshida (Mikihiko) is in fact arriving with her. Ah, and 'That was' afterwards should perhaps be 'That's' for 'That is'. In any case, very happy to be able to read further in this series! -[[User:Multipartite|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite|talk]]) 13:13, 19 October 2013 (CDT) |
'Ara, Erika. You’re not with Yoshida-kun?'--even if there's a 'ja nai ka' in there (to indicate surprise), a different wording may express the meaning more clearly, given that Yoshida (Mikihiko) is in fact arriving with her. Ah, and 'That was' afterwards should perhaps be 'That's' for 'That is'. In any case, very happy to be able to read further in this series! -[[User:Multipartite|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite|talk]]) 13:13, 19 October 2013 (CDT) |
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