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'irritating smell'... 'easily consume my life'... *very curious* |
'irritating smell'... 'easily consume my life'... *very curious* |
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− | Tenses need to be sorted here: |
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− | "To me it doesn't look like he had a goal. It looked like he has just been playing with us." <-- this is definitely incorrect. Tenses are mixed up. |
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− | "To me it '''doesn't''' look like he '''has''' a goal. It '''looks''' like he '''has''' just been playing with us." |
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− | "To me it '''didn't''' look like he '''had''' a goal. It '''looked''' like he '''had''' just been playing with us." |
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− | "To me it '''doesn't''' look like he '''had''' a goal. It '''looks''' like he '''had''' just been playing with us." |
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− | Also, perhaps the second 'like' should be replaced with 'as though'. [[User:MatrixM|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM|talk]]) 15:24, 16 July 2013 (CDT) |