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Clear blue skies. A navy-blue sea. A white beach. Coconut trees in the breeze. This tropical island scene was like a drawing.
 
Clear blue skies. A navy-blue sea. A white beach. Coconut trees in the breeze. This tropical island scene was like a drawing.
   
Because it was too hot, I took off my long-sleeved jacket, leaving just a shirt, then looked out to sea.
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Because it was too hot, I took off my long-sleeved jacket, leaving just a shirt, and then looked out to the sea.
   
 
"Am I dreaming...?"
 
"Am I dreaming...?"
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BOOM!!
 
BOOM!!
   
The expected explosion arrived, but it happened under the girl's feet instead.
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An unexpected explosion happened under the girl's feet instead.
   
 
"Kyahhhhhhhhh..."
 
"Kyahhhhhhhhh..."
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Later on, the international organization Asgard, established specifically to handle dragons, announced that the gigantic creature was very likely the same type as "the enveloper" Vritra recorded in ancient Indian scripture.
 
Later on, the international organization Asgard, established specifically to handle dragons, announced that the gigantic creature was very likely the same type as "the enveloper" Vritra recorded in ancient Indian scripture.
   
Although Asgard had not publicized evidence to support this assertion, on grounds of confidentiality, thereafter, the first dragon came to be known as the black dragon—"Black" Vritra.
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Although Asgard had not publicized evidence to support this assertion, on grounds of confidentiality, thereafter, the first dragon came to be known as the black dragon—"Black Vritra".
   
Ever since, people possessing the same power as Vritra—the ability to generate dark matter—began to be born among humans. These superpowered children were called Ds, or Type Dragon. Currently, they were all gathered at a certain place to be managed and protected.
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Ever since, people possessing the same power as Vritra — the ability to generate dark matter — began to be born among humans. These superpowered children were called Ds, or Type Dragon. Currently, they were all gathered at a certain place to be managed and protected.
   
And this place was my current location—Midgard.
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And this place was my current location — Midgard.
   
 
A small remote island, several kilometers in diameter, far south of Japan. Remodeled thoroughly from a formerly uninhabited island, it was rebuilt as an educational institute.
 
A small remote island, several kilometers in diameter, far south of Japan. Remodeled thoroughly from a formerly uninhabited island, it was rebuilt as an educational institute.
   
The island was surrounded by the autonomous concentric defense system named Midgardsormr, which would mercilessly eliminate all unauthorized ships and aircraft.
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The island is surrounded by the autonomous concentric defense system named Midgardsormr, which would mercilessly eliminate all unauthorized ships and aircraft.
   
 
I was redeployed to somewhere like this, simply because of a reassignment order.
 
I was redeployed to somewhere like this, simply because of a reassignment order.
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However, those Ds, originally children, grew up as time passed. They began to petition for their rights as humans, hence continuing to rule over them became difficult.
 
However, those Ds, originally children, grew up as time passed. They began to petition for their rights as humans, hence continuing to rule over them became difficult.
   
After that, a D was also born among the daughters of a wealthy and ancient royal family, hence this served as the trigger for Midgard to acquire the right to autonomy all at once.
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After that, a D was also born among the daughters of a wealthy and ancient royal family, this served as the trigger for Midgard to acquire the right to autonomy all at once.
   
 
"Yes, then what are Midgard's current activities?"
 
"Yes, then what are Midgard's current activities?"
   
"Cultivating the Ds' powers in directions beneficial to society and educating them, devoting efforts towards the production of rare resources, as well as training them as trump cards to deploy in battles against dragons."
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"Cultivating the D's powers in directions beneficial to society and educating them, devoting efforts towards the production of rare resources, as well as training them as trump cards to deploy in battles against dragons."
   
 
Ds had become essential to modern industries.
 
Ds had become essential to modern industries.

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