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I plan to have Firo manage the front, while I watch over the stock.
 
I plan to have Firo manage the front, while I watch over the stock.
   
I also plan to sell medicines made by Kiel (with Raphtalia’s help).
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I also plan to sell medicines made by Kiel (with Rafatalia’s help).
   
   
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“Yeah, your business smile isn’t as good as Raphtalia’s, but some people might find your clumsy, awkward display to be a turn-on.” (Naofumi)
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“Yeah, your business smile isn’t as good as Rafatalia’s, but some people might find your clumsy, awkward display to be a turn-on.” (Naofumi)
   
 
“Is that supposed to be a compliment?” (Kiel)
 
“Is that supposed to be a compliment?” (Kiel)
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Yes. Clumsy, innocent characters seem to have a healing effect on people. This holds true in any world.
 
Yes. Clumsy, innocent characters seem to have a healing effect on people. This holds true in any world.
   
Raphtalia and Firo are also doing well. It seems that I will be making quite a bit of profit from this enterprise.
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Rafatalia and Firo are also doing well. It seems that I will be making quite a bit of profit from this enterprise.
   
 
Our sales are quite steady.
 
Our sales are quite steady.
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The Slave Dealer goes into his carriage, and out come about 10 people. They are all shaking in fear.
 
The Slave Dealer goes into his carriage, and out come about 10 people. They are all shaking in fear.
   
Raphtalia looks through them for people she knows.
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Rafatalia looks through them for people she knows.
   
 
She talks to them in the same way that she talked to Kiel.
 
She talks to them in the same way that she talked to Kiel.
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“There are 3 children here that I don’t know.” (Raphtalia)
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“There are 3 children here that I don’t know.” (Rafatalia)
   
 
“Hmm? Did I make a mistake?” (Slave Dealer)
 
“Hmm? Did I make a mistake?” (Slave Dealer)
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“Are you alright?” (Raphtalia)
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“Are you alright?” (Rafatalia)
   
   
Raphtalia, Firo, Rishia, Kiel, and the other slaves comfort the shaking new recruits.
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Rafatalia, Firo, Rishia, Kiel, and the other slaves comfort the shaking new recruits.
   
   
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Now, excluding Raphtalia and Rishia, the village has a total of 18 slaves.
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Now, excluding Rafatalia and Rishia, the village has a total of 18 slaves.
   
 
Including monsters, I have amassed quite a few members.
 
Including monsters, I have amassed quite a few members.

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