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As for my own environment, I noticed that the girls in my class have started to do make-up about the time when we entered high school.
 
As for my own environment, I noticed that the girls in my class have started to do make-up about the time when we entered high school.
   
But not only at make-up are the girls ahead of us guys, but also when it comes to clothes and stylish haircuts. They must be more sensitive to fashion than us<!-- or we -->.
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But not only make-up are the girls ahead of us guys, but also when it comes to clothes and stylish haircuts. They must be more sensitive to fashion.
   
There ''are'' fashionable guys here and there as well, but that's the minority. It tends to be acceptable for men to be indifferent about this sort of thing.<!-- awk? --> Not that I want to claim that I'm the standard, but it's a fact that I couldn't care less about fashion.
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There ''are'' fashionable guys here and there as well, but that's the minority. It tends to be acceptable for men to be indifferent about this sort of thing. Not that I want to claim that I'm the standard, but it's a fact that I still don't care about fashion even in the slightest.
   
 
I suppose girls read magazines to get better in this field? But I don't believe that just doing that would do.
 
I suppose girls read magazines to get better in this field? But I don't believe that just doing that would do.
   
Which means that they must ask their friends or their mothers for advise on make-up and fashion.
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Which means that they must ask their friends or their mother for advise on make-up and fashion.
   
But girls who do not have any friends and parents are at a disadvantage in that case.
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But the girls without friends and parents are at a disadvantage in that case.
   
Mm? Who I'm referring to, you ask?
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Mm? Who I'm referring to?
   
Nah, I'm not thinking of someone in specific of course.
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No, I'm not thinking about someone in specific of course.
   
   

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