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But so what?
 
But so what?
   
If the paths have been paved for me, I won't be able to reach the place I want to reach.
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If the paths have been paved for me, I won't be able to reach the place i want to reach.
   
 
Today, I'm going to pursue the matter,
 
Today, I'm going to pursue the matter,
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Once I was done walking down the large carriage, I reach the deck where the toilet and washroom were.
 
Once I was done walking down the large carriage, I reach the deck where the toilet and washroom were.
   
It was here where I once committed a sin.
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It was here when I once committed a sin.
   
 
That thereafter, the person I wanted to kill saved me.
 
That thereafter, the person I wanted to kill saved me.
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Soon after, a middle-aged male conductor came to check the tickets, and I showed two.
 
Soon after, a middle-aged male conductor came to check the tickets, and I showed two.
   
Sensei did not return in a while, but he could not have hopped out from the moving train, so I could deal with waiting for minutes, dozens even. There's two and a hour hours until the destination.
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Sensei did not return in a while, but he could not have hoped out from the moving train, so I could deal with waiting for minutes, dozens even. There's two and a hour hours until the destination.
   
 
I guess the call was from the editor. No way was I ridiculous enough to disturb others at work all because I had something important to discuss.
 
I guess the call was from the editor. No way was I ridiculous enough to disturb others at work all because I had something important to discuss.
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And I remained seated by the side.
 
And I remained seated by the side.
   
Sometimes, I would glance to the side, and see the words on the screen accelerate at an astounding rate, but I never read it.
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Sometimes, I would glance to the side, and see the words on the screen accelerate at an astounding rate, but I never rad it.
   
 
This time, I bought some consomme flavored chips, but I could not hand them to him in this situation.
 
This time, I bought some consomme flavored chips, but I could not hand them to him in this situation.

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