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***Astro Boy is known as "Mighty Atom"(鉄腕アトム) in Japan. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Astro_Boy] |
***Astro Boy is known as "Mighty Atom"(鉄腕アトム) in Japan. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Astro_Boy] |
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**I made a few grammatical changes and smoothed out the English while keeping context of the Japanese culture. Also, the use of "dude" to refer to someone sounds unusual... |
**I made a few grammatical changes and smoothed out the English while keeping context of the Japanese culture. Also, the use of "dude" to refer to someone sounds unusual... |
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