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Shouldnt that be stations? --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 02:53, 2 December 2011 (CST) |
Shouldnt that be stations? --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 02:53, 2 December 2011 (CST) |
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− | Thanks for the edits Dell, though I rolled back some of the changes. |
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− | -"last month" vs. "previous month": Since the novel is in past tense, not present, "last month" feels incorrect to me since the whole thing takes place some indefinite time ago. Previous month is a month before whatever that indefinite time is. However, I'm not absolutely sure about this; if I'm wrong, please tell me. |
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− | -"was easy" vs. "lacked difficulty": Sakaki explicitly states that Tatsue talks pretentiously (I think that line was slightly mistranslated though), so using more "sophisticated language" even when it impedes conversational flow seems appropriate for her. |
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− | -Didn't change this one, but what was the point of adding "sort of" in front of inhuman preparation? It doesn't seem to me as if one is better than the other. |
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− | -"common sense or beliefs" vs. "common sense or belief" The phrase right before this is "This kind of", which is singular as opposed to "These kinds of", so "beliefs" is incorrect. Also, we're only talking about one belief here: that crime results in punishment. |
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− | On the bus thing: The Chinese seemed to be talking about a type of bus that I don't know about. But since "stages" doesn't make any sense to me, I'll go with stations. [[User:Cakemanofdoom|Cakemanofdoom]] 21:53, 3 December 2011 (CST) |