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She held a remote in her dominate hand, but she moved her other hand’s fingers like she was operating an invisible marionette. Even she was confused by how smoothly her fingers moved independently of each other.
 
She held a remote in her dominate hand, but she moved her other hand’s fingers like she was operating an invisible marionette. Even she was confused by how smoothly her fingers moved independently of each other.
   
However, the weapon itself had been partially reduced to scrap.
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However, the weapon itself had been partially reduce to scraps.
   
It could not take flight at full speed with her in its grasp. At most, it could run along the ground while dragging its bent and smashed form around. That would be like asking to be shot by Anna.
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It could not take flight at full speed with her in its grasp. At most, it could run along the ground by dragging its bent and smashed form around. That would be like asking to be shot by Anna.
   
 
(Which means…)
 
(Which means…)
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“…”
 
“…”
   
She leaned back against the nearly-scrapped machine and looked up into the white sky as if trying to free herself from her human heart.
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She leaned back against the scrapped machine and looked up into the white sky as if trying to free herself from her human heart.
   
 
The Queen of Tokiwadai took a slow, deep breath.
 
The Queen of Tokiwadai took a slow, deep breath.
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She sounded amused.
 
She sounded amused.
   
A moment later, ''the half-destroyed Five Over, Model Case: Mental Out charged straight at Miss Sprengel.''
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A moment later, ''the half-destroyed Five Over, Model Case: Mental Out charged straight at Miss Sprengel.
   
 
“Tch!! I can’t believe this!!” shouted Shokuhou Misaki as she more jumped than ran.
 
“Tch!! I can’t believe this!!” shouted Shokuhou Misaki as she more jumped than ran.
   
She heard a crash even worse than from a car accident, but that mass of several tons was meaningless against the small body of what looked like a ten-year-old.
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She heard a crash even worse than from a car accident, but that mass of several tons was meaningless against the small body of what looked like a 10-year-old.
   
 
Light erupted out and it was blown away like melted cheese in a single second.
 
Light erupted out and it was blown away like melted cheese in a single second.
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Shokuhou’s Mental Out would not reach the #3’s brain without Mikoto’s acceptance, but she knew it would give the girl a powerful headache.
 
Shokuhou’s Mental Out would not reach the #3’s brain without Mikoto’s acceptance, but she knew it would give the girl a powerful headache.
   
''What if she could shake Mikoto’s mind enough to wake her up?''
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''What if she could shake Mikoto’s mind enough to wake her up?
   
 
She had no guarantee this would work.
 
She had no guarantee this would work.
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She had poured all her strength into Mental Out, yet failed to shake Misaka Mikoto awake.
 
She had poured all her strength into Mental Out, yet failed to shake Misaka Mikoto awake.
   
''Or had she?''
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''Or had she?
   
 
“Ah…kh.”
 
“Ah…kh.”
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A foot was pressing down on Misaka Mikoto’s head, but her eyelids cracked open. She could not do anything, but she did turn her eyes toward where Shokuhou Misaki lay collapsed on the ground too.
 
A foot was pressing down on Misaka Mikoto’s head, but her eyelids cracked open. She could not do anything, but she did turn her eyes toward where Shokuhou Misaki lay collapsed on the ground too.
   
“Run… get out of here. Hurry.”
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“Run…get out of here. Hurry.”
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
   
“You’re supposed to be the black-hearted Queen who runs off and gets that idiot out of the hospital, right? Then stop getting all hot-blooded. You need to abandon me here. Go and figure out a way to steal the vaccine or antidote by controlling a more useful esper than me. Weren't those the roles we agreed to here?”
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“You’re supposed to be the black-hearted Queen who runs off and gets that idiot out of the hospital, right? Then stop getting all hot-blooded. You need to abandon me here. Go and figure out a way to steal the vaccine or antidote by controlling a more useful esper than me. Wasn’t that the jobs we agreed to here?”
   
 
The straining sound grew louder.
 
The straining sound grew louder.
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She crawled toward Misaka Mikoto.
 
She crawled toward Misaka Mikoto.
   
“I’m not… doing that, Misaka-saaan.”
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“I’m not…doing that, Misaka-saaan.”
   
 
It pissed her off that Mikoto did not understand something so simple. They never did seem able to see eye to eye, not even when they were saying much the same thing.
 
It pissed her off that Mikoto did not understand something so simple. They never did seem able to see eye to eye, not even when they were saying much the same thing.
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She crawled and crawled and crawled.
 
She crawled and crawled and crawled.
   
And she grabbed at Anna Sprengel’s leg. Anna had the small body of a ten-year-old, but she was as solid as a boring machine.
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And she grabbed at Anna Sprengel’s leg. Anna had the small body of a 10-year-old, but she was as solid as a boring machine.
   
 
“Now, now,” said Anna. “This isn’t like you at all. Aren’t you supposed to be more like me?”
 
“Now, now,” said Anna. “This isn’t like you at all. Aren’t you supposed to be more like me?”
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She found she could still move.
 
She found she could still move.
   
“And I will never do anything that makes him cry. He saved my life, so I will protect the world that lets him live with a smile on his face. That is my number one rule and it trumps issues of good and evil!!!!!!”
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“And I will never do anything that makes him cry. He saved my life, so I will protect the world that lets him live with a smile on his face. That is my #1 rule and it trumps issues of good and evil!!!!!!”
   
 
But the Queen of Tokiwadai did not think she could move Anna a single millimeter.
 
But the Queen of Tokiwadai did not think she could move Anna a single millimeter.
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No pain, regulated breathing, emergency consumption of the body’s water and fat reserves, elimination of the physical restrictions brought on by fear, cutting the muscles’ limiters, repeated experiences of success, expanded processing power for the senses, temporary memory enhancements and increased memory analysis.
 
No pain, regulated breathing, emergency consumption of the body’s water and fat reserves, elimination of the physical restrictions brought on by fear, cutting the muscles’ limiters, repeated experiences of success, expanded processing power for the senses, temporary memory enhancements and increased memory analysis.
   
The remote filled Misaka Mikoto’s brain with all the errors of brain science, like the enhanced strength, slow motion, out of body experiences, and life flashing before your eyes during a near-death experience.
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The remote filled Misaka Mikoto’s brain with all the errors of brain science, like the enhanced strength, slow motion, out of body experience, and life flashing before your eyes experienced during a near-death experience.
   
 
Shokuhou did not command her to perform any specific actions.
 
Shokuhou did not command her to perform any specific actions.
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“You strayed.” Anna spoke like she was watching some fools struggling with all their might to survive in a blizzard but actually only wandering around in circles. “Be it chess or horse-racing, the most important thing when it comes to winning a game is to stick with a single strategy. You will only lose focus if you change strategies whenever you start to lose. That will not lead to an unexpected come-from-behind win. It will only accelerate your very predictable path toward failure.”
 
“You strayed.” Anna spoke like she was watching some fools struggling with all their might to survive in a blizzard but actually only wandering around in circles. “Be it chess or horse-racing, the most important thing when it comes to winning a game is to stick with a single strategy. You will only lose focus if you change strategies whenever you start to lose. That will not lead to an unexpected come-from-behind win. It will only accelerate your very predictable path toward failure.”
   
“You… wouldn’t understand,” said Shokuhou Misaki like she was uttering a curse.
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“You…wouldn’t understand,” said Shokuhou Misaki like she was uttering a curse.
   
 
She was more caught on that young leg than clinging to it anymore. Like a dry leaf caught on your coat or skirt on a winter day.
 
She was more caught on that young leg than clinging to it anymore. Like a dry leaf caught on your coat or skirt on a winter day.
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A dull thud followed.
 
A dull thud followed.
   
That foot looked like it belonged to a small child, yet Shokuhou flew through the air when kicked like a soccer ball. If not for the special suit, her organs or spine might have ruptured or broken. The honey-blonde girl rolled along the ground and then gasped for a reason other than the pain or lack of oxygen.
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That foot looked like it belonged to a small child, yet Shokuhou flew through the air when it kicked her like a soccer ball. If not for the special suit, her organs or spine might have ruptured or broken. The honey-blonde girl rolled along the ground and then gasped for a reason other than the pain or lack of oxygen.
   
 
The goal was right there.
 
The goal was right there.
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This was the result.
 
This was the result.
   
''And yet.''
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''And yet.
   
 
Who was the first to notice something was not right?
 
Who was the first to notice something was not right?
   
Was it Shokuhou Misaki, Misaka Mikoto… or Anna Sprengel?
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Was it Shokuhou Misaki, Misaka Mikoto…or Anna Sprengel?
   
 
The predicted blow never arrived.
 
The predicted blow never arrived.
   
The girl who looked no more than ten had looked to the side with her small leg still raised.
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The girl who looked no more than 10 had looked to the side with her small leg still raised.
   
 
But that was not how it was supposed to work.
 
But that was not how it was supposed to work.

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