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"In the case of transmutation, roughly ten kilograms after conversion. That's my limit."
 
"In the case of transmutation, roughly ten kilograms after conversion. That's my limit."
   
"T-Ten kilograms!? Are you using the wrong unit!? Ignoring issues of control, every D without exception can make at least ten tons, you know?"
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"T-Ten kilograms!? Are you using the wrong unit!? Ignoring issues of control, every D without exception can make at least ten tons, you know/"
   
 
"Kilogram is the right unit. Do you wanna have a look at my dragon mark? The size of a dragon mark will change according to the ability to generate dark matter. After seeing it, you'll understand the gap between us."
 
"Kilogram is the right unit. Do you wanna have a look at my dragon mark? The size of a dragon mark will change according to the ability to generate dark matter. After seeing it, you'll understand the gap between us."
   
With self-deprecation, I showed her the back of my left hand.
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With self-deprecation, I showed her the back of left hand.
   
 
"Eh? Where is it?"
 
"Eh? Where is it?"
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Ren glared at me a little uneasily.
 
Ren glared at me a little uneasily.
   
"...You're right, you didn't call for me, but there shouldn't be any problem with chatting, right? Eh? There's something on your face."
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"...You're, you didn't call for me, but there shouldn't be any problem with chatting, right? Eh? There's something on your face."
   
 
I reached out and took off the bread crumb stuck on Ren's cheek.
 
I reached out and took off the bread crumb stuck on Ren's cheek.
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I interrupted Lisa.
 
I interrupted Lisa.
   
"Eh... Could it be a transmutation of even greater difficulty? That would be even more impossible!"
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"Eh... Could it be a transmutation of a higher difficulty? That would be even more impossible!"
   
 
"Okay, just watch. You'll surely be surprised."
 
"Okay, just watch. You'll surely be surprised."
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During this past year, Iris had always been treated as a poorly performing student. I could not imagine what it felt like. Despite a strong will to keep trying, her power did not reach standards. This chagrin was something only Iris herself could understand.
 
During this past year, Iris had always been treated as a poorly performing student. I could not imagine what it felt like. Despite a strong will to keep trying, her power did not reach standards. This chagrin was something only Iris herself could understand.
   
However, the emotional stress accumulated would be quite heavy.
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However, the emotional stress accumulated was probably quite heavy.
   
 
—Anyway, I'll just wait until her emotions calm down.
 
—Anyway, I'll just wait until her emotions calm down.

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