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*Indeed: 幸せそうな思い出し笑い - He smiles as if he's thinking (back) on / recalling something pleasant. If it sounds awkward it can be changed to: "... but now you seem to smile, ''as if you're'' thinking of something pleasant." but I didn't want to make the sentence too long. |
*Indeed: 幸せそうな思い出し笑い - He smiles as if he's thinking (back) on / recalling something pleasant. If it sounds awkward it can be changed to: "... but now you seem to smile, ''as if you're'' thinking of something pleasant." but I didn't want to make the sentence too long. |
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Going through the newer section; found a few minor mistakes that I'll fix, and a few suggestions as well. |
Going through the newer section; found a few minor mistakes that I'll fix, and a few suggestions as well. |