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For example, the industrial parking lot that had been used to bring in musical instruments and training equipment. Places like that were often tucked away in some hidden location so fans could not wait there to catch players or celebrities as they left.
 
For example, the industrial parking lot that had been used to bring in musical instruments and training equipment. Places like that were often tucked away in some hidden location so fans could not wait there to catch players or celebrities as they left.
   
Once the semi-trucks came to a stop, boisterous voices could be heard from inside the containers.
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Once the semi trucks came to a stop, boisterous voices could be heard from inside the containers.
   
The door opened to reveal children around the age of ten.
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The door opened to reveal children around the age of 10.
   
 
They were commonly known as Child Errors. Those were the children that had been abandoned in Academy City for whatever reason and had to be raised by the city. That alone was not that unusual, but they rarely had a happy ending when the dark side was involved. Especially when it came to illicit research.
 
They were commonly known as Child Errors. Those were the children that had been abandoned in Academy City for whatever reason and had to be raised by the city. That alone was not that unusual, but they rarely had a happy ending when the dark side was involved. Especially when it came to illicit research.
   
But the children did not question any of it. Not even that they all wore short-sleeved gym clothes, with motion capture equipment on their arms and legs and around their necks.
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But the children did not question it. Not even that they all wore short-sleeved gym clothes and they wore motion capture equipment on their arms and legs and around their necks.
   
 
“Now, now, children.”
 
“Now, now, children.”
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Even this country had the stories of the Yonaki Ishi and the Kosodate Yurei.
 
Even this country had the stories of the Yonaki Ishi and the Kosodate Yurei.
   
They had several large semi-trucks, but one of them was by far the children’s favorite: the one fully remodeled into a food truck.
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They had several large semi trucks, but one of them was by far the children’s favorite: the one fully remodeled into a food truck.
   
 
Frillsand #G passed directly through the stainless steel wall to peek inside, where she found the young man named Drencher Kihara Repatri dripping with sweat while stirring the contents of an enormous pot. The inside of the truck might as well have been a sauna.
 
Frillsand #G passed directly through the stainless steel wall to peek inside, where she found the young man named Drencher Kihara Repatri dripping with sweat while stirring the contents of an enormous pot. The inside of the truck might as well have been a sauna.
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“That is unsanitary.”
 
“That is unsanitary.”
   
“Pant, gasp. D-do you have any idea how many burners I have on? Preparing enough food for more than fifty is like fighting a war. School lunch ladies deserve a medal.”
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“Pant, gasp. D-do you have any idea how many burners I have on? Preparing enough food for more than 50 is like fighting a war. School lunch ladies deserve a medal.”
   
 
“If you wanted help, you should have made it so I could hold things.”
 
“If you wanted help, you should have made it so I could hold things.”

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