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Holding the latest, massive, plenty-to-read issue of 'Ma' (which is actually called 'Margaret', a smiling face of the main series' heroine on a pink background stuck on the cover) under my arm, I carefully opened the door to my childhood friend's room.
 
Holding the latest, massive, plenty-to-read issue of 'Ma' (which is actually called 'Margaret', a smiling face of the main series' heroine on a pink background stuck on the cover) under my arm, I carefully opened the door to my childhood friend's room.
   
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There was no answer, so I closed the door causing the air in the dark room to stir. The gust of wind on the tip of my nose felt lukewarm. Deeper inside my childhood friend's room, with a folded towel placed over her forehead, there was a mound, silently lying and breathing on the bed.
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The was no answer, so I closed the door causing the air in the dark room to stir. The gust of wind on the tip of my nose felt lukewarm. Deeper inside my childhood friend's room, with a folded towel placed over her forehead, there was a mound, silently lying and breathing on the bed.
   
 
Convinced by that silence, I carefully turned my head and quietly whispered to Auntie, with whom I had come up here,
 
Convinced by that silence, I carefully turned my head and quietly whispered to Auntie, with whom I had come up here,
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"It's just that I can't quite distinguish dream from reality... Mo-om, Ya-chan needs water..."
 
"It's just that I can't quite distinguish dream from reality... Mo-om, Ya-chan needs water..."
   
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"Sure, sure," Auntie said and headed down to the kitchen on the first floor, leaving me behind in the middle of the stairs. Turning back and looking up at Yasuko, I stood there, uncertain of what to do.
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"Sure, sure," the Auntie said and headed down to the kitchen on the first floor, leaving me behind in the middle of the stairs. Turning back and looking up at Yasuko, I stood there, uncertain of what to do.
   
 
Go home, maybe.
 
Go home, maybe.

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