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“S-someone help! I’m being mugged! Ah, how do you say it in English!? U-um…Help!! Pinch!! I’m in a pinch here!!”
 
“S-someone help! I’m being mugged! Ah, how do you say it in English!? U-um…Help!! Pinch!! I’m in a pinch here!!”
   
“Hey, I said I’d kill you if you yelled, didn’t I!? Dammit…just shut your mou—ow!! Don’t bite me! Don’t bite me, you stupid bitch!!”
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“Hey, I said I’d kill you if you yelled, didn’t I!? Dammit…just shut your mou-…ow!! Don’t bite me! Don’t bite me, you stupid bitch!!”
   
 
The brown girl looked around the area as she desperately tried to cover up Saten’s mouth again. When she did, that mouth closed on her hand like a bear trap. After being bit two or three times, it must have pissed her off because she grabbed some white sand and thrust it into Saten’s mouth.
 
The brown girl looked around the area as she desperately tried to cover up Saten’s mouth again. When she did, that mouth closed on her hand like a bear trap. After being bit two or three times, it must have pissed her off because she grabbed some white sand and thrust it into Saten’s mouth.
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“…You seem to be mistaken about something. Having the swimsuit does nothing more than make it ''easier'' for me to blend in with the crowd. If I wanted to, I could secretly move from cover to cover and chase you down. I would just prefer a safer plan that is a little less risky.”
 
“…You seem to be mistaken about something. Having the swimsuit does nothing more than make it ''easier'' for me to blend in with the crowd. If I wanted to, I could secretly move from cover to cover and chase you down. I would just prefer a safer plan that is a little less risky.”
   
“Fwa ha ha! Do you really think I’m going to remain silent after hearing something as dangerous as tha—fgh!?”
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“Fwa ha ha! Do you really think I’m going to remain silent after hearing something as dangerous as tha-…fgh!?”
   
 
Saten’s words were cut off because Xochitl had pulled something from her pocket and shoved it up Saten’s nose. An extremely unpleasant sensation moved its way up her nose.
 
Saten’s words were cut off because Xochitl had pulled something from her pocket and shoved it up Saten’s nose. An extremely unpleasant sensation moved its way up her nose.
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Xochitl looked down at her knife made of obsidian and sighed. If it came down to fighting the officials, she needed to be prepared, but just as she was about to focus on that…
 
Xochitl looked down at her knife made of obsidian and sighed. If it came down to fighting the officials, she needed to be prepared, but just as she was about to focus on that…
   
“Hey, have you been waiting, little kitty? Saten-san is back with a swimsuit for yo—gfh!?”
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“Hey, have you been waiting, little kitty? Saten-san is back with a swimsuit for yo-…gfh!?”
   
 
The idiot was back, so Xochitl covered her mouth and pulled her into the thicket.
 
The idiot was back, so Xochitl covered her mouth and pulled her into the thicket.
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With another explosive noise something fluttered through the sky. Looking up, it looked like a small fragment of something, but it was actually a large fighter over 20 meters long and it came crashing into the beach. The sound of steam came from that fighter that was one of the ships used by the Laveze Squadron. The pilot must have ejected because the glass canopy covering the cockpit was gone.
 
With another explosive noise something fluttered through the sky. Looking up, it looked like a small fragment of something, but it was actually a large fighter over 20 meters long and it came crashing into the beach. The sound of steam came from that fighter that was one of the ships used by the Laveze Squadron. The pilot must have ejected because the glass canopy covering the cockpit was gone.
   
“Wha—Eh…Th-this is…?”
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“Wha-…Eh…Th-this is…?”
   
 
Saten did not have time to be surprised or to think that it was just a show.
 
Saten did not have time to be surprised or to think that it was just a show.

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