Editing Tenkyou no Alderamin:Volume 1 Chapter 1

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:"I didn’t know you took my behavior as an omen. ...More importantly, Yatori, it’s that girl."
 
:"I didn’t know you took my behavior as an omen. ...More importantly, Yatori, it’s that girl."
   
When Yatori, hearing that, followed Ikta’s line of sight, caught sight of the young girl they came across in front of their cabin a while ago. The girl was on the deck, trying to board a lifeboat. The trembling of her thin shoulders was perceptible even at a distance.
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When Yatori, hearing that, followed Ikta’s line of sight, the circumstances of the young girl, who they came across a while ago in front of their cabin, on the deck trying to board a lifeboat entered her eyes. The trembling of her thin shoulders was perceptible even with a distant view.
   
 
It didn’t seem the girl was at any age to travel alone, but she couldn’t see the figure of another companion.
 
It didn’t seem the girl was at any age to travel alone, but she couldn’t see the figure of another companion.

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