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== Grammar == |
== Grammar == |
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'''Orginal''' |
'''Orginal''' |
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“Although, because you ended up one point away from victory, I suffered a heavy loss.” |
“Although, because you ended up one point away from victory, I suffered a heavy loss.” |
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“Since you ended up one point away from victory, I suffered a heavy loss.” |
“Since you ended up one point away from victory, I suffered a heavy loss.” |
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− | This is a sentence fragment because of the use of "because". I believe using the word "since" preserves the meaning of the context and is grammatic correct. |