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To delay Bahamut from noticing us for as long as possible, Marduk descended from maximum altitude to stay as close to the frozen sea surface as was feasible.
 
To delay Bahamut from noticing us for as long as possible, Marduk descended from maximum altitude to stay as close to the frozen sea surface as was feasible.
   
A roughly ten-kilometer-wide black line was carved on the plain of ice. This was Bahamut's flight trail. While Bahamut flew, its shadow formed an unknown territory that was eating away at the Earth's surface.
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A roughly ten-kilometer-wide black line was carved on the plain of ice. These was Bahamut's flight trail. While Bahamut flew, its shadow formed an unknown territory that was eating away at the Earth's surface.
   
 
Even Marduk's radar was unable to read anything from the black line.
 
Even Marduk's radar was unable to read anything from the black line.
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'Indeed. The Atlantean weapons equipped on the ''Naglfar'' and the cooling projectiles used by the fleet must have been effective to some extent. Since Bahamut saw NIFL as an enemy, one could say that the operation is proceeding smoothly. We will be able to launch a heavy assault from behind with ease.'
 
'Indeed. The Atlantean weapons equipped on the ''Naglfar'' and the cooling projectiles used by the fleet must have been effective to some extent. Since Bahamut saw NIFL as an enemy, one could say that the operation is proceeding smoothly. We will be able to launch a heavy assault from behind with ease.'
   
"Yeah—But don't be careless, everyone. Tell me immediately if it shows signs of intercepting us. Iris, how much close do we need to approach for you to get into range?"
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"Yeah—But don't be careless, everyone. Tell me immmediately if it shows signs of intercepting us. Iris, how much close do we need to approach for you to get into range?"
   
 
While I was issuing orders to Jeanne, I asked Iris.
 
While I was issuing orders to Jeanne, I asked Iris.
   
"Umm... It's different from before, I no longer send out Catastrophe in a 'zap!' ...Since I'll be using dark matter to transmute from Bahamut's surroundings, distance won't matter much. Although we're still far away, I can aim as long as I can see clearly."
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"Umm... It's different from before, I no longer send out Catastrophe in a 'zap!' ...Since I'll be using dark matter to transmute from Bahamut's surroundings, distance won't matter much. Although we're still far away, I an aim as long as I can see clearly."
   
 
"Really? Then your range might be even longer than before. If that's the case, we can launch the attack first without worrying too much."
 
"Really? Then your range might be even longer than before. If that's the case, we can launch the attack first without worrying too much."
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Just as Iris was about to continue what she was saying, Jeanne's voice interrupted.
 
Just as Iris was about to continue what she was saying, Jeanne's voice interrupted.
   
'Bahamut is about to shoot something from its back! Quantity is twenty. Aimed at us!'
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'Bahamut is about to shoots something from its back! Quantity is twenty. Aimed at us!'
   
 
I looked up to see multiple small shadows fly through the red light and rise into the sky.
 
I looked up to see multiple small shadows fly through the red light and rise into the sky.
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But without giving us any time to catch our breath, Jeanne called out urgently again.
 
But without giving us any time to catch our breath, Jeanne called out urgently again.
   
'Bahamut is starting to turn, apparently intending to escape Catastrophe! If Bahamut faces us squarely, there is a high probability we will be exposed to a heat beam!'
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'Bahamut starting to turn, apparently intending to escape Catastrophe! If Bahamut faces us squarely, there is a high probability we will be exposed to a heat beam!'
   
I looked in the direction the ship was advancing. Indeed, Bahamut was slowly turning.
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I looked in the direction the ship was advancing. Indeed, Bahamut was slowing turning.
   
 
Although Iris was trying hard, the red light had become even fainter than before. In light of that, I made decision.
 
Although Iris was trying hard, the red light had become even fainter than before. In light of that, I made decision.

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