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"I can’t even say it’s unlikely I wouldn’t be killed by him" - that line doesn't make sense given the context. --[[Special:Contributions/192.5.215.218|192.5.215.218]] 02:38, 4 April 2013 (CDT) |
"I can’t even say it’s unlikely I wouldn’t be killed by him" - that line doesn't make sense given the context. --[[Special:Contributions/192.5.215.218|192.5.215.218]] 02:38, 4 April 2013 (CDT) |
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− | (Agreement with the above; perhaps 'I can’t even say it's unlikely I'd be killed by him'. For a different (and more minor |
+ | (Agreement with the above; perhaps 'I can’t even say it's unlikely I'd be killed by him'. For a different (and more minor suggestion), perhaps change "However for the events...Okinawa', can only be" to "However, for the events...Okinawa' can only be".) |
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((For my main reaction: So much squeeing! The Yotsuba specialties are the sorts of power I've longed for in the past. The declaration of (and reason for) Miyuki's future position is also wonderful and laugh-inducing. It's slightly concerning that the decision hasn't been cemented as fact for the rest of the family, since unexpected things can happen--but since we readers care more about the siblings than about the rest of the family, that maybe doesn't need to overly bother us.)) -[[User:Multipartite|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite|talk]]) 04:32, 4 April 2013 (CDT) |
((For my main reaction: So much squeeing! The Yotsuba specialties are the sorts of power I've longed for in the past. The declaration of (and reason for) Miyuki's future position is also wonderful and laugh-inducing. It's slightly concerning that the decision hasn't been cemented as fact for the rest of the family, since unexpected things can happen--but since we readers care more about the siblings than about the rest of the family, that maybe doesn't need to overly bother us.)) -[[User:Multipartite|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite|talk]]) 04:32, 4 April 2013 (CDT) |