Editing Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume2 Prologue Draft


Really edited allot. Not expecting much to get in since I have some ways to go. Also, there are other better editors out there. But, I do hope you will give me comments as to errors or improvements (if you have the time). Thanks. - [[User:Rukiabankai|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai|talk]]) 09:20, 30 May 2013 (CDT)

It's all right, I'm not really the guy to comment on your English. This is also open to all other editors to just try anything. If you find that a line can be rewritten, go ahead. I'll be reviewing all the drafts on the 28th June. Note that normal edits can still be done at the main version and these drafts are aimed for a more aggressive change, which I would have rejected as part of the main version. On that note, I have one request for all you editors, don't remove stuff, rephrase it, make a new line or something, be creative. Don't just delete it just because it doesn't flow. --[[User:KuroiHikari|KuroiHikari]] ([[User_talk:KuroiHikari|Talk]] | ) 08:40, 31 May 2013 (CDT)
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	Really edited allot. Not expecting much to get in since I have some ways to go. Also, there are other better editors out there. But, I do hope you will give me comments as to errors or improvements (if you have the time). Thanks. - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 09:20, 30 May 2013 (CDT)		Really edited allot. Not expecting much to get in since I have some ways to go. Also, there are other better editors out there. But, I do hope you will give me comments as to errors or improvements (if you have the time). Thanks. - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 09:20, 30 May 2013 (CDT)

−	It's all right, I'm not really the guy to comment on your English. This is also open to all other editors to just try anything. If you find that a line can be rewritten, go ahead. I'll be reviewing all the drafts on the 28th June. Note that normal edits can still be done at the main version and these drafts are aimed for a more aggressive change, which I would have rejected as part of the main version. On that note, I have one request for all you editors, don't remove stuff. ~~Rephrase~~ it, make a new line or something, be creative. Don't just delete it just because it doesn't flow. --[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] ([[User_talk:KuroiHikari\|Talk]] \| ) 08:40, 31 May 2013 (CDT)	+	It's all right, I'm not really the guy to comment on your English. This is also open to all other editors to just try anything. If you find that a line can be rewritten, go ahead. I'll be reviewing all the drafts on the 28th June. Note that normal edits can still be done at the main version and these drafts are aimed for a more aggressive change, which I would have rejected as part of the main version. On that note, I have one request for all you editors, don't remove stuff, rephrase it, make a new line or something, be creative. Don't just delete it just because it doesn't flow. --[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] ([[User_talk:KuroiHikari\|Talk]] \| ) 08:40, 31 May 2013 (CDT)