Editing Toaru Majutsu no Index:Volume SP Chapter1

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And there he found the traitor that the Anglican Church had mentioned.
 
And there he found the traitor that the Anglican Church had mentioned.
   
It was not a large man who was lying in wait for him and who looked used to fighting. Nor was it someone with a cunning-looking face who looked as if he could deal with any situation.
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I was not a large man who was lying in wait for him and who looked used to fighting. Nor was it someone with a cunning-looking face who looked as if he could deal with any situation.
   
 
It was a small girl who looked to be around 12.
 
It was a small girl who looked to be around 12.
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But it did not assault Stiyl Magnus.
 
But it did not assault Stiyl Magnus.
   
The crimson flames roared as they consumed oxygen and wrapped around Richard Brave’s right arm.
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The crimson flames roared as they consumed oxygen and they wrapped around Richard Brave’s right arm.
   
 
“Wha-…?”
 
“Wha-…?”

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