Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 1 Chapter 1

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"...Huh?"
 
"...Huh?"
   
"I already gave you my name. I'd appreciate it if you could introduce yourself too."
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"I have already given you my name. I'd appreciate it if you could introduce yourself too."
   
 
After I urged her, the girl finally spoke despite her hesitation.
 
After I urged her, the girl finally spoke despite her hesitation.
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"Mitsuki... You've been searching for me the whole time?"
 
"Mitsuki... You've been searching for me the whole time?"
   
"Yes, I was so surprised to find you absent when I first arrived at Midgard. It felt very odd that you were not here despite being taken away before me, so thereafter, I have been searching for you."
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"Yes, I was so surprised not to see you here when I first arrived at Midgard. It felt very odd that you were not here despite being taken away before me, so thereafter, I have been searching for you."
   
 
Despite Mitsuki's explanation, I still felt a bit worried.
 
Despite Mitsuki's explanation, I still felt a bit worried.

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