Editing Tomoyo After:SEEN0629
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+ | **Read through lines 0001-0100 and made some edits so the translation sounds smoother. There was one line in the beginning of the H scene that said "the" palms and I have to ask-whose palms? If it's literal translation, can a translator assign it to one of them because it sounds awkward leaving it as is. |
โ | A translator still needs to go through lines 0156-0279 and 0324-0479 please. |
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*[[user:AbstractBlueSky|AbstractBlueSky]] |
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