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“Mmm- aww, they didn’t let us destroy them…”
 
“Mmm- aww, they didn’t let us destroy them…”
   
Watching the enemy disappear into the trees, Ikta lightly scratched the back of his head.
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Watching the enemy’s backs disappear into the trees, Ikta lightly scratched the back of his head.
   
 
“Knowing Yatori, I did think that she might break through, you see. First Lieutenant Sushuraf’s shot which created the opening- now that was a bit unfair, no? Well, we have Torway on our side, so let’s call it even, shall we?”
 
“Knowing Yatori, I did think that she might break through, you see. First Lieutenant Sushuraf’s shot which created the opening- now that was a bit unfair, no? Well, we have Torway on our side, so let’s call it even, shall we?”
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What am I going to do if this fails?- entirely not worrying about that before he spoke was one of Ikta’s amazing points. And strangely, the jokes he told in extreme situations were able to calm people’s hearts.
 
What am I going to do if this fails?- entirely not worrying about that before he spoke was one of Ikta’s amazing points. And strangely, the jokes he told in extreme situations were able to calm people’s hearts.
   
“…Haha… Th-the red, is fine, but… I can’t stand, reeking of metal from head to toe…”
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“…Haha…Th-the red, is fine, but… I can’t stand, reeking of metal from head to toe…”
   
 
“Reek of metal? No~, that has nothing to do with being red. That’s because you’re holding those hunks of metal in both your hands.”
 
“Reek of metal? No~, that has nothing to do with being red. That’s because you’re holding those hunks of metal in both your hands.”
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Not caring that she was covered in blood as he held and supported her, the youth murmured as if he were disgusted.
 
Not caring that she was covered in blood as he held and supported her, the youth murmured as if he were disgusted.
   
“You always work too hard, you know. I tell you to be more relaxed about things, but you really don’t listen, do you?”
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“You always work too hard, you know. I tell you to be more relaxed about things, but you really don’t listen, do you?”
   
 
Entrusting her to the soldiers, Ikta turned a second time to the center of sea of blood. The princess, hugging her knees, hoped he would talk to her, but his goal was elsewhere.
 
Entrusting her to the soldiers, Ikta turned a second time to the center of sea of blood. The princess, hugging her knees, hoped he would talk to her, but his goal was elsewhere.
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